April 18, 2022
I have read a book about stoicism and I'm really surprised. I studied philosophy in school but noone never told me about a philosophy of live. Well, I'm lying. I have read about budism but it's too exotic for me.
After reading the book I feel that those ideas can really change my live. I really believe that to be happy you need to think properly, and it's the first time that someone offer me the tools to do it.
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I studied philosophy in school but no one never told me about alife philosophy of live.
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I have read a book about stoicism and I'm really surprised.
I studied philosophy in school but no one never told me about athis philosophy ofn livfe.
Well, I'm lyingnot exactly telling the truth.
Sounds more natural than just saying lying.
I have read about buddhism but it's too exotic for me.
After reading the book I feel that thosee presented ideas canould really change my livfe.
I realtruly believe that to be happy you need to think properositively, and it's the first time that someone has offered me the tools to do ithis.
Truly is a better word choice here. Properly is a little unclear, a better word would probably be positively, but this does not really fit stoicism. Effectively, may be a better word...it is quite a difficult idea to express.
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Great writing, Stoicism is a very difficult idea to express well so good job!
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