Feb. 14, 2020
Stonehenge
Stonehenge is west 140km of London. Stonehenge is located in Salisbury plains. Around Stonehenge wide plains expands in all directions.
What I was most impressed there was to see horizon between sky and land. I have ever seen horizon between sky and sea in Japan, but it was the first time that I saw it.
Archaeologists say Stonehenge was built up around 4000 year ago.
Stonehenge is made up of large stones. The stones with a height of about 5m are arranged like a circle.
In the center of the circle, there're some large stones assembled.
The structure is so sophisticated that some scholars say the day of a solar eclipse can be calculated.
Who and how and why in the world built up those stones has still been veiled in mystery.
ストーンヘンジはロンドンから西へ約140kmの所にあります。ストーンヘンジの周りは広大な平原が広がってます。イギリスで一番感動したのは空と大地の地平線を見れたことです。空と海の地平線は日本でも見たことがありますが、空と大地の地平線は初めてでした。
考古学者によるとストーンヘンジは4000年以上も前に建てられたそうだ。
ストーンヘンジは大きな石から成り立っている。高さ5mの石が円状に並べられている。真ん中には組み立てられた大きな石がある。
その構造があまりにも精密であるため、ある学者によると、このストーンヘンジを利用すれば、日食の日付も計算できるらしい。
一体誰がどうやって、何のために建造したのかと、今だに謎です。
Stonehenge
Stonehenge is west 140km west of London.
Stonehenge is located in Salisbury plains.
I have ever seen the horizon between the sky and sea in Japan, but it was the first time that I saw it.
The word "horizon" always uses the definite article "the"
Archaeologists say Stonehenge was built up around 4000 year ago.
Stonehenge is made up of large stones.
The stones with a height of about 5m are arranged likein a circle.
In the center of the circle, there're some large stones assembled.
The structure is so sophisticated that some scholars say the day of a solar eclipse can be calculated.
Who and how and why in the world built up those stones hais still been veiled in mystery.
Feb. 14, 2020
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Stonehenge
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Feb. 14, 2020
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Stonehenge
Stonehenge is west 140km west of London.
In English, the cardinal direction goes after the distance.
Stonehenge is located in Salisbury pPlains.
The formal name of a place should be capitalized.
Around Stonehenge, wide plains expandsstretch out in all directions.
This sounds a little more natural.
What I was most impressed thereme most was to see the horizon between the sky and the land.
I have ever seen the horizon between the sky and the sea in Japan, but it was the first time that I saw it over land.
Archaeologists say Stonehenge was built up around 4000 years ago.
Stonehenge is made up of large stones.
You could also say "comprised of large stones," though it sounds a little more formal.
The stones, with a height of about 5m, are arranged likein a circle.
In the center of the circle, there're some large stones are assembled.
Generally, "there're" is not a commonly used contraction, and can be considered bad grammar, especially in writing. I would avoid it.
The structure is so sophisticated that some scholars say it can be used to calculate the day of a solar eclipse can be calculated.
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This sounds more natural.
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I'm glad you enjoyed your trip. Thank you for sharing some interesting facts about Stonehenge!
Feb. 14, 2020
Thank you very much! Your kind explanation is very helpful😄
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