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nambatsuyoshi

Aug. 15, 2021

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Stop Raining

Finally, it stopped raining this afternoon. It had been raining for more than three days. I went for a walk for about an hour and a half. After that, I rode my motorcycle to Biwa Lake.
By the way, I wrote that my son received his second dose of the Moderna Corona vaccine yesterday. As expected, he had a fever of 38.5゚C this morning.


今日の午後、やっと雨が上がりました。3日以上雨が降り続いていました。1時間半くらいウォーキングに行きました。その後、バイクで琵琶湖に行きました。
ところで、昨日、息子がモデルナワクチンを接種したと書きました。予想通り、今朝38.5℃の熱が出ました

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It Stopped Raining

Finally, it stopped raining this afternoon.

It had been raining for more than three days.

I went for a walk for about an hour and a half.

After that, I rode my motorcycle to Biwa Lake.

By the way, I wrote that my son received his second dose of the Moderna Corona vaccine yesterday.

You can also shorten it to "Moderna vaccine" since the average reader will know it's a Corona vaccine.

As expected, he had a fever of 38.5゚C this morning.

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Very good!

I hope your son feels better soon!

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nambatsuyoshi

Aug. 15, 2021

4

Thank you!

(It) Stopped Raining

Finally, it stopped raining this afternoon.

It had been raining for more than three days.

I went for a walk for about an hour and a half.

After that, I rode my motorcycle to Biwa Lake.

By the way, I wrote that my son received his second dose of the Moderna Corona vaccine yesterday.

As expected, he had a fever of 38.5゚C this morning.

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Basically everything was correct. Good job!

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nambatsuyoshi

Aug. 15, 2021

4

Thank you!

Stop Raining


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By the way, I wrote that my son received his second dose of the Moderna Corona vaccine yesterday.


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By the way, I wrote that my son received his second dose of the Moderna Corona vaccine yesterday.

You can also shorten it to "Moderna vaccine" since the average reader will know it's a Corona vaccine.

As expected, he had a fever of 38.5゚C this morning.


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