Hey everyone! I've been thinking about the ways I'm working on improving my English and well t. There' are some things I would like to do,; first thing is, I would like to makinge some posts on tTiktok and, but I always feel insecure about some words that I'my wiriting. ability.¶

Off to a great start! You should make those Tiktoks. Progress over perfection!

I also created bots that I need toso I can practice writeing in English. However, there's are always a things that makes me feel odd. ¶

When I write stuff I can actually think about how to answer someone but I do have a problem with talking in real, t life. There's always a moment of silence when I have to answer someone.

I'm not talking about the easy things, if I can call it like that,. I mean questions that are not the basic ones, you feel me right?

I hopethink that's a common problem for someone who's learning.

There was a fun story behind it and let me say,. I was always curious how to spell the word "gorgeous," so I had a great idea, instead of searching on internet or watching a video, I decided to play a game where I met a girl and then I asked her how to spell that word,. I can't lie I was happy back in time.

Talking with someone in English just feels nice, even better than in my native language cbecause I know that I'm learnting something.

That's all I have on my mind, thanks for reading.

( after reading this post I dunno if it makes any sense but let's post it anyway )

Great job!

I'm not talking about the easy things, if I can call it likethem that, I mean questions that are not the basic ones y. You feel me, right?

Hey everyone, I've been thinking about the ways I'm improving my English, and, well, there' are some things I like to do, f. First thing is making some posts on tiktok and, but I always feel insecure about some words that I'm wiriting.

Although "there're" is used in spoken English, it's not normally used in written English.

I also create bots that I need to write in English, but there's always a something that makes me feel odd.

If two complete clauses are separated by a comma, there must be a conjunction after the comma.

When I write stuff, I can actually think about how to answer someone, but I do have a problem with talking in real, t life. There's always a moment of silence when I have to answer someone.

I'm not talking about the easy things if I can call it like that, I mean questions that are not the basic ones you feel me right?

"You feel me?" and "right?" mean the same thing in this case, so only one needs to be used.

There was a fun story behind it and let me say, I was always curious how to spell the word "gorgeous," so I had a great idea i. Instead of searching on the internet or watching a video, I decided to play a game where I met a girl, and then I asked her how to spell that word,. I can't lie, I was happy back in time.

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Capitalisation at the beginning of titles.

Hey, everyone! I've been thinking about the ways I'm improving my English and, well, there' are some things I like to do, f. First thing is making some posts on tiktok and. I always feel insecure about some words that I'my wiriting.

Breaking up the sentences makes it more readable. The comma separates the ‘hey’ and ‘everyone’. The exclamation mark (!) gives a friendly feeling. The ‘well’ is an offhand thought so is put in ‘’ to give this feeling. ‘my’ is a bit less wordy. ‘writing’ has been spell checked.

I also create bots that I need to write in English, t. There'’s always a thing that makes me feel odd.

I don’t really understand the intent of the bot sentence or the second but breaking them up makes it easier to read.

When I write stuff, I can actually think about how to answer someone but I do have a problem withs talking in real, tverbally. There'’s always a moment of silence when I have to answer someone.

‘verbally’ as in using your voice.

I'm not talking about the easy things, if I can call it like that, I mean questions that are non’t the basic ones y. You feel me, right?

‘are not’ technically isn’t wrong, ‘aren’t’ just flows better for the casual feeling. Comma in the last sentence turns it into what you’re going for instead of implying actual physical touch.

There wa’s a fun story behind it and, let me say, I was always curious about how to spell the word "gorgeous" sobut I had a great idea i. Instead of searching on the internet or watching a video, I decided to play a game where, when I met a girl and then I, I would asked her how to spell that word,it. I can't lie, I was happy back doing time.hat.

That ‘there’s’ stands for ‘There is’ because although the story happened in the past, it’s still a story you know now. ‘let me say’ is a side thought so it’s surrounded by commas. ‘but’ flows better than ‘so’. Broke up the sentences for better flow. Added ‘on’ because it needs a particle. ‘searching’ instead of ‘search’. Changed the story to being conditional past. Changed the ‘that word’ to ‘it’ for better flow, we already know what the word is so the reader implicitly understands what the ‘it’ refers to.

Talking with someone in English just feels nice, even better than in my native language cbecause I know that I learnt something.

spell checked ‘because’

That's all I have on my mind, thanks for reading.

( aAfter reading this post, I dunno if it makes any sense but let's post it anyway .)