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Dec. 22, 2022

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Strategies to Improve your Well Being

Hello, everyone! I hope you're well. :)

Today I want to give you some strategies to improve your well being effectively.
I've learned these strategies in podcast, books, and apps. Use and try those that works for you.

Identify
Consciousness is the first step to solve a problem.
Have you ever tried to solve something without knowing clearly what is this about? Tricky, right? The same happens to emotions: we need to know what we are feeling in order to know how to respond assertively to them.
The first step to improve your well being is to name your emotions. Ask yourself: how do I feel in this moment?

Accept
It's important to remember that any emotion has its own purpose, for example, sadness might be a reminder that you need to change something in your life.
Try to accept your emotions without judgement, no matter how god or bad they are.

Giving it Enough Time
It's said that time heals all wounds and it's true.
Think about a hard situation you're experiencing in this moment and take a pause. Imagine how would you feel about this situation in one day, in one week, in one month, and in one year. Can you see how your emotions change? What would you think about this situation five years later?

Taking a Break
Mindfullness is about being conscious in the present moment and, sometimes, there are a lot of things to do (especially in these days near to Christmas) so it's common to start multitasking.

A simple way to solve this is to take a pause and go slow, for example, when taking coffee, drink it slowly.
The simple act of going slow makes you feel like everything is ok, so make sure to use this method.

Use your Senses
We have incredible and powerful senses! Why dont use them to improve our well being?
Just close your eyes and notice what are you hearing: is there any noise? do you hear animals? Do you hear voices?
What do you smell? Do you have any taste in your mouth? What do you see around you?

Have a nice day!

Corrections

Strategies to Improve yYour Well -Being

I hope you're all well.

Today I want to give you some strategies to improve your well being effectively.

I've learned these strategies infrom podcasts, books, and apps.

Use and(I encourage you all to) try those that works for you.

Have you ever tried to solve something without knowing clearlyclearly knowing what is tht is about?

The same happens to emotions: w. We need to know what we are feeling in order to know how to respond assertively respond to them.

Ask yourself: hHow do I feel in this moment?

It's important to remember that any emotion has its own purpose, f. For example, sadness might be a reminder that you need to change something in your life.

Try to accept your emotions without judgement, no matter how good or bad they are.

It's said that time heals all wounds, and it's true.

Think about a hard situation you're experiencing in this moment, and take a pause.

Imagine how you would you feel about this situation in one day, in one week, in one month, and in one year.

What would you think about this situation five years laterfrom now?

Mindfullness is about being conscious in the present moment and, s. Sometimes, there are a lot of things to do, (especially in these days near to Christmas), so it's common to start multitasking.

A simple way to solve this is to take a pausemoment and go slow, f. For example, when tadrinking coffee, drink it slowly.

The simple act of going slowly makes you feel like everything is ok, so make sure to usetry this method.

Alternatively: "can be assuring" instead of "makes you feel like everything is okay"

Use yYour Senses

Why dont't we use them to improve our well being?

Just close your eyes and notice what are youyou are hearing: i. Is there any noise?

dDo you hear animals?

Do you havtaste any tastething in your mouth?

Feedback

This was really well written, with just minor corrections on how to make things sound more natural! I loved reading it.

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BlackGlasses

Dec. 29, 2022

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I'm grateful for your corrections. Thank you so much!

Strategies to Improve your Well Being

Hello, everyone!

I hope you' all are well.

'you're' is short for 'you are', if you put that into your original statement 'I hope you are well', it sounds like you are talking to one person when clearly you are talking to 'everyone',

:)

Today I want to give you some strategies to effectively improve your well being effectively.

ackwardly worded

I've learned these strategies in podcast, books, and apps.

Use and try those that works for you.

No need to pluralize work.

Identify

Consciousness is the first step to solve a problem.

Have you ever tried to solve something without knowing clearlyclearly knowing what is tht is about?

Tricky, right?

The same happens to emotions: we need to know what we are feeling in order to know how to respond assertively respond to them.

Just like the struggle I have with Spanish, you put adjectives behind the noun. In English, we almost always put the adjective in front of the noun

The first step to improve your well being is to nameidentify your emotions.

Just sounds better

Ask yourself: how do I feel in this moment?

Accept

It's important to remember that any emotion has its own purpose, for example, sadness might be a reminder that you need to change something in your life.

Try to accept your emotions without judgement, no matter how good or bad they are.

