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SummerTeaWater

Dec. 12, 2021

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Stationaries

One of my favorite hobbies are visiting stationary stores

There, I buy things or site seeing whenever I want.

Unlikely other people, I usually use fountain pens more than 7 colors.

New pens and inks with beautiful color are my interest.

Because, ink has a lot of water than ballpoint pens, so the papers are also important for using fountain pens.

For arranging my idea, Index cards are good tools.

Of course, the cards is possible to use pens.

Lastly, diaries are very important to store my memories and my records.

Like this, many things in the stationary shop are waiting for me.

Corrections

Stationariesery

There is no plural form of the word "stationery."

One of my favorite hobbies areis visiting stationaery stores

how to remember the difference:
a) stationEry = We buy stationEry to write a lEtter
b) startionAry = When we stAnd still, we are stationAry

There, I buy things or site seeing wheneverbrowse for things I want.

Unlikely other people, I usually use fountain pens more than 7in 7 different colors.

I also use a fountain to write.

Because, ink hais a lot of water than ballpoint pens, so the papers are also important for using fountain pensiquid, which paper to use use is also important.

For arranging my idea, Index cards are good tools.

For arranging my ideas, index cards are good tools.

Of course, for the cards it's possible to use pens.

LikeFor this, there are many things in the stationary shop are waiting for me.

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SummerTeaWater

Dec. 13, 2021

402

Thank you so much!

Stationariesy

"Stationary" refers to all instruments used in writing in general, it doesn't take plural usually.

One of my favorite hobbies areis visiting stationary stores

"One ... **is** visiting stationary stores"
You can think of "one" as the subject here, part of the group "my favourite hobbies". Because of that "is" will be singular.

There, I buy things or site seeingbrowse whenever I want.

"Sight-seeing" is usually used for seeing things when you visit another city/region or country. If you're looking around a store 'look around' or 'browse' is better.

Unlikely other people, I usually use fountain pens more than 7 colours of fountain pen.

Some suggestions: "I usually use multicoloured fountain pens" or "I use many colours of fountain pen together."

NI am interested in new pens and inks with beautiful color are my interesturs.

"are my interest" isn't really a natural way to show interest in English.

Because,Since ink has a lot ofmore water than ballpoint pens, so the papers arepaper is also important for using fountain pens.

1. "sine" is usually used when you want to emphasise the other part of the sentnece.

2. I put "paper" in the singular here because most people *in this context* would use it as a "mass noun" (like "water", "bread", etc), instead of a "count noun", like "three/four/five papers".

For arranging my ideas, Index cards are good tools.

Of course, ithe cards is possible to use pens with the cards.

Lastly, diaries are very important tofor storeing my memorierecollections and my records.

1. Most people would use "recollections" here instead of "memories", since that usually refers to the version in your head, :p

2. "my" can be used once for both words here

LJust like this, many things in the stationary shop are waiting for me.

1. "Just like ..." is a more natural way to say this.

2. "are waiting for me" is totally fine, but this expression sounds less humanizing, in case that's what you were going for.

Feedback

A few grammar mistakes, but otherwise, the usage of words was quite good. Overall I quite liked it! And I agree with you, stationary is cool :)

SummerTeaWater's avatar
SummerTeaWater

Dec. 13, 2021

402

Thank you very much.

Stationaries


Stationariesy

"Stationary" refers to all instruments used in writing in general, it doesn't take plural usually.

Stationariesery

There is no plural form of the word "stationery."

One of my favorite hobbies are visiting stationary stores


One of my favorite hobbies areis visiting stationary stores

"One ... **is** visiting stationary stores" You can think of "one" as the subject here, part of the group "my favourite hobbies". Because of that "is" will be singular.

One of my favorite hobbies areis visiting stationaery stores

how to remember the difference: a) stationEry = We buy stationEry to write a lEtter b) startionAry = When we stAnd still, we are stationAry

There, I buy things or site seeing whenever I want.


There, I buy things or site seeingbrowse whenever I want.

"Sight-seeing" is usually used for seeing things when you visit another city/region or country. If you're looking around a store 'look around' or 'browse' is better.

There, I buy things or site seeing wheneverbrowse for things I want.

Unlikely other people, I usually use fountain pens more than 7 colors.


Unlikely other people, I usually use fountain pens more than 7 colours of fountain pen.

Some suggestions: "I usually use multicoloured fountain pens" or "I use many colours of fountain pen together."

Unlikely other people, I usually use fountain pens more than 7in 7 different colors.

I also use a fountain to write.

New pens and inks with beautiful color are my interest.


NI am interested in new pens and inks with beautiful color are my interesturs.

"are my interest" isn't really a natural way to show interest in English.

Because, ink has a lot of water than ballpoint pens, so the papers are also important for using fountain pens.


Because,Since ink has a lot ofmore water than ballpoint pens, so the papers arepaper is also important for using fountain pens.

1. "sine" is usually used when you want to emphasise the other part of the sentnece. 2. I put "paper" in the singular here because most people *in this context* would use it as a "mass noun" (like "water", "bread", etc), instead of a "count noun", like "three/four/five papers".

Because, ink hais a lot of water than ballpoint pens, so the papers are also important for using fountain pensiquid, which paper to use use is also important.

For arranging my idea, Index cards are good tools.


For arranging my ideas, Index cards are good tools.

For arranging my idea, Index cards are good tools.

For arranging my ideas, index cards are good tools.

Of course, the cards is possible to use pens.


Of course, ithe cards is possible to use pens with the cards.

Of course, for the cards it's possible to use pens.

Lastly, diaries are very important to store my memories and my records.


Lastly, diaries are very important tofor storeing my memorierecollections and my records.

1. Most people would use "recollections" here instead of "memories", since that usually refers to the version in your head, :p 2. "my" can be used once for both words here

Like this, many things in the stationary shop are waiting for me.


LJust like this, many things in the stationary shop are waiting for me.

1. "Just like ..." is a more natural way to say this. 2. "are waiting for me" is totally fine, but this expression sounds less humanizing, in case that's what you were going for.

LikeFor this, there are many things in the stationary shop are waiting for me.

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