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Dec. 20, 2020

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I can remember those days very vividly even now. It was several years ago, my grandfather was diagnosed with lung cancer and he suffered excruciating pain most of the time. Apparently it was an incurable illness. And at that time, all of my family were in other cities so on one took care of my grandfather. In this case, he needed to go to the hospital himself. At that time, I went to my hometown because it was my summer holiday. So I was the only one who could visit my grandfather from time to time. Sometimes I went to the hospital to visited him.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                At that time he was so happy because you know when people suffer they always want their families to e there for them. But at that time, I felt so bored and always wanted to hang out with my friends, as I didn’t know how bad the situation was. I am so regret that I did not spend more time with him. But now I have grown up and realized that I need to cherish every moment with my family because we all lead a fast-paced life and do not have time to gather together. Whenever they need help, we need to extend our helping hand to them and this is also a way to strengthen family bond.

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Sometimes I went to the hospital to visited him.

At that time he was so happy because you know when people suffer they always want their families to e there for them.My visits made him so happy because people always want family support when they suffer.

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I am so regret that I did notNow I regret not having spendt more time with him.

But now I have since grown up and I realized that I need toshould cherish every moment with my family becaus, especially since we all lead a fast-paced life and do not have time to gather together.

Whenever theanyone in the family needs help, we need to I should extend oura helping hand to them and this is alsoas a way to strengthen our family bond.

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ricky

Dec. 21, 2020

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l appreciate your help ~~~

I can remember those days very vividly even now.

It was several years ago, my grandfather washad been diagnosed with lung cancer and he suffered excruciating pain most of the time.

saying "had been" instead of "was" makes it clearer you are talking about this point "those days" in the past

And at that time, all of mymy whole family wereas in other cities so ono one took care of my grandfather.

In this case, he needed to go to the hospital himself.

At that time, I went to my hometown because it was my summer holiday.

So I was the only one who could visit my grandfather from time to time.

Sometimes I went to the hospital to visited him.

At that time he was so happy because you know when people suffer they always want their families to be there for them.

But at that time, I felt so bored and always wanted to hang out with my friends, as I didn’t know how bad the situation was.

I am so regretful that I did not spend more time with him.

But now I have grown up and realized that I need to cherish every moment with my family because we all lead a fast-paced lifeves and do not have time to gather together.

Whenever they need help, we need to extend oura helping hand to them and this is also a way to strengthen our family bond.

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ricky

Dec. 21, 2020

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Thank you so much ~

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I can remember those days very vividly even now.


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I canEven now, I can still remember those days very vividly even now.

It was several years ago, my grandfather was diagnosed with lung cancer and he suffered excruciating pain most of the time.


It was several years ago, my grandfather washad been diagnosed with lung cancer and he suffered excruciating pain most of the time.

saying "had been" instead of "was" makes it clearer you are talking about this point "those days" in the past

It was sSeveral years ago, my grandfather was diagnosed with lung cancer and he sufferedmost of the time, he was suffering from an excruciating pain most of the time..

Apparently it was an incurable illness.


Apparently it wasIt was considered to be an incurable illness.disease.

And at that time, all of my family were in other cities so on one took care of my grandfather.


And at that time, all of mymy whole family wereas in other cities so ono one took care of my grandfather.

And at that time, all of my family members were in other cities so on one took care of my grandfathercould take care of him.

In this case, he needed to go to the hospital himself.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

InFor this case, he needed to goreason, he went to the hospital by himself.

At that time, I went to my hometown because it was my summer holiday.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At that time, I went toBut I happened to be in my hometown because it was my summer holiday.

So I was the only one who could visit my grandfather from time to time.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

SoConsequently, I was the only one who could visit my grandfather from time to timeoccasionally visit him in the hospital.

Sometimes I went to the hospital to visited him.


Sometimes I went to the hospital to visited him.

Sometimes I went to the hospital to visited him.

At that time he was so happy because you know when people suffer they always want their families to e there for them.


At that time he was so happy because you know when people suffer they always want their families to be there for them.

At that time he was so happy because you know when people suffer they always want their families to e there for them.My visits made him so happy because people always want family support when they suffer.

But at that time, I felt so bored and always wanted to hang out with my friends, as I didn’t know how bad the situation was.


But at that time, I felt so bored and always wanted to hang out with my friends, as I didn’t know how bad the situation was.

But atduring that tisummer, I felt so bored and always wanted to hang out with my friends, as. I didn’t know how bad thehis situation was.

I am so regret that I did not spend more time with him.


I am so regretful that I did not spend more time with him.

I am so regret that I did notNow I regret not having spendt more time with him.

But now I have grown up and realized that I need to cherish every moment with my family because we all lead a fast-paced life and do not have time to gather together.


But now I have grown up and realized that I need to cherish every moment with my family because we all lead a fast-paced lifeves and do not have time to gather together.

But now I have since grown up and I realized that I need toshould cherish every moment with my family becaus, especially since we all lead a fast-paced life and do not have time to gather together.

Whenever they need help, we need to extend our helping hand to them and this is also a way to strengthen family bond.


Whenever they need help, we need to extend oura helping hand to them and this is also a way to strengthen our family bond.

Whenever theanyone in the family needs help, we need to I should extend oura helping hand to them and this is alsoas a way to strengthen our family bond.

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