Giving it Enough Time

It's said that time heals all wounds and it's true.

Think about a hard situation you're experiencing in this moment and take a pausepause for a moment.

Imagine how you would you feel about this situation in one day, in one week, in one month, and in one year.

Can you see how your emotions change?

What would you think about this situation five years laterfrom now?

Taking a Break

Mindfullness is about being conscious in the present moment and, sometimes, there are a lot of things to do (especially in these days near to Christmas) so it's common to start multitasking.

Typically English writers don't put a comma behind 'and'

A simple way to solve this is to take a pause and go slow, for example, when tadrinking coffee, drink it slowly.

ackwardly worded

The simple act of going slow makes you feel like everything is ok, so make sure to use this method.

'so be sure to use this method' or 'so make sure you try this method'. In order to make 'to use' sound proper here, use correction one, or change your wording with correction 2.

Use your Senses

We have incredible and powerful senses!

Why donot use them to improve our well being?

'Dont' is spelled 'don't', using 'not' instead of don't just sounds better, you could also add 'don't you' and that would be fine too.

Just close your eyes and notice what are youyou are hearing: is there any noise?

do you hear animals?

Do you hear voices?

What do you smell?

Do you havtaste any tastething in your mouth?

What do you see around you?

Have a nice day!

Feedback

I still want to do corrections for you in Spanish. This was too long for me today as I was short on time.
Todavia quiero hacer coreccions para te en espanol. Esta demasiado largo para mi hoy porque no tiempo sufiente.

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BlackGlasses

Dec. 24, 2022

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Thank you so much! I wouldn't notice my adverb order mistake without your help.

Todavía quiero corregirte en español. Esto fue demasiado largo para mí con el poco tiempo que tenía.* I hope this correction doesn't come off as rude. I want to help you to improve your Spanish. :)

I've learned these strategies inthrough podcasts, books, and apps.

"in" is correct, but "through" sounds more natural

Use and try thosTry them out and find one that works for you.

A more natural way of saying what you mean.

Consciousness is the first step to solveing a problem.

Have you ever tried to solve something without knowing clearly what is tht is about?

Try to accept your emotions without judgement, no matter how good or bad they are.

It's said that time heals all wounds, and it's true.

Mindfullness is about being conscious in the present moment and, sometimes, there are a lot of things to do (especially in these days near toright before Christmas) so it's common to start multitasking.

A simple way to solve this is to take a pause and go slow, f. For example, when taking coffee, drink it slowly.

Why dont't we use them to improve our well being?

dDo you hear animals?

Do you havtaste any tastething in your mouth?

"Do you have any taste in your mouth?" means "did you lose your sense of taste"?

Feedback

Very well written, almost no errors, well done! Very good advice as well

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BlackGlasses

Dec. 22, 2022

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Do you havtaste any tastething in your mouth?

Oh haha 😂 I didn't know. Thanks!

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BlackGlasses

Dec. 22, 2022

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Thank you so much!
Hace a nice day.

It's said that time heals all wounds and it's true.


It's said that time heals all wounds, and it's true.

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It's said that time heals all wounds, and it's true.

Strategies to Improve your Well Being


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Strategies to Improve yYour Well -Being

Hello, everyone!


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I hope you're well.


I hope you' all are well.

'you're' is short for 'you are', if you put that into your original statement 'I hope you are well', it sounds like you are talking to one person when clearly you are talking to 'everyone',

I hope you're all well.

:)


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Today I want to give you some strategies to improve your well being effectively.


Today I want to give you some strategies to effectively improve your well being effectively.

ackwardly worded

Today I want to give you some strategies to improve your well being effectively.

I've learned these strategies in podcast, books, and apps.


I've learned these strategies inthrough podcasts, books, and apps.

"in" is correct, but "through" sounds more natural

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I've learned these strategies infrom podcasts, books, and apps.

Use and try those that works for you.


Use and try thosTry them out and find one that works for you.

A more natural way of saying what you mean.

Use and try those that works for you.

No need to pluralize work.

Use and(I encourage you all to) try those that works for you.

Identify


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Consciousness is the first step to solve a problem.


Consciousness is the first step to solveing a problem.

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Have you ever tried to solve something without knowing clearly what is this about?


Have you ever tried to solve something without knowing clearly what is tht is about?

Have you ever tried to solve something without knowing clearlyclearly knowing what is tht is about?

