The Uyghur people have benjoyed privileged policy for decadesefited for decades from a policy that gives them the privilege of having more than one child. The Uyghur people have benefited for decades from a policy that gives them the privilege of having more than one child.

The Uyghur people have enjoyed privileged policy for decades, for example, they can have more than one child. The Uyghur people have enjoyed privileged policy for decades, for example, they can have more than one child.

For example, they can have more than one child.

I have merged this sentence with the previous sentence

For example, they can have more than one child. For example, they can have more than one child.

I would also merge these clauses together.

Meanwhile, the Han ethnic group suffered from the inhumane one-child policy from the mid-1970s to abroutnd 2017. Meanwhile, the Han ethnic group suffered from the inhumane one-child policy from the mid-1970s to around 2017.

Meanwhile, the Han ethnic group suffered from the inhumane one-child policy from the mid-1970s to about 2017. Meanwhile, the Han ethnic group suffered from the inhumane one-child policy from the mid-1970s to 2017.

Very minor here, but because you're using a specific year as the end of the range it would seem odd to say "about 2017". It's very vague and could mean somewhere between 2016-2018 but without explicitly stating so. If you want to keep it vague then I'd go with "to mid-2010s".

In addition, Uyghurs can gain admission to good universities with a comparatively quite low band score, and receive other beniefits. In addition, Uyghurs can gain admission to good universities with a comparatively low band score, and receive other benefits.

In addition, Uyghurs can gain admission to good universities with a comparatively quite low band score, and other beniefits. In addition, Uyghurs can gain admission to good universities with a comparatively low band score, and other benefits.

"quite" seems redundant to me, I would drop it.

According to somea recent news revealedport, people in the south of Xinjiang (an autonomous region for Uyghurs) are poorer than the other areas of Xinjiang. According to a recent news report, people in the south of Xinjiang (an autonomous region for Uyghurs) are poorer than the other areas of Xinjiang.

According to some news revealed,sources, they report that people in the south ofern Xinjiang (an autonomous region for Uyghurs) are poorer than the other areas of Xinjiang. According to some news sources, they report that people in southern Xinjiang (an autonomous region for Uyghurs) are poorer than the other areas of Xinjiang.

Some individuales in these areas were against the central government and planned to build an Islamic country. Some individuals in these areas were against the central government and planned to build an Islamic country.

They moved to the inland of China with their lamb kebab stalls, and a few of them even wanted to illegally leave for other countries, some of them for economic reasons and some for political reasons. They moved to the inland of China with their lamb kebab stalls, and a few of them even wanted to illegally leave for other countries, some of them for economic reasons and some for political reasons.

They moved to the China inland of China with their lamb kebab stalls, and a few of them even wanted to illegally leave for other countries, some of them for economic reasons and some for political reasons. They moved to the China inland with their lamb kebab stalls and a few of them even wanted to illegally leave for other countries, some for economic reasons and some for political reasons.

On March 1, 2014. On March 1, 2014

AOn March 1 2014, a critical and fateful event occurred in a rail station in Kunming (the capital city of Yunnan province which borders Laos) Railway Station. On March 1 2014, a critical and fateful event occurred in a rail station in Kunming (the capital city of Yunnan province which borders Laos).

Aa critical and fateful event occurred in Kunming (the capital city of Yunnan province which borders Laos) Railway Station. a critical and fateful event occurred in Kunming (the capital city of Yunnan province which borders Laos) Railway Station.

Combine this with the date which it occured.

As before, dDifferent media outlets have different and even oppositecontradictory reports about the tragedy, and I do not discuss more about it herewhich follows the pattern seen previously when it comes to news reporting on the Uyghur group. Different media outlets have different and even contradictory reports about the tragedy, which follows the pattern seen previously when it comes to news reporting on the Uyghur group.

AnywaUnfortunately, the result was many innocent people died at the station. Unfortunately, the result was many innocent people died at the station.

If you want to sound sympathetic towards the victims I would use a different transition here. "Anyways" could be interpreted as being dismissive.

No one wcould imagine whathow this event would bring toimpact the Uyghurs; they will gradually b. As time went on, they were completely changed after thait, including their kebab stalls across China. No one could imagine how this event would impact the Uyghurs. As time went on, they were completely changed after it, including their kebab stalls across China.

No one would imagineknows what this event wouldill bring to the Uyghurs; they will gradually be completely changed after that, including their kebab stalls across China. No one knows what this event will bring to the Uyghurs; they will gradually be completely changed after that, including their kebab stalls across China.

The use of "would" in the first clause is confusing when the following clause uses "will ... be". If the intention of the first clause is to explain that one is not sure what will happen, then I would write it the way my correction has it.