Dec. 30, 2023
Story about Lamb Kebabs (3) - Astonished
We were not surprised that every corner in Shenzhen was well-maintained, with streets sparkingly clean and no signes of thieves or prostitutes at night. However, what most of us could not imagine was that all the Uyghurs would abruptly disappear for a while.
I can roughly remember there was news in the local newspaper a few weeks ahead of the handover of Hong Kong, highlighting how the local government had done a hard and efficient job of guaranteeing a safe transfer of Hong Kong (State leaders and Army Garrison would enter Hong Kong via Shenzhen). In a private mealtime, my boss's husband, a high-ranking official shared with us: that they had talked with the head of the Uyghur people in the city, urging, asking, ordering, or probably forcing them to leave or hide for around a month. The Uyghurs did it. A month later, they returned with lamb kebab stalls.
This experience left me astonished. It demonstrates how powerful the government can be. Their working efficiency can be unexpectedly remarkable if they are willing to do, they can do many things without formal regulations. Although I have to admit that I felt safe when walking on the streets during that period.
Story about Lamb Kebabs (3) - Astonished
We were not surprised that every corner in Shenzhen was well-maintained, with streets sparklingly clean and no signes(s) of thieves or prostitutes at night.
However, wWhat most of us could not imagine, however, was that all the Uyghurs would abruptly disappear for a while.
I can roughvaguely remember there was news in the local newspaper a few weeks ahead ofbefore the handover of Hong Kong, highlighting how the local government had done a hardtough and efficient job of guaranteeing a safe transfer of Hong Kong (State leaders and Army Garrison would enter Hong Kong via Shenzhen).
これの方が自然です。
InAt a private mealtime, my boss's husband, a high-ranking official, shared the following with us: that they had talked with the head of the Uyghur people in the city, urging, asking, ordering, or probably forcing them to leave or hide for around a month.
わー、どうしてですか。あまり分かりませんから。
The Uyghurs did it.
A month later, they returned with lamb kebab stalls.
This experience left me astonished.
It demonstrates how powerful the government can be.
Their working efficiency can be unexpectedly remarkable: if they are willing to do something, they can do many things without formal regulations.
そうですね。
Although I have to admit that I felt safe when walking on the streets during that period.
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お久しぶりです！とても面白かったです。上手に書けています！
Dec. 31, 2023
お久しぶにお会いできとても楽しいです。頑張ってください。ありがと！！
Dec. 31, 2023
お久しぶにお会いできとても楽しいです。ありがと！！
We were not surprised that every corner in Shenzhen was well-maintained, with streets sparkingly clean, and no signes of thieves or prostitutes at night.
In a private mealtime, my boss's husband, a high-ranking official shared with us: that they had talked with the head of the Uyghur people in the city, urging, asking, ordering, or probably forcing them to leave or hide for around a month.
Their working efficiency can be unexpectedly remarkable if they are willing to do, they can do many things without formal regulations.
I did not expect their work to be so efficient and remarkable. They can do many things without formal regulations when they are willing to do it.
Although I have to admit that I felt safe when walking on the streets during that period.
Dec. 31, 2023
Thank you very much! :-)
Story about Lamb Kebabs (3) - Astonished
We were not surprised that every corner in Shenzhen was well-maintained, with streets sparklingly clean and no signes of thieves or prostitutes at night.
However, what most of us could not imagine was that all the Uyghurs would abruptly disappear for a while.
I can roughly remember there was news in the local newspaper a few weeks ahead of the handover of Hong Kong, highlighting how the local government had done a hard and efficient job of guaranteeing a safe transfer of Hong Kong (State leaders and Army Garrison would enter Hong Kong via Shenzhen).
Still grammatically correct, this edit just makes the sentence more concise.
InDuring a private mealtime, my boss's husband, a high-ranking official, shared with us: that they had talked with the head of the Uyghur people in the city, urging, asking, and ordering, orbut probably forcing them to leave or hide for around a month.
The Uyghurs did it.
A month later, they returned with the lamb kebab stalls.
This experience left me astonished.
It demonstrates how powerful the government can be.
Their working efficiency can be unexpectedly remarkable if they are willing to do, t so. They can do many things without formal regulations.
AlthoughDespite this, I have to admit that I felt safe when walking on the streets during that period.
