Dec. 15, 2022
Story from Moderna (1)
Moderna is a US-based pharmacy company. I came to know the company three years ago when the coronavirus outbroke. I opened my USA stock market account at that time.
I tried to trade USA stock on a platform. There were some rumors that Moderna was investing in an effective vaccine for the prevention of coronavirus which later was formally named COVID-19.
I read some news about Moderna and knew it was small but with potential. The company had been developing a new advanced mRNA vaccine for a while and probably would succeed.
I bought 50 stocks, and each stock cost me a bit under $30. To my surprise, the next day, this stock increased by nearly 20%. I couldn't believe it and said to myself: "How easy is it to earn money in the USA." I was complacent about my first investment in the US stock market.
I sold Moderna stock for less than $50 in a month, I earned a little money but I also fell into a betting pool.
Story from Moderna (1)
Moderna is a US-based pharmacy company.
I came to know the company three years ago when the coronavirus outbrokepandemic began.
I opened my USA stock market account at that time.
I tried to trade USA stock on a platform.
There were some rumors that Moderna was investing in an effective vaccine for the prevention of coronavirus which later was formally named COVID-19.
I read some newhad read news articles about Moderna and knew it was small but withhad potential.
The company had been developing a new advanced mRNA vaccine for a while and probably would succeed.
I bought 50 shares of stocks, and each stockhare cost me a bit under $30.
To my surprise, the next day, this stock increased by nearly 20%.
I couldn't believe it and said to myself:, "How easy ist its to earn money in the USA."
I was complacent about my first investment in the US stock market.
I sold the Moderna stock for less than $50 in/share after a month,. I earned a little money but I also fell into a betting pool.
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そうですね。気をつけて下さい。上手にかけています！
Story fromabout Moderna (1)
Moderna is a US-based pharmacyeutical company.
A “pharmacy company” would be a company that operates pharmacies (stores that sell prescription drugs). A pharmaceutical company manufactures drugs.
I came to know the company three years ago when the coronavirus outbroke out.
I opened my USA stock market account at that time.
I tried to trade USA (or: American) stock on a platform.
There were some rumors that Moderna was investing in an effective vaccine for the prevention of coronavirus, which later was formally named COVID-19.
I read some news about Moderna and knew / learned it was small but withhad potential.
The company had been developing a new advanced mRNA vaccine for a while and probably would succeed.
I bought 50 stocks, and each stock cost me a bit under $30.
To my surprise, the next day, this stock increased by nearly 20%.
I couldn't believe it and said to myself: "How easy ist its to earn money in the USA."
I was complacent(?) about my first investment in the US stock market.
What do you mean by “complacent”? What action or attitude did you take that you are describing as complacent?
I sold my Moderna stock for less than $50 in / after a month,. I earned a little money but I also fell into a betting pool.
“Fell into a betting pool” means you started gambling with a group of other people, placing bets on the outcome of sports games or other events. Is this what you mean? If so, how is it related to your sale of Moderna stock?
Dec. 15, 2022
I was complacent(?) about my first investment in the US stock market.
I was happy to make small money, I guess the “complacent” is a prejudiced word?
Dec. 15, 2022
I sold my Moderna stock for less than $50 in / after a month,. I earned a little money but I also fell into a betting pool.
I think the stock market like gambling, and stock traders are similar to being involved in a betting pool.
Dec. 15, 2022
I think the stock market like gambling, and stock traders are similar to being involved in a betting pool.
Ok, but that’s not what your sentence says. Instead, maybe you could say, “…but my stock trading became like a gambling habit.”
Dec. 15, 2022
I was happy to make small money, I guess the “complacent” is a prejudiced word?
Complacent means “too satisfied with yourself or with a situation, so that you do not feel that any change is necessary.” It implies that you should have changed something about your investment, but you didn’t.
Maybe you mean you were “contented” instead of “complacent.”
Dec. 16, 2022
Thank you! I guess you have been experienced as an English teacher.
Dec. 16, 2022
No, a Chinese-to-English translator. ^^
Dec. 16, 2022
Oh! That's the reason, nice to meet you here. :-)
Dec. 16, 2022
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Story from Moderna (1)
Moderna is a US-based pharmacy company.
I came to know the company three years ago | when the coronavirus outbroke out / at the start of the corona virus outbreak.
I opened my USA stock market account at that time.
I tried to trade USA stock on a platform.
There were some rumors that Moderna was investing in an effective vaccine for the prevention of coronavirus which later was formally named COVID-19.
I read some news about Moderna and knew it was small but withhad potential.
The company had been developing a new advanced mRNA vaccine for a while and probablit looked like they would succeed.
I bought 50 stocks, and each stock cost me a blittle under $30.
To my surprise, the next day, this stock increased by nearly 20%.
I couldn't believe it and said to myself: "How easy ist its to earn money in the USA."
I was complacent about my first investment in the US stock market.
I sold Moderna stock for less than $50 in a month, I earned a little money but I also fell into a betting pool.
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What an interesting experience. Very well written!
Dec. 15, 2022
Thank you very much! :-)
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