Dec. 29, 2023
I cannot remember the price of the lamb kebabs in Shenzhen in 1997. The deep impression is they were much more expensive than in my hometown, Chongqing. And one bad but similar scene was there were generally some teenagers or children and young men and even young women beside the lamb kebab stalls, they were pocket lifters. We could identify them all as Uyghurs. We warned each other not to buy any meat skewers from them, or we might be blackmailed by them, and also be aware of any Uyghurs approaching you, as they might steal your wallet.
It's unfair to some honest Uyghurs; however, that was the truth at that time. Most regular Han Chinese knew they would be in trouble if they quarreled with Uyghurs, although Han race makes up about 92% of the total population in China, because we had a consensus that the police didn't want to bother Uyghurs.
Surprisingly, a few weeks before the handover of Hong Kong on July 1, 1997. All of the Uyghurs disappeared, and their lamb kebabs also vanished completely.
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I cannot remember the price of the lamb kebabs in Shenzhen in 1997.
The deepMy impression is that they were much more expensive than in my hometown, Chongqing.
"Impression"はまだ深いことだと思います。
And one bad but similar scene was there were generally some teenagers or children and young men and even young women beside the lamb kebab stalls, they who were pickpocket lifters.
残念です。
We could identify them all as Uyghurs.
We warned each other not to buy any meat skewers from them, or we might be blackmailed by them, and also be aware of any Uyghurs approaching you, as they might steal your wallet.
It's unfair to some honest Uyghurs; however, that was the truth at that time.
Most regular Han Chinese knew they would be in trouble if they quarreled with Uyghurs, although the Han race makes up about 92% of the total population in China, because we had a consensus thatwhere the police didn't want to bother Uyghurs.
Surprisingly, a few weeks before the handover of Hong Kong on July 1, 1997.
次の文を付きました。
ASurprisingly, a few weeks before the handover of Hong Kong on July 1, 1997, all of the Uyghurs disappeared, and their lamb kebabs also vanished completely.
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I think it sounds better to use the noun form instead of the verb form for titles, but this is purely stylistic
I cannot remember the price of the lamb kebabs in Shenzhen in 1997. / I cannot remember the price of Shenzhen's lamb kebabs back in 1997.
The deepMy impression is that they were much more expensive than in my hometown, Chongqing.
You would usually use "deep impression" with this sentence structure:
___ left a deep impression on ___
or
__ made a deep impression on __
And one bad but sifamiliar scene was there were generallye saw were some teenagers or children and young men and even young women beside the lamb kebab stalls, they were pickpocket lifters.
We could identify them all as Uyghurs.
We warned each other not to buy any meat skewers from them, or we might be blackmailed by them, and also be aware of any Uyghurs approaching you, as they might steal your wallet.
It's unfair to some honest Uyghurs; however, that was the truth at that time.
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Surprisingly, a few weeks before the handover of Hong Kong on July 1, 1997, all of the Uyghurs disappeared, and their lamb kebabs also vanished completely.
Combined it with the below sentence
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Story about Lamb Kebabs (2) - Disappeared
I cannot remember the price of the lamb kebabs in Shenzhen in 1997.
The deep impression is they were much more expensive than in my hometown, Chongqing.
I'm not sure what you mean by 'deep impression', but it's not a saying I've heard before in English.
And one bad but similar scene was there were generally some teenagers or, children and, young men and even young women beside the lamb kebab stalls, theyat were pickpocket lifters.
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We could identify them all as Uyghurs.
We warned each other not to buy any meat skewers from them, or we might be blackmailed by them, and also be aware of any Uyghurs approaching you, as they might steal your wallet.
It's unfair to some honest Uyghurs; however, that was the truth at that time.
Most regular Han Chinese knew they would be in trouble if they quarreled with Uyghurs, although Han race makes up about 92% of the total population in China, because we had a consensus that the police didn't want to bother Uyghurs.
Surprisingly, a few weeks before the handover of Hong Kong on July 1, 1997.,
This is an incomplete sentence. Connecting it to the next sentence with a comma would make sense.
All of the Uyghurs disappeared, and their lamb kebabs also vanished completely.
I cannot remember the price of the lamb kebabs in Shenzhen in 1997. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
The deep impression is they were much more expensive than in my hometown, Chongqing. The deep impression is they were much more expensive than in my hometown, Chongqing. I'm not sure what you mean by 'deep impression', but it's not a saying I've heard before in English.
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And one bad but similar scene was there were generally some teenagers or children and young men and even young women beside the lamb kebab stalls, they were pocket lifters. And one bad but similar scene was there were generally some teenagers Typically starting a sentence with 'and' is not
And one bad but similar scene was there were generally some teenagers or children and young men and even young women beside the lamb kebab stalls 残念です。 |
We could identify them all as Uyghurs. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
We warned each other not to buy any meat skewers from them, or we might be blackmailed by them, and also be aware of any Uyghurs approaching you, as they might steal your wallet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
It's unfair to some honest Uyghurs; however, that was the truth at that time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Most regular Han Chinese knew they would be in trouble if they quarreled with Uyghurs, although Han race makes up about 92% of the total population in China, because we had a consensus that the police didn't want to bother Uyghurs. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Most regular Han Chinese knew they would be in trouble if they quarreled with Uyghurs, although Han race makes up about 92% of the total population in China, because we had a consensus that the police didn't Not sure if I understand the causal relationship |
Surprisingly, a few weeks before the handover of Hong Kong on July 1, 1997. Surprisingly, a few weeks before the handover of Hong Kong on July 1, 1997 This is an incomplete sentence. Connecting it to the next sentence with a comma would make sense.
