Aug. 26, 2020
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Zoe is 17 years old. She acts the part of mother with old woman costume in theatre play.
Mike's aunt hopes Mike to help her to write a review about the play.
After Mike watches the play, he writes the review about Zoe could not make him believe differently.
Zoe is furious, so she pretends a woman who is someone gossip magazine editor to ask Mike to go a famous playwright's house to take interview.
The playwright hates gossip magazine and he ever threw the gossip magazine reporter out.
However, the playwright welcome he to come his house and discuss Mike's play.
After Mike leaves the playwright's home, Mike meets Zoe.
Zoe thought the playwright would throw up Mike to make a trick for him, but it is not happen, so Zoe takes off her wig and glesses.
Finally Mike recognizes she is Zoe and feels embarrassed.
Story-1
Zoe is 17 years old.
She actplays the part of a mother withand wears an old woman costume in a theatre play.show.
Mike's aunt hopes Mike tohe will help her to write a review about the play.
After Mike watches the play, he writes the review about Zoe and no one could not make him believe differently.
Ive made a correct based on what I think you were trying to say.
Zoe is furious, so she pretends to be a woman who is someonea gossip magazine editor toand asks Mike to go to a famous playwright's house to takefor an interview.
The playwright hates gossip magazines and he evern threw the gossip magazine reporter out.
I removed the second “gossip magazine” out as it was repetitive.
However, the playwright welcomes he to comeim into his house and discusses Mike's play.
After Mike leaves the playwright's home, Mike meets Zoe.
Zoe thought the playwright would throw upout Mike to make a trick forfool of him, but it is nothat didn’t happen, so Zoe takes off her wig and gleasses.
Finally Mike recognizes that she is Zoe and feels embarrassed.
Feedback
Really good job! A few mistakes but it was clear what you were saying. Keep it up!
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Story-1 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Zoe is 17 years old. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She acts the part of mother with old woman costume in theatre play. She |
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Mike's aunt hopes Mike to help her to write a review about the play. Mike's aunt hopes |
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After Mike watches the play, he writes the review about Zoe could not make him believe differently. After Mike watches the play, he writes the review about Zoe and no one could Ive made a correct based on what I think you were trying to say. |
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Zoe is furious, so she pretends a woman who is someone gossip magazine editor to ask Mike to go a famous playwright's house to take interview. Zoe is furious, so she pretends to be a woman who is |
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The playwright hates gossip magazine and he ever threw the gossip magazine reporter out. The playwright hates gossip magazines and he eve I removed the second “gossip magazine” out as it was repetitive. |
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However, the playwright welcome he to come his house and discuss Mike's play. However, the playwright welcomes h |
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After Mike leaves the playwright's home, Mike meets Zoe. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Zoe thought the playwright would throw up Mike to make a trick for him, but it is not happen, so Zoe takes off her wig and glesses. Zoe thought the playwright would throw |
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Finally Mike recognizes she is Zoe and feel embarrassed. |
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Finally Mike recognizes she is Zoe and feels embarrassed. Finally Mike recognizes that she is Zoe and feels embarrassed. |
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