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alexwong2164

Nov. 28, 2021

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One reason I want to open a snooker club.

Is that I want to improve my skill, I even want to become a professional player.

But I already seen few people try this method and fail.

Fail means the business didn’t make any profit and there skill only improve so little.

If you want to become a muscle-man do you need to open a gym?

What should I do will become a decent snooker player?

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Still not getting athe right answer

OnThe reason I want to open a snooker club.

Iis that I want to improve my skill,s. I even want to become a professional player.

But I have already seen few people try this method and fail.

For present perfect, subject + have/has + (adj.) + past participle of the verb
(adj.) is optional.
e.g., I (subj.) have already (adj.) tried (v. 'tried' in ptp.) playing football before.

Fail means the business didn’t make any profit and there skills only improve sod by a little bit.

Hope I understood what you want to say :)

If you want to become a muscle-ular man, do you need to open a gym?

Hmm.. muscleman is rarely used. It is better to say muscular man or a bodybuilder :)
Also, muscleman is one word, just for you to know :)

What should I do willto become a decent snooker player?

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Sorry I can't tell you how to become a decent snooker player since I don't play snooker :)
But, just beware of the tenses and the articles (a, the) then you'll be fine :)

Still not getting a right answer


Still not getting athe right answer

One reason I want to open a snooker club.


OnThe reason I want to open a snooker club.

Is that I want to improve my skill, I even want to become a professional player.


Iis that I want to improve my skill,s. I even want to become a professional player.

But I already seen few people try this method and fail.


But I have already seen few people try this method and fail.

For present perfect, subject + have/has + (adj.) + past participle of the verb (adj.) is optional. e.g., I (subj.) have already (adj.) tried (v. 'tried' in ptp.) playing football before.

Fail means the business didn’t make any profit and there skill only improve so little.


Fail means the business didn’t make any profit and there skills only improve sod by a little bit.

Hope I understood what you want to say :)

If you want to become a muscle-man do you need to open a gym?


If you want to become a muscle-ular man, do you need to open a gym?

Hmm.. muscleman is rarely used. It is better to say muscular man or a bodybuilder :) Also, muscleman is one word, just for you to know :)

What should I do will become a decent snooker player?


What should I do willto become a decent snooker player?

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