次の文を付きました。 |
All of the Uyghurs disappeared, and their lamb kebabs also vanished completely. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I cannot remember the price of the lamb kebabs in Shenzhen in 1997. I cannot remember the price of the lamb kebabs in Shenzhen in 1997. / I cannot remember the price of Shenzhen's lamb kebabs back in 1997. |
The deep impression is they were much more expensive than in my hometown, Chongqing.
You would usually use "deep impression" with this sentence structure: ___ left a deep impression on ___ or __ made a deep impression on __ |
And one bad but similar scene was there were generally some teenagers or children and young men and even young women beside the lamb kebab stalls, they were pocket lifters. And one bad but |
We could identify them all as Uyghurs. |
We warned each other not to buy any meat skewers from them, or we might be blackmailed by them, and also be aware of any Uyghurs approaching you, as they might steal your wallet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
It's unfair to some honest Uyghurs; however, that was the truth at that time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Most regular Han Chinese knew they would be in trouble if they quarreled with Uyghurs, although Han race makes up about 92% of the total population in China, because we had a consensus that the police didn't want to bother Uyghurs. |
Surprisingly, a few weeks before the handover of Hong Kong on July 1, 1997. Surprisingly, a few weeks before the handover of Hong Kong on July 1, 1997, all of the Uyghurs disappeared, and their lamb kebabs also vanished completely. Combined it with the below sentence |
All of the Uyghurs disappeared, and their lamb kebabs also vanished completely. |
I cannot remember the price of the lamb kebabs in Shenzhen in 1997. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
The deep impression is they were much more expensive than in my hometown, Chongqing.
"Impression"はまだ深いことだと思います。 |
And one bad but similar scene was there were generally some teenagers or children and young men and even young women beside the lamb kebab stalls, they were pocket lifters. |
We could identify them all as Uyghurs. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
We warned each other not to buy any meat skewers from them, or we might be blackmailed by them, and also be aware of any Uyghurs approaching you, as they might steal your wallet. |
It's unfair to some honest Uyghurs; however, that was the truth at that time. |
Most regular Han Chinese knew they would be in trouble if they quarreled with Uyghurs, although Han race makes up about 92% of the total population in China, because we had a consensus that the police didn't want to bother Uyghurs. Most regular Han Chinese knew they would be in trouble if they quarreled with Uyghurs Most regular Han Chinese knew they would be in trouble if they quarreled with Uyghurs, although the Han race makes up about 92% of the total population in China, because we had a c |
Surprisingly, a few weeks before the handover of Hong Kong on July 1, 1997. |
All of the Uyghurs disappeared, and their lamb kebabs also vanished completely. |
Story about Lamb Kebabs (2) - Disappeared This sentence has been marked as perfect! Story about Lamb Kebabs (2) - Disappearance I think it sounds better to use the noun form instead of the verb form for titles, but this is purely stylistic This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
I cannot remember the price of the lamb kebabs in Shenzhen in 1997. |
The deep impression is they were much more expensive than in my hometown, Chongqing. |
And one bad but similar scene was there were generally some teenagers or children and young men and even young women beside the lamb kebab stalls, they were pocket lifters. |
We could identify them all as Uyghurs. |
We warned each other not to buy any meat skewers from them, or we might be blackmailed by them, and also be aware of any Uyghurs approaching you, as they might steal your wallet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
It's unfair to some honest Uyghurs; however, that was the truth at that time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Most regular Han Chinese knew they would be in trouble if they quarreled with Uyghurs, although Han race makes up about 92% of the total population in China, because we had a consensus that the police didn't want to bother Uyghurs. |
Surprisingly, a few weeks before the handover of Hong Kong on July 1, 1997. |
All of the Uyghurs disappeared, and their lamb kebabs also vanished completely.
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I cannot remember the price of the lamb kebabs in Shenzhen in 1997. |
The deep impression is they were much more expensive than in my hometown, Chongqing. |
And one bad but similar scene was there were generally some teenagers or children and young men and even young women beside the lamb kebab stalls, they were pocket lifters. |
We could identify them all as Uyghurs. |
We warned each other not to buy any meat skewers from them, or we might be blackmailed by them, and also be aware of any Uyghurs approaching you, as they might steal your wallet. |
It's unfair to some honest Uyghurs; however, that was the truth at that time. |
Most regular Han Chinese knew they would be in trouble if they quarreled with Uyghurs, although Han race makes up about 92% of the total population in China, because we had a consensus that the police didn't want to bother Uyghurs. |
Surprisingly, a few weeks before the handover of Hong Kong on July 1, 1997. |
All of the Uyghurs disappeared, and their lamb kebabs also vanished completely. |
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