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nikogp

April 18, 2022

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Stoicism

I have read a book about stoicism and I'm really surprised. I studied philosophy in school but noone never told me about a philosophy of live. Well, I'm lying. I have read about budism but it's too exotic for me.

After reading the book I feel that those ideas can really change my live. I really believe that to be happy you need to think properly, and it's the first time that someone offer me the tools to do it.

Look about it, I recomend you!

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I studied philosophy in school but no one never told me about alife philosophy of live.

Well, I'm guess I'm kind of lying.

I think this conveys the nuance you want better.

I have read about bBuddhism but it's too exotic for me.

After reading the book I feel that those ideas can really change my livfe.

I really believe that to be happy you need to think properly, and it'this is the first time that someone offered me the tools to do it.

Look about it,it up. I recommend youit!

Stoicism

I have read a book about stoicism and I'm really surprised.

I studied philosophy in school but no one never told me about athis philosophy ofn livfe.

Well, I'm lyingnot exactly telling the truth.

Sounds more natural than just saying lying.

I have read about buddhism but it's too exotic for me.

After reading the book I feel that thosee presented ideas canould really change my livfe.

I realtruly believe that to be happy you need to think properositively, and it's the first time that someone has offered me the tools to do ithis.

Truly is a better word choice here. Properly is a little unclear, a better word would probably be positively, but this does not really fit stoicism. Effectively, may be a better word...it is quite a difficult idea to express.

Look about it, I recommend you look into it!

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Great writing, Stoicism is a very difficult idea to express well so good job!

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nikogp

April 18, 2022

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Thank you very much!

Stoicism


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I have read a book about stoicism and I'm really surprised.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I studied philosophy in school but noone never told me about a philosophy of live.


I studied philosophy in school but no one never told me about athis philosophy ofn livfe.

I studied philosophy in school but no one never told me about alife philosophy of live.

Well, I'm lying.


Well, I'm lyingnot exactly telling the truth.

Sounds more natural than just saying lying.

Well, I'm guess I'm kind of lying.

I think this conveys the nuance you want better.

I have read about budism but it's too exotic for me.


I have read about buddhism but it's too exotic for me.

I have read about bBuddhism but it's too exotic for me.

After reading the book I feel that those ideas can really change my live.


After reading the book I feel that thosee presented ideas canould really change my livfe.

After reading the book I feel that those ideas can really change my livfe.

I really believe that to be happy you need to think properly, and it's the first time that someone offer me the tools to do it.


I realtruly believe that to be happy you need to think properositively, and it's the first time that someone has offered me the tools to do ithis.

Truly is a better word choice here. Properly is a little unclear, a better word would probably be positively, but this does not really fit stoicism. Effectively, may be a better word...it is quite a difficult idea to express.

I really believe that to be happy you need to think properly, and it'this is the first time that someone offered me the tools to do it.

Look about it, I recomend you!


Look about it, I recommend you look into it!

Look about it,it up. I recommend youit!

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