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Amazing job!! :)
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We were not surprised that every corner in Shenzhen was well-maintained, with streets sparkingly clean and no signes of thieves or prostitutes at night. We were not surprised that every corner in Shenzhen was well-maintained, with streets sparklingly clean and no sign |
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However, what most of us could not imagine was that all the Uyghurs would abruptly disappear for a while. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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I can roughly remember there was news in the local newspaper a few weeks ahead of the handover of Hong Kong, highlighting how the local government had done a hard and efficient job of guaranteeing a safe transfer of Hong Kong (State leaders and Army Garrison would enter Hong Kong via Shenzhen). I can roughly remember Still grammatically correct, this edit just makes the sentence more concise. |
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In a private mealtime, my boss's husband, a high-ranking official shared with us: that they had talked with the head of the Uyghur people in the city, urging, asking, ordering, or probably forcing them to leave or hide for around a month.
In a private mealtime, my boss's husband, a high-ranking official shared with us |
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The Uyghurs did it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A month later, they returned with lamb kebab stalls. A month later, they returned with the lamb kebab stalls. |
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This experience left me astonished. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It demonstrates how powerful the government can be. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Their working efficiency can be unexpectedly remarkable if they are willing to do, they can do many things without formal regulations. Their working efficiency can be unexpectedly remarkable if they are willing to do |
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Although I have to admit that I felt safe when walking on the streets during that period.
This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We were not surprised that every corner in Shenzhen was well-maintained, with streets sparkingly clean and no signes of thieves or prostitutes at night. We were not surprised that every corner in Shenzhen was well-maintained, with streets sparkingly clean, and no sign |
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However, what most of us could not imagine was that all the Uyghurs would abruptly disappear for a while. |
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I can roughly remember there was news in the local newspaper a few weeks ahead of the handover of Hong Kong, highlighting how the local government had done a hard and efficient job of guaranteeing a safe transfer of Hong Kong (State leaders and Army Garrison would enter Hong Kong via Shenzhen). I can これの方が自然です。 |
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In a private mealtime, my boss's husband, a high-ranking official shared with us: that they had talked with the head of the Uyghur people in the city, urging, asking, ordering, or probably forcing them to leave or hide for around a month. |
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The Uyghurs did it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A month later, they returned with lamb kebab stalls. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This experience left me astonished. |
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It demonstrates how powerful the government can be. |
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Their working efficiency can be unexpectedly remarkable if they are willing to do, they can do many things without formal regulations. Their working efficiency can be unexpectedly remarkable if they are willing to do, they can do many things without formal regulations. I did not expect their work to be so efficient and remarkable. They can do many things without formal regulations when they are willing to do it. Their working efficiency can be unexpectedly remarkable: if they are willing to do something, they can do many things without formal regulations. そうですね。 |
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Although I have to admit that I felt safe when walking on the streets during that period.
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We were not surprised that every corner in Shenzhen was well-maintained, with streets sparkingly clean and no signes of thieves or prostitutes at night. We were not surprised that every corner in Shenzhen was well-maintained, with streets sparklingly clean and no sign |
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However, what most of us could not imagine was that all the Uyghurs would abruptly disappear for a while. |
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I can roughly remember there was news in the local newspaper a few weeks ahead of the handover of Hong Kong, highlighting how the local government had done a hard and efficient job of guaranteeing a safe transfer of Hong Kong (State leaders and Army Garrison would enter Hong Kong via Shenzhen). |
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In a private mealtime, my boss's husband, a high-ranking official shared with us: that they had talked with the head of the Uyghur people in the city, urging, asking, ordering, or probably forcing them to leave or hide for around a month.
わー、どうしてですか。あまり分かりませんから。 |
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The Uyghurs did it. |
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A month later, they returned with lamb kebab stalls. |
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This experience left me astonished. |
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It demonstrates how powerful the government can be. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Their working efficiency can be unexpectedly remarkable if they are willing to do, they can do many things without formal regulations. |
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Although I have to admit that I felt safe when walking on the streets during that period. |
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Story about Lamb Kebabs (3) - Astonished This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We were not surprised that every corner in Shenzhen was well-maintained, with streets sparkingly clean and no signes of thieves or prostitutes at night. |
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However, what most of us could not imagine was that all the Uyghurs would abruptly disappear for a while. |
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I can roughly remember there was news in the local newspaper a few weeks ahead of the handover of Hong Kong, highlighting how the local government had done a hard and efficient job of guaranteeing a safe transfer of Hong Kong (State leaders and Army Garrison would enter Hong Kong via Shenzhen). |
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In a private mealtime, my boss's husband, a high-ranking official shared with us: that they had talked with the head of the Uyghur people in the city, urging, asking, ordering, or probably forcing them to leave or hide for around a month. |
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The Uyghurs did it. |
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A month later, they returned with lamb kebab stalls. |
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This experience left me astonished. |
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It demonstrates how powerful the government can be. |
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Their working efficiency can be unexpectedly remarkable if they are willing to do, they can do many things without formal regulations. |
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Although I have to admit that I felt safe when walking on the streets during that period. |
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