yesterday
Story of Ratnag part-9
After killing King Akram, Layla also killed all the family members of Akram and started his ritual on their dead bodies, with the help of his mother Kamli, who was a very powerful witch.
During the ritual, Kamli started to feel that something was going wrong, so she stopped the ritual and said to Layla, “I think something is wrong. The ritual process is having some issues.”
Layla said, “What are you saying, mother? I have done everything the right way!”
Kamli replied, “How can you be sure that there's no issue in the ritual? Look at our goddess statue her eyes are becoming red. I think our goddess is not happy.”
Then, the goddess appeared in front of Layla and Kamli. The goddess said, “Are you both fools?”
Layla asked, “What happened? Did we do something wrong in the ritual?!”
The goddess replied, “No. You did the ritual very perfectly. But Akram and his brothers whose blood you served me are not royal blood!”
Kamli said, “What? How is it possible?”
The goddess said, “King Akram and his brothers do not belong to this royal family. He is the son of a minister. The previous king of Ratnag, Abhay, has only one daughter. She is the only royal blood. You must serve her blood to me so that the ritual can be completed.”
Layla asked, “But goddess, where is King Abhay’s daughter now? What is her name?”
The goddess replied, “Her name is Annu, and she lives in the East Gurukul.”
After killing King Akram, Layla also killed all the family members of Akram and starwent on to eliminated his ritual on their dead bodies,entire family. Together with the help of his mother Kamli, who was a verya powerful witch, they began a ritual on the dead.
During the ritual, Kamli started to feel that something was going wrong, so she stopped the ritual and said to Layla, “I think something is wrong.
The word “ritual” has been repeated too many times.
The ritual process is having some issuesSomething is wrong with the magic.”
¶
¶
Layla said, “What are you saying, mother?
Switching up the words a bit.
I have done everything the right way!” Kamli replied, “How can you be sure that there's no issue in the ritual?
Look at our goddess statue her eyes are becoming red.
I think our goddess is not happy.” Then, the goddess appeared in front of Layla and Kamli.
The goddess said, “Are you both fools?” Layla asked, “What happened?
Did we do something wrong in the ritual?
!” The goddess replied, “No.
But Akram and his brothers whose blood you served me are not royal blood!”
¶
Kamli saiexclaimed, “What?
Just a bit more emotion instead of “said”
How is it possible?” The goddess said, “King Akram and his brothers do not belong to this royal family.
He is the son of a minister.
The previous king of Ratnag, Abhay, has only one daughter.
She is the only royal blood.
You must serve her blood to me so that the ritual can be completed.” Layla asked, “But goddess, where is King Abhay’s daughter now?
What is her name?” The goddess replied, “Her name is Annu, and she lives in the East Gurukul.”
Feedback
Loving your story! Keep it up!! 👍🏼
|
Story of Ratnag part-9 |
|
After killing King Akram, Layla also killed all the family members of Akram and started his ritual on their dead bodies, with the help of his mother Kamli, who was a very powerful witch. After killing King Akram, Layla |
|
During the ritual, Kamli started to feel that something was going wrong, so she stopped the ritual and said to Layla, “I think something is wrong. During the ritual, Kamli started to feel that something was going wrong, so she stopped The word “ritual” has been repeated too many times. |
|
The ritual process is having some issues.” Layla said, “What are you saying, mother?
Switching up the words a bit. |
|
I have done everything the right way!” Kamli replied, “How can you be sure that there's no issue in the ritual? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Look at our goddess statue her eyes are becoming red. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I think our goddess is not happy.” Then, the goddess appeared in front of Layla and Kamli. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
The goddess said, “Are you both fools?” Layla asked, “What happened? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Did we do something wrong in the ritual? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
!” The goddess replied, “No. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
You did the ritual very perfectly. |
|
But Akram and his brothers whose blood you served me are not royal blood!” Kamli said, “What? But Akram and his brothers whose blood you served me are not royal blood!” Just a bit more emotion instead of “said” |
|
How is it possible?” The goddess said, “King Akram and his brothers do not belong to this royal family. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
He is the son of a minister. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
The previous king of Ratnag, Abhay, has only one daughter. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
She is the only royal blood. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
You must serve her blood to me so that the ritual can be completed.” Layla asked, “But goddess, where is King Abhay’s daughter now? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
What is her name?” The goddess replied, “Her name is Annu, and she lives in the East Gurukul.” This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium