Kindred Spirit

Aug. 19, 2025

Story of Ratnag Part 21

After following the footprints, Alok and Anna reached the riverside. The footprints disappeared, as if the person had gone into the river.
Then Alok said, “How do we find the person in the river? His blood and footprints have vanished!”
Anna, with a distressed expression, replied, “I… I don’t know what to do.”
Suddenly, they heard a very painful noise — the scream of a human crying for help. They quickly followed the sound to rescue the person.
When they reached the place and saw the situation, they were shocked. In a frightened voice, Alok said, “Oh my God! A person is sucking blood from the neck of another human! Is it a vampire? We should help the person!”
Anna whispered, “Stay quiet! You can’t defeat that creature. Anyone who sucks blood isn’t vampire… I think it’s the same jackal , whom you kill in the jungle.”
Alok, angrily, replied, “Then what should we do? Can’t you see the person being attacked is almost dead?”
Anna answered, “The person is already dead. We need to hide behind the tree and wait to verify if it is the same Jackal or something else .”

@story
Corrections

Story of Ratnag Part 21

After following the footprints, Alok and Anna reached the riverside.

The footprints disappeared, as if the person had gone into the river.

Then Alok said, “How do we find the person in the river?

His blood and footprints have vanished!” Anna, with a distressed expression, replied, “I… I don’t know what to do.” Suddenly, they heard a very painful noise — the scream of a human crying for help.

They quickly followed the sound to rescue the person.

When they reached the place and saw the situation, they were shocked.

In a frightened voice, Alok said, “Oh my God!

A person is sucking blood from the neck of another human!

Is it a vampire?

We should help the person!” Anna whispered, “Stay quiet!

You can’t defeat that creature.

Anyone who sucks blood isn’t vampire… I think it’s the same jackal , whom you kill in the jungle.” Alok, angrily, replied, “Then what should we do?

Can’t you see the person being attacked is almost dead?” Anna answered, “The person is already dead.

We need to hide behind the tree and wait to verify if it is the same Jackal or something else .”

Feedback

Nice.

We need to hide behind the tree and wait to verify if it is the same Jackal or something else .”


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Anyone who sucks blood isn’t vampire… I think it’s the same jackal , whom you kill in the jungle.” Alex, angrily, replied, “Then what should we do?


Story of Ratnag Part 21


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After following the footprints, Alok and Anna reached the riverside.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The footprints disappeared, as if the person had gone into the river.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Is it a vampire?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

His blood and footprints have vanished!” Anna, with a distressed expression, replied, “I… I don’t know what to do.” Suddenly, they heard a very painful noise — the scream of a human crying for help.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They quickly followed the sound to rescue the person.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When they reached the place and saw the situation, they were shocked.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In a frightened voice, Alok said, “Oh my God!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A person is sucking blood from the neck of another human!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We should help the person!” Anna whispered, “Stay quiet!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You can’t defeat that creature.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Anyone who sucks blood isn’t vampire… I think it’s the same jackal , whom you kill in the jungle.” Alok, angrily, replied, “Then what should we do?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Can’t you see the person being attacked is almost dead?” Anna answered, “The person is already dead.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Then Alok said, “How do we find the person in the river?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.

Go Premium