Aug. 13, 2025
Story of Ratnag Part 15
Then, a black shadow appeared beside Kamli and said, “Don’t worry, Mother, I’m here.”
The shadow instantly transformed into a black dragon and attacked Binayak. But Binayak easily defended himself from the strike.
The black dragon used every type of attack she knew against Binayak, but he blocked them all. Then Kamli said to the dragon, “You can’t defeat him. He’s more powerful than us, so we have to fight together.”
The dragon then used her magical power to create an illusion for Binayak. In that illusion, Binayak saw himself killing his own family. His body appeared covered in blood, and the sight made him emotional. He lost his focus and mental sharpness.
Seeing his weakened state, Kamli and the dragon decided it was the perfect time to kill him. They attacked together. Binayak was not ready for the combined assault, but with his presence of mind, he managed to defend himself and protect Kamli and his daughter.
At the same moment, the Jackal attacked Binayak from behind. This time, Binayak was caught off guard. He was badly injured and lost the use of one hand. Due to his injury, he could no longer fight properly.
Struggling to keep up, he turned to Anna and said, “Anna, I can’t handle these witches anymore. You must leave this place as quickly as possible.”
Anna asked, “Where should I go?”
Binayak replied, “Go somewhere the witches can’t easily find you.”
Using his remaining strength, Binayak created a magical portal. “This portal will teleport you into the future so the witch can’t catch you,” he said.
Anna stepped toward the portal, carrying the jar that contained the souls of Bikram and Naeena . Kamli tried to stop her but couldn’t. She also attempted to go inside the portal, but failed.
As Anna was about to disappear through the portal, the Jackal rushed in to follow her. Just before he could enter, the portal vanished—taking Anna safely into the future and leaving the Jackal behind.
Story of Ratnag Part 15
Then, a black shadow appeared beside Kamli and said, “Don’t worry, Mother, I’m here.” The shadow instantly transformed into a black dragon and attacked Binayak.
But Binayak easily defended himself from the strike.
The black dragon used every type of attack she knew against Binayak, but he blocked them all.
You can omit "type of".
Then Kamli said to the dragon, “You can’t defeat him.
He’s more powerful than us, so we have to fight together.” The dragon then used her magical power to create an illusion for Binayak.
In that illusion, Binayak saw himself killing his own family.
His body appeared covered in blood, and the sight made him emotional.
He lost his focus and mental sharpness.
Seeing his weakened state, Kamli and the dragon decided it was the perfect time to kill him.
They attacked together.
Binayak was not ready for the combined assault, but with his presence of mind, he managed to defend himself and protectfrom Kamli and hiser daughter.
(1) I was under the impression that Kamli and the dragon are Binayak's enemies, so I'm not sure why he is "protecting" them. I have deleted the phrase.
(2) I believe "Kamli" is female, so you should use "her" instead of "him".
At the sameat moment, the Jackal attacked Binayak from behind.
This time, Binayak was caught off guard.
He was badly injured and lost the use of one hand.
Due to his injury, he could no longer fight properly.
Struggling to keep up, he turned to Anna and said, “Anna, I can’t handle these witches anymore.
You must leave this place as quickly as possible.” Anna asked, “Where should I go?” Binayak replied, “Go somewhere the witches can’t easily find you.” Using his remaining strength, Binayak created a magical portal.
“This portal will teleport you into the future so the witch can’t catch you,” he said.
Anna stepped toward the portal, carrying the jar that contained the souls of Bikram and Naeena .
Kamli tried to stop her but couldn’t.
She also attempted to go inside the portal, but failed.
As Anna was about to disappear through the portal, the Jackal rushed in to follow her.
JBut just before he could enter, the portal vanished—taking Anna safely into the future and leaving the Jackal behind.
You can use "but" to better transition from the previous sentence.
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He was badly injured and lost the use of one hand. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Due to his injury, he could no longer fight properly. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Struggling to keep up, he turned to Anna and said, “Anna, I can’t handle these witches anymore. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You must leave this place as quickly as possible.” Anna asked, “Where should I go?” Binayak replied, “Go somewhere the witches can’t easily find you.” Using his remaining strength, Binayak created a magical portal. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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“This portal will teleport you into the future so the witch can’t catch you,” he said. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Anna stepped toward the portal, carrying the jar that contained the souls of Bikram and Naeena . This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Kamli tried to stop her but couldn’t. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She also attempted to go inside the portal, but failed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As Anna was about to disappear through the portal, the Jackal rushed in to follow her. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Just before he could enter, the portal vanished—taking Anna safely into the future and leaving the Jackal behind.
You can use "but" to better transition from the previous sentence. |
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Story of Ratnag Part 15 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then, a black shadow appeared beside Kamli and said, “Don’t worry, Mother, I’m here.” The shadow instantly transformed into a black dragon and attacked Binayak. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But Binayak easily defended himself from the strike. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The black dragon used every type of attack she knew against Binayak, but he blocked them all. The black dragon used every You can omit "type of". |
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Then Kamli said to the dragon, “You can’t defeat him. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He’s more powerful than us, so we have to fight together.” The dragon then used her magical power to create an illusion for Binayak. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In that illusion, Binayak saw himself killing his own family. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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His body appeared covered in blood, and the sight made him emotional. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Seeing his weakened state, Kamli and the dragon decided it was the perfect time to kill him. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They attacked together. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Binayak was not ready for the combined assault, but with his presence of mind, he managed to defend himself and protect Kamli and his daughter. Binayak was not ready for the combined assault, but with his presence of mind, he managed to defend himself (1) I was under the impression that Kamli and the dragon are Binayak's enemies, so I'm not sure why he is "protecting" them. I have deleted the phrase. (2) I believe "Kamli" is female, so you should use "her" instead of "him". |
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At the same moment, the Jackal attacked Binayak from behind. At th |
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This time, Binayak was caught off guard. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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