Feb. 5, 2024
Story about Lamb Kebabs (7) - End
As many of you who are interested in matters related to China might know, the Uyghur people in Xingjiang province were severely persecuted. Authorities have even established concentration camps to "educate" or "help" them. This link from YouTube provides some insights from the BBC (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WmId2ZP3h0c&ab_channel=BBCNews). As usual, the local government's perspective is opposite to the BBC's. I am not able to confirm it, however, I know that during quarantine times caused by COVID-19 in the past years. People in the Xingjiang autonomous region regardless of ethnicity have been managed much more strictly than in other areas. A few months after BBC reported the story, we could see a small number of Uygur people sell their lamb kebabs again in inland areas, but only in restaurants, and street vending was not allowed.
They have lost their privilege and look a bit cautious.
Story about Lamb Kebabs (7) - End
As many of you who are interested in matters related to China might know, the Uyghur people in Xingjiang province were severely persecuted.
Authorities have even established concentration camps to "educate" or "help" them.
This link from YouTube provides some insights from the BBC (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WmId2ZP3h0c&ab_channel=BBCNews).
As usual, the local government's perspective is opposite to the BBC's.
I am not able to confirm it, however, I know that during quarantine times caused by COVID-19 in the past few years (did result in concentration camps).
Here, the end of your sentence is missing a second part. "I am not able to confirm [IT], however, I know that [THING RELATED TO IT]. I inferred you are talking about the camps.
People in the Xingjiang autonomous region regardless of ethnicity have been managed much more strictly than in other areas.
A few months after the BBC reported the story, we could see a small number of Uygur people selling their lamb kebabs again in inland areas, but only in restaurants, and street vending was not allowed.
They have lost their privilege to do so and look a bit cautious.
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As many of you who are interested in matters related to China might know, the Uyghur people in Xingjiang province were severely persecuted. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Authorities have even established concentration camps to "educate" or "help" them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This link from YouTube provides some insights from the BBC (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WmId2ZP3h0c&ab_channel=BBCNews). This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As usual, the local government's perspective is opposite to the BBC's. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am not able to confirm it, however, I know that during quarantine times caused by COVID-19 in the past years. I am not able to confirm it, however, I know that during quarantine times caused by COVID-19 in the past few years (did result in concentration camps). Here, the end of your sentence is missing a second part. "I am not able to confirm [IT], however, I know that [THING RELATED TO IT]. I inferred you are talking about the camps. |
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People in the Xingjiang autonomous region regardless of ethnicity have been managed much more strictly than in other areas. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A few months after BBC reported the story, we could see a small number of Uygur people sell their lamb kebabs again in inland areas, but only in restaurants, and street vending was not allowed. A few months after the BBC reported the story, we could see a small number of Uygur people selling their lamb kebabs again in inland areas, but only in restaurants, and street vending was not allowed. |
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They have lost their privilege and look a bit cautious. They have lost their privilege to do so and look a bit cautious. |
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