Sept. 6, 2023
Story About Tu Youyou
In 2015, Tu Youyou became a Nobel Laureate in the field of Physiology or Medicine. In today's entry, I am going to write some stories about this great scientist, however, I am not sure whether it is true or not.
In the early 2010s, some medical experts from the United Nations found that the number of malaria patients from African countries had significantly dropped. In order to find the reason, they went to Africa and learned that most of the recovered patients had used a kind of Traditional Chinese Medicine that had the same ingredient, artemisinin. Later, a scientist came to China, aiming to find out who the inventor was. There were at least five pharmaceutical factories that claimed they invented it. The scientists from the UN discovered all of them related to one person, Tu Youyou. In the end, this great scientist became known to the world. She kept silent for nearly 40 years.
Artemisinin, is also considered to have a potential effect on diabetics and asthmatics. There is also a rumor circulated on the internet in a very small area; she is missing now or controlled by xyz (country name) government because artemisinin is helpful in killing some viruses related to COVID-19.
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In the early 2010s, some medical experts from the United Nations found that the number of malaria patients from African countries had significantly dropped.
In order to find the reason, they went to Africa and learned that most of the recovered patients had used a kind of Traditional Chinese Medicine that had the same ingredient, artemisinin.
Later, a scientist came to China, aiming to find out who the inventor was.
There were at least five pharmaceutical factories that claimed they invented it.
The scientists from the UN discovered all of them related to one person, Tu Youyou.
In the end, this great scientist became known to the world.
She kept silent for nearly 40 years.
Artemisinin, is also considered to have a potential effect on diabetics and asthmatics.
There is also a rumor circulated on the internet in a very small area; she is missing now or controlled by xyz (country name) government because artemisinin is helpful in killing some viruses related to COVID-19.
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This was a very interesting read! I am very happy that we all love her, and I hope she is okay.
Well written!
Sept. 7, 2023
Thank you for your reading and corrections. :-)
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Story About Tu Youyou |
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In 2015, Tu Youyou became a Nobel Laureate in the field of Physiology or Medicine. |
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In today's entry, I am going to write some stories about this great scientist, however, I am not sure whether it is true or not. In today's entry, I am going to write some stories about this great scientist If you said "write a story..." you could use "it is..." Since you said "write some stories..." you need to use a plural form. |
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In the early 2010s, some medical experts from the United Nations found that the number of malaria patients from African countries had significantly dropped. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In order to find the reason, they went to Africa and learned that most of the recovered patients had used a kind of Traditional Chinese Medicine that had the same ingredient, artemisinin. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Later, a scientist came to China, aiming to find out who the inventor was. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There were at least five pharmaceutical factories that claimed they invented it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The scientists from the UN discovered all of them related to one person, Tu Youyou. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the end, this great scientist became known to the world. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Artemisinin, is also considered to have a potential effect on diabetics and asthmatics. Artemisinin |
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There is also a rumor circulated on the internet in a very small area; she is missing now or controlled by xyz (country name) government because artemisinin is helpful in killing some viruses related to COVID-19. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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