yesterday
I wake up in the morning, stay in bed five minutes and then I stand up and dress, eat breakfast, go in public transport to university, learn a few things, see people I don't want to see, see people I want to see, eat again, go to class and then when its five p.m I go home to eat something, study a couples minutes, and then go to sleep to other wonderful day
Me despierto en la mañana, me quedo en la cama cinco minutos y luego me levanto y me visto, como desayuno, me voy en transporte publico a mi universidad, aprendo algunas cosas, veo a gente que no quiero ver, veo gente que si quiero ver, como de nuevo, voy a class y luego cuando son las cinco p.m me voy a casa a comer algo, estudio un par de minutos y luego voy a dormir para empezar otro maravilloso día.
I wake up in the morning, stay in bed for five minutes and then I stand up and get dress,ed. I eat breakfast, go intake public transport to my university, learn a few things, see people I don't want to see, see people I want to see, eat again, go to class and then when it's five p.m
I understand your comma and comma use. I think it works well here as a stylistic choice to make the day feel long and endless.
I go home to, eat something, study for a couples minutes, and then go to sleep to end another wonderful day
I wake up in the morning, stay in bed five minutes and then I stand, get up and get dress,ed, go eat breakfast, gotravel in public transport to university, learn a few things, see people I don't want to see, see people I want to see, eat again, go to class and then, when its five p.m
I go home to eat something, study a couples minutes, and then go to sleep to 'till another wonderful day
I wake up in the morning, and stay in bed for five minutes and t. Then I stand up and dress myself, eat breakfast, go in and take public transport to university,. I learn a few things there, see people that I don't want to see, and see people I want to see,. I eat again, and go to class and then w. When it's five p.m,
I go home to eat something, study a couples minutes, and then go to sleep to before another wonderful day.
Story of my life
The literal meaning of the title is correct, but "story of my life" can be used sarcastically as a complaint. It means that you're always experiencing the same type of bad thing. For example: "Of course it rains on the one day I forget my umbrella! Story of my life." Since it's the title of your post, and I don't have any context yet, I can't tell if the meaning will be sincere or sarcastic.
When I wake up in the morning, I stay in bed for five minutes and then I stand up and dress, eat breakfast, go inbefore I get out of bed. I get dressed and eat breakfast at home, then I take public transporit to university,. I learn a few things, see people I don't want to see, see people I want to see, eat again, and go to class and then when its five. At 5 p.m.,
This sentence is a bit too long. Run-on sentences are informal, but they're also harder to read. I added a few suggested transition words. You don't need to break it up at the same places, but I think the most natural places are when there's a change in location: bed -> home -> university
I go home to eat something, study for a couples of minutes, and then go to sleep to start another wonderful day.
Similar feedback to the title: I still can't tell whether "another wonderful day" is sincere or sarcastic. Do you like your daily routine? The fact that it's all very repetitive and the fact that part of your day is "see people I don't want to see" makes me unsure. I don't mean to be critical -- it sounds like a good life to me! I just find the tone ambiguous.
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Lots of good practice with daily vocabulary! Hope you're enjoying your day :)
Story of my life Story of my life The literal meaning of the title is correct, but "story of my life" can be used sarcastically as a complaint. It means that you're always experiencing the same type of bad thing. For example: "Of course it rains on the one day I forget my umbrella! Story of my life." Since it's the title of your post, and I don't have any context yet, I can't tell if the meaning will be sincere or sarcastic. |
I wake up in the morning, stay in bed five minutes and then I stand up and dress, eat breakfast, go in public transport to university, learn a few things, see people I don't want to see, see people I want to see, eat again, go to class and then when its five p.m When I wake up in the morning, I stay in bed for five minutes This sentence is a bit too long. Run-on sentences are informal, but they're also harder to read. I added a few suggested transition words. You don't need to break it up at the same places, but I think the most natural places are when there's a change in location: bed -> home -> university I wake up in the morning I wake up in the morning, stay in bed five minutes I wake up in the morning, stay in bed for five minutes and then I stand up and get dress I understand your comma and comma use. I think it works well here as a stylistic choice to make the day feel long and endless. |
I go home to eat something, study a couples minutes, and then go to sleep to other wonderful day I go home to eat something, study for a couple Similar feedback to the title: I still can't tell whether "another wonderful day" is sincere or sarcastic. Do you like your daily routine? The fact that it's all very repetitive and the fact that part of your day is "see people I don't want to see" makes me unsure. I don't mean to be critical -- it sounds like a good life to me! I just find the tone ambiguous. I go home to eat something, study a couple I go home to eat something, study a couple I go home |
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