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zhuang1999

Aug. 3, 2022

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After graduating from college, I landed a job in a vessel company which focus on bulk carriers business.
This company has only admited one freshman over the past decade. All my colleagues are above 35 while I am just 23, which poses much difficulties on me to be admitted into their private group. We both found it is difficult to land common topics.
I often spent the whole day saying nothing in office and felt been deliberately ignorated by others.
So I intend to quit the present job and land a new one. I haven't been abroad yet and I want to have a try.
I applied for a job related to customs clearance in Lagos Nigeria. I passed the interview and immediately informed by the my hometown relevant government staff that if you want to get your passport issued and released, you have to provide all kinds of documents and undergo strict inquires. According to the latest anti-Covid19 policy, the number of passport issued is restricted because the government is afraid of the potential virus eruption may caused by those returning citizens.
Now the endless and unpredicted sword of lockdown always hang over our head, which buries us in deep anxiety especially for those workplace freshmen just graduated from universities, who is vulnerable to uncertainty economy environment.

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After graduating from college, I landed a job inat a vessel company whichthat focuses on bulk carriers businesses.

All my colleagues are above 35 while I am just 23, which poses much difficulties on me t. To be admitted into their private group has posed many difficulties for me.

We have both found it isto be difficult to lafind common topicsground.

I have often spent the whole day saying nothing in office and felt beenhave felt deliberately ignorated by others.

So I intend to quit the presmy current job and land a new one.

I haven't been abroad yet and I want to have a try at it.

I applied for a job related to customs clearance in Lagos, Nigeria.

I passed the interview and was immediately informed by the my hometown relevant government staff that if you want to get your passport issued and released, you have to provide all kinds of documents and undergo strict inquires.

According to the latest anti-Covid19 policy, the number of passports issued is restricted because the government is afraid of the potential virus eruption that may be caused by those returning citizens.

Now the endless and unpredicted swordable nature of lockdown alwayscontinues to hang over our head, whichs. It has left us buries usd in deep anxiety, especially for those workplace freshmen just graduated from universitinew university graduates, who is vulnerable to the uncertainty of the economy environment.

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Great! Minor grammar corrections and mostly stylistic suggestions.

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zhuang1999

Aug. 3, 2022

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Thanks very much for your correction. It is very helpful.

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After graduating from college, I landed a job in a vessel company which focus on bulk carriers business.


After graduating from college, I landed a job inat a vessel company whichthat focuses on bulk carriers businesses.

This company has only admited one freshman over the past decade.


All my colleagues are above 35 while I am just 23, which poses much difficulties on me to be admitted into their private group.


All my colleagues are above 35 while I am just 23, which poses much difficulties on me t. To be admitted into their private group has posed many difficulties for me.

We both found it is difficult to land common topics.


We have both found it isto be difficult to lafind common topicsground.

I often spent the whole day saying nothing in office and felt been deliberately ignorated by others.


I have often spent the whole day saying nothing in office and felt beenhave felt deliberately ignorated by others.

So I intend to quit the present job and land a new one.


So I intend to quit the presmy current job and land a new one.

I haven't been abroad yet and I want to have a try.


I haven't been abroad yet and I want to have a try at it.

I applied for a job related to customs clearance in Lagos Nigeria.


I applied for a job related to customs clearance in Lagos, Nigeria.

I passed the interview and immediately informed by the my hometown relevant government staff that if you want to get your passport issued and released, you have to provide all kinds of documents and undergo strict inquires.


I passed the interview and was immediately informed by the my hometown relevant government staff that if you want to get your passport issued and released, you have to provide all kinds of documents and undergo strict inquires.

According to the latest anti-Covid19 policy, the number of passport issued is restricted because the government is afraid of the potential virus eruption may caused by those returning citizens.


According to the latest anti-Covid19 policy, the number of passports issued is restricted because the government is afraid of the potential virus eruption that may be caused by those returning citizens.

Now the endless and unpredicted sword of lockdown always hang over our head, which buries us in deep anxiety especially for those workplace freshmen just graduated from universities, who is vulnerable to uncertainty economy environment.


Now the endless and unpredicted swordable nature of lockdown alwayscontinues to hang over our head, whichs. It has left us buries usd in deep anxiety, especially for those workplace freshmen just graduated from universitinew university graduates, who is vulnerable to the uncertainty of the economy environment.

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