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vinayjadhav

Sept. 21, 2024

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Story about a trip which turned into a disaster

This is the story of me and my friends. After several time of planning and canceling ,finally we all decided to go on this trip. We had decided to go to this city where there is beaches. It was located in coast. We set our journey in the evening by car. So, we had to drive for the whole night. Me and my other friend was the drivers. We were taking turns along with the journey. The first mistake which we did was that driving in the night. Until 10:00pm it was good we were laughing and cracking jokes and all, but after that it became frustrating for all of us to drive the car. Somehow we managed to drive and we reached our first destination. We swam in the ocean, took some pictures and took a shower as well, Till here it was good. And again we resumed our journey to reach our next destination. On our way to that we came across this tourist spot. So, we stopped by enjoyed the view, and we met some people who were really friendly , and we sat with them for some time , chatted and laughed a little bit. It was great. By this time it was already evening and now we needed a place to eat and rest. What everyone said was that they had booked rooms, it was not me that had done the arrangements. When we reached the hotel to check in , the hotel receptionist said that all the rooms are filled. This is where I lost my cool because I had drove the car for the whole night, and stayed awake for the whole next day. I needed rest and lot of food , but there wasn't any. I started yelling at all my friends. And even they were tired and irritated because of that we had a small fight. But, it was sorted out with a small drinks party which we had after we got to know that we had to sleep in the beach. We were 5 of us and we were all high. Me and my friend went on the beach to sleep, and the other three said that they would sleep in the car. But, in the night those 3 decided to go on this adventure. So, one of my friend had drove the car in the night without turning on the headlight because it was the challenge when they were high. He had took this car and let it inside this pothole. A wheel of the car was inside the that hole for the whole night. When I woke up in the morning I searched them for a while and saw this and I was shocked. They were all asleep inside this car. I woke them up and we took the help of some locals to take the car out and we had to pay them for that. So, we took shower in the public bathroom and visited a temple the next day.

We came back the same day because I had it enough.


This is the story of me and my friends. After several time of planning and canceling ,finally we all decided to go on this trip. We had decided to go to this city where there is beaches. It was located in coast. We set our journey in the evening by car. So, we had to drive for the whole night. Me and my other friend was the drivers. We were taking turns along with the journey. The first mistake which we did was that driving in the night. Until 10:00pm it was good we were laughing and cracking jokes and all, but after that it became frustrating for all of us to drive the car. Somehow we managed to drive and we reached our first destination. We swam in the ocean, took some pictures and took a shower as well, Till here it was good. And again we resumed our journey to reach our next destination. On our way to that we came across this tourist spot. So, we stopped by enjoyed the view, and we met some people who were really friendly , and we sat with them for some time , chatted and laughed a little bit. It was great. By this time it was already evening and now we needed a place to eat and rest. What everyone said was that they had booked rooms, it was not me that had done the arrangements. When we reached the hotel to check in , the hotel receptionist said that all the rooms are filled. This is where I lost my cool because I had drove the car for the whole night, and stayed awake for the whole next day. I needed rest and lot of food , but there wasn't any. I started yelling at all my friends. And even they were tired and irritated because of that we had a small fight. But, it was sorted out with a small drinks party which we had after we got to know that we had to sleep in the beach. We were 5 of us and we were all high. Me and my friend went on the beach to sleep, and the other three said that they would sleep in the car. But, in the night those 3 decided to go on this adventure. So, one of my friend had drove the car in the night without turning on the headlight because it was the challenge when they were high. He had took this car and let it inside this pothole. A wheel of the car was inside the that hole for the whole night. When I woke up in the morning I searched them for a while and saw this and I was shocked. They were all asleep inside this car. I woke them up and we took the help of some locals to take the car out and we had to pay them for that. So, we took shower in the public bathroom and visited a temple the next day.

We came back the same day because I had it enough.

Corrections

After several time of planning and canceling several times,finally we all decided to go on this trip.

We had decided to go to this city where there isthat had beaches.

It was located inat the coast.

We setarted our journey in the evening by car.

So, we had to drive for the whole night.

Me and my other friend wasand I were the drivers.

We were taking turns along withthroughout the journey.

The first mistake which we did was thate made was driving in the night.

Until 10:00pm it was good w It was good until 10:00pm. We were laughing and, cracking jokes and all, but after that it became frustrating for all of us to drive the car.

We swam in the ocean, took some pictures and took a shower as well, Till here it was good. It was fine till this moment.

And again, we resumed our journey to reach our next destination.

On our way to thathere, we came across this tourist spot.

So, we stopped by to enjoyed the view, and we met some people who were really friendly , and we sat with them for some time , chatted and laughed a little bit.

By this time it was already evening and now we needed a place to eat and rest.

What eEveryone said was that they had booked rooms, it was not me that hmad done e the arrangements.

When we reached the hotel to check in , the hotel receptionist said that all the rooms awere filled.

You don't need space between a word and ",".

