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EdoBona11

Aug. 19, 2025

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It’s important for small children to communicate with a mobile phone, because it is important to let him learn about digital well-being very soon. But it’s very important not to give it to him just to give him a distraction. I think the right age to have a mobile phone is ten for those things. I think that use must be checked by the parents or the siblings, I think the I think they should have the app for chats, calls, photos, writing, reading, listening to music and searching online.

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Story N°2

It’s important for small children to communicate with a mobile phone, because it is important to let him learn about digital well-being very soon.

But it’s very important not to give it to him just to give himfor a distraction.

just so it could sound more natural

I think the right age to have a mobile phone is ten for those things.

I think that use must be checked by the parents or the siblings, I think the I think they should have the app for chats, calls, photos, writing, reading, listening to music and searching online.

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I like your ideas <3

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EdoBona11

Aug. 19, 2025

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Thank you also for the ICE CREAM ---> <3

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It’s important for small children to communicate with a mobile phone, because it is important to let him learn about digital well-being very soon.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But it’s very important not to give it to him just to give him a distraction.


But it’s very important not to give it to him just to give himfor a distraction.

just so it could sound more natural

I think the right age to have a mobile phone is ten for those things.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think that use must be checked by the parents or the siblings, I think the I think they should have the app for chats, calls, photos, writing, reading, listening to music and searching online.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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