Have you ever tried to solve something without knowing clearlyclearly knowing what is tht is about?

Tricky, right?


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The same happens to emotions: we need to know what we are feeling in order to know how to respond assertively to them.


The same happens to emotions: we need to know what we are feeling in order to know how to respond assertively respond to them.

Just like the struggle I have with Spanish, you put adjectives behind the noun. In English, we almost always put the adjective in front of the noun

The same happens to emotions: w. We need to know what we are feeling in order to know how to respond assertively respond to them.

The first step to improve your well being is to name your emotions.


The first step to improve your well being is to nameidentify your emotions.

Just sounds better

Ask yourself: how do I feel in this moment?


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Ask yourself: hHow do I feel in this moment?

Accept


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It's important to remember that any emotion has its own purpose, for example, sadness might be a reminder that you need to change something in your life.


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It's important to remember that any emotion has its own purpose, f. For example, sadness might be a reminder that you need to change something in your life.

Try to accept your emotions without judgement, no matter how god or bad they are.


Try to accept your emotions without judgement, no matter how good or bad they are.

Try to accept your emotions without judgement, no matter how good or bad they are.

Try to accept your emotions without judgement, no matter how good or bad they are.

Giving it Enough Time


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Think about a hard situation you're experiencing in this moment and take a pause.


Think about a hard situation you're experiencing in this moment and take a pausepause for a moment.

Think about a hard situation you're experiencing in this moment, and take a pause.

Imagine how would you feel about this situation in one day, in one week, in one month, and in one year.


Imagine how you would you feel about this situation in one day, in one week, in one month, and in one year.

Imagine how you would you feel about this situation in one day, in one week, in one month, and in one year.

Can you see how your emotions change?


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What would you think about this situation five years later?


What would you think about this situation five years laterfrom now?

What would you think about this situation five years laterfrom now?

Taking a Break


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Mindfullness is about being conscious in the present moment and, sometimes, there are a lot of things to do (especially in these days near to Christmas) so it's common to start multitasking.


Mindfullness is about being conscious in the present moment and, sometimes, there are a lot of things to do (especially in these days near toright before Christmas) so it's common to start multitasking.

Mindfullness is about being conscious in the present moment and, sometimes, there are a lot of things to do (especially in these days near to Christmas) so it's common to start multitasking.

Typically English writers don't put a comma behind 'and'

Mindfullness is about being conscious in the present moment and, s. Sometimes, there are a lot of things to do, (especially in these days near to Christmas), so it's common to start multitasking.

A simple way to solve this is to take a pause and go slow, for example, when taking coffee, drink it slowly.


A simple way to solve this is to take a pause and go slow, f. For example, when taking coffee, drink it slowly.

A simple way to solve this is to take a pause and go slow, for example, when tadrinking coffee, drink it slowly.

ackwardly worded

A simple way to solve this is to take a pausemoment and go slow, f. For example, when tadrinking coffee, drink it slowly.

The simple act of going slow makes you feel like everything is ok, so make sure to use this method.


The simple act of going slow makes you feel like everything is ok, so make sure to use this method.

'so be sure to use this method' or 'so make sure you try this method'. In order to make 'to use' sound proper here, use correction one, or change your wording with correction 2.

The simple act of going slowly makes you feel like everything is ok, so make sure to usetry this method.

Alternatively: "can be assuring" instead of "makes you feel like everything is okay"

Use your Senses


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Use yYour Senses

We have incredible and powerful senses!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Why dont use them to improve our well being?


Why dont't we use them to improve our well being?

Why donot use them to improve our well being?

'Dont' is spelled 'don't', using 'not' instead of don't just sounds better, you could also add 'don't you' and that would be fine too.

Why dont't we use them to improve our well being?

Just close your eyes and notice what are you hearing: is there any noise?


Just close your eyes and notice what are youyou are hearing: is there any noise?

Just close your eyes and notice what are youyou are hearing: i. Is there any noise?

do you hear animals?


dDo you hear animals?

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dDo you hear animals?

Do you hear voices?


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What do you smell?


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Do you have any taste in your mouth?


Do you havtaste any tastething in your mouth?

"Do you have any taste in your mouth?" means "did you lose your sense of taste"?

Do you havtaste any tastething in your mouth?

Do you havtaste any tastething in your mouth?

What do you see around you?


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Have a nice day!


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