This is where I lost my cool because I had drove the car for the whole night, and stayed awake for the whole next day.

I needed rest and lots of food , but there wasn'I couldn't get any.

And even they were tired and irritated b. Because of that, we had a small fight.

But, it was sorted out with a small drinks party which we had after we got to knowrealized that we had to sleep inat the beach.

WThere were 5 of us and we were all high.

But, in the night those 3 decided to go on thisan adventure.

So, one of my friend hads drove the car in the night without turning on the headlight because it was thea challenge whilen they were high.

He had took this car and let it inside thisdrove into a pothole.

A wheel of the car was inside the that hole for the whole night.

When I woke up in the morning I searched them for a while andbefore I saw this and I was shocked.

I woke them up and we tookused the help of some locals to take the car out and we had to pay them for that.

We came back the same day because I had ithad enough.

Feedback

I'm so sorry your plan trip did not go as planned. I hope you are able to go on a successful one next time!

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vinayjadhav

Sept. 22, 2024

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Thank you so much for correcting my mistakes. It is very helpful. Wish you best of luck.

I needed rest and lot of food , but there wasn't any.


I needed rest and lots of food , but there wasn'I couldn't get any.

I started yelling at all my friends.


And even they were tired and irritated because of that we had a small fight.


And even they were tired and irritated b. Because of that, we had a small fight.

But, it was sorted out with a small drinks party which we had after we got to know that we had to sleep in the beach.


But, it was sorted out with a small drinks party which we had after we got to knowrealized that we had to sleep inat the beach.

We were 5 of us and we were all high.


WThere were 5 of us and we were all high.

Me and my friend went on the beach to sleep, and the other three said that they would sleep in the car.


But, in the night those 3 decided to go on this adventure.


But, in the night those 3 decided to go on thisan adventure.

So, one of my friend had drove the car in the night without turning on the headlight because it was the challenge when they were high.


So, one of my friend hads drove the car in the night without turning on the headlight because it was thea challenge whilen they were high.

He had took this car and let it inside this pothole.


He had took this car and let it inside thisdrove into a pothole.

A wheel of the car was inside the that hole for the whole night.


A wheel of the car was inside the that hole for the whole night.

When I woke up in the morning I searched them for a while and saw this and I was shocked.


When I woke up in the morning I searched them for a while andbefore I saw this and I was shocked.

They were all asleep inside this car.


Story about a trip which turned into a disaster


This is the story of me and my friends.


After several time of planning and canceling ,finally we all decided to go on this trip.


After several time of planning and canceling several times,finally we all decided to go on this trip.

We had decided to go to this city where there is beaches.


We had decided to go to this city where there isthat had beaches.

It was located in coast.


It was located inat the coast.

We set our journey in the evening by car.


We setarted our journey in the evening by car.

So, we had to drive for the whole night.


So, we had to drive for the whole night.

Me and my other friend was the drivers.


Me and my other friend wasand I were the drivers.

We were taking turns along with the journey.


We were taking turns along withthroughout the journey.

The first mistake which we did was that driving in the night.


The first mistake which we did was thate made was driving in the night.

Until 10:00pm it was good we were laughing and cracking jokes and all, but after that it became frustrating for all of us to drive the car.


Until 10:00pm it was good w It was good until 10:00pm. We were laughing and, cracking jokes and all, but after that it became frustrating for all of us to drive the car.

Somehow we managed to drive and we reached our first destination.


We swam in the ocean, took some pictures and took a shower as well, Till here it was good.


We swam in the ocean, took some pictures and took a shower as well, Till here it was good. It was fine till this moment.

And again we resumed our journey to reach our next destination.


And again, we resumed our journey to reach our next destination.

On our way to that we came across this tourist spot.


On our way to thathere, we came across this tourist spot.

So, we stopped by enjoyed the view, and we met some people who were really friendly , and we sat with them for some time , chatted and laughed a little bit.


So, we stopped by to enjoyed the view, and we met some people who were really friendly , and we sat with them for some time , chatted and laughed a little bit.

I woke them up and we took the help of some locals to take the car out and we had to pay them for that.


I woke them up and we tookused the help of some locals to take the car out and we had to pay them for that.

So, we took shower in the public bathroom and visited a temple the next day.


We came back the same day because I had it enough.


We came back the same day because I had ithad enough.

It was great.


By this time it was already evening and now we needed a place to eat and rest.


By this time it was already evening and now we needed a place to eat and rest.

What everyone said was that they had booked rooms, it was not me that had done the arrangements.


What eEveryone said was that they had booked rooms, it was not me that hmad done e the arrangements.

When we reached the hotel to check in , the hotel receptionist said that all the rooms are filled.


When we reached the hotel to check in , the hotel receptionist said that all the rooms awere filled.

You don't need space between a word and ",".

This is where I lost my cool because I had drove the car for the whole night, and stayed awake for the whole next day.


This is where I lost my cool because I had drove the car for the whole night, and stayed awake for the whole next day.

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