Aug. 15, 2025
Story of Ratnag part 17
When the lady regained consciousness, she saw that she was lying on a bed, surrounded by some machines which were connected to her. Seeing these things, she became confused.
A lady came closer to her and said, “Miss, you have several injuries, you need to take rest.”
The injured lady asked, “Can I ask you something?”
The other lady replied, “Of course, why not?”
The injured lady then asked, “Where am I? Who brought me here?”
The lady answered, “You are in the hospital. Mr. Alok brought you here. I am going to call him so that you can meet him.”
The injured lady asked, “What do you mean by ‘hospital’?”
The other lady said, “What? You don’t know the meaning of hospital? Are you from another planet? Anyway, a hospital is a place where humans with physical problems or injuries can be cured using tools and medicine.”
Then the lady went outside the room and reached the counter of the hospital, where Alok was sitting. She said, “Mr. Alok, your patient is awake. You can meet her now.”
Alok replied, “Okay, nurse. I’m going to meet her.”
When the lady regained consciousness, she saw that she was lying on a bed, surrounded by some machines which were connected to her.
Seeing these things, she became confused.
A lady came closer to her and said, “Miss, you have several injuries, you need to take rest.”
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The injured lady asked, “Can I ask you something?”
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The other lady replied, “Of course, why not?”
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The injured lady then asked, “Where am I?
Alternatively: "you need to take a rest." However, this might not be as common.
Who brought me here?” The lady answered, “You are in the hospital.
Mr. Alok brought you here.
I am going to call him so that you can meet him.” The injured lady asked, “What do you mean by ‘hospital’?” The other lady said, “What?
You don’t know the meaning of hospital?
Are you from another planet?
Anyway, a hospital is a place where humans with physical problems or injuries can be cured using tools and medicine.”
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Then the lady went outside the room and reached thewalked towards the front counter of the hospital, where Alok was sitting.
(1) While it is grammatically correct, it is not natural to use "reach" here, especially not in storytelling.
(2) I would suggest specifying which counter it is exactly.
She said, “Mr.
Alok, your patient is awake.
You can meet her now.” Alok replied, “Okay, nurse.
I’m going to meet her.”
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You don’t know the meaning of hospital? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Are you from another planet? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She said, “Mr. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Story of Ratnag part 17 |
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When the lady regained consciousness, she saw that she was lying on a bed, surrounded by some machines which were connected to her. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Seeing these things, she became confused. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A lady came closer to her and said, “Miss, you have several injuries, you need to take rest.” The injured lady asked, “Can I ask you something?” The other lady replied, “Of course, why not?” The injured lady then asked, “Where am I? A lady came closer to her and said, “Miss, you have several injuries, you need to Alternatively: "you need to take a rest." However, this might not be as common. |
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Who brought me here?” The lady answered, “You are in the hospital. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Mr. Alok brought you here. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am going to call him so that you can meet him.” The injured lady asked, “What do you mean by ‘hospital’?” The other lady said, “What? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Anyway, a hospital is a place where humans with physical problems or injuries can be cured using tools and medicine.” Then the lady went outside the room and reached the counter of the hospital, where Alok was sitting. Anyway, a hospital is a place where humans with physical problems or injuries can be cured using tools and medicine.” (1) While it is grammatically correct, it is not natural to use "reach" here, especially not in storytelling. (2) I would suggest specifying which counter it is exactly. |
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Alok, your patient is awake. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You can meet her now.” Alok replied, “Okay, nurse. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I’m going to meet her.” This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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