June 25, 2025
Starting again
Today I found an amanzing video on tiktok and in the video a cute girl gave tips for to improve our new language.
And this site was on the list, so I need to give credit fot this amazing girl, because this site is super cool. On 30 minutes I read 2 maybe 3 different coments and I was can be help 2 maybe 3 different person on this hard learming process .
I'm really happy and see another people on the same process give me a different feeling, I feel better and was super important to me!
so, It's my firts text. I hope so you can appreciated my effort.
Hoje eu encontrei um maravilhoso vídeo no tiktok e nesse vídeo, uma garota super fofa dava dicas para você melhorar o seu novo idioma.
E esse site estava nessa lista, então eu preciso dar credito para essa querida (adaptei), porque esse site é super legal. Em 30 minutos eu li dois dou três diferentes comentários e eu consegui ajudar duas ou três pessoas no mesmo difícil processo de aprendizagem.
E estou realmente feliz e ver outras pessoas no mesmo processo me deu um sentimento diferente, eu me sinto melhor e foi super importante para mim.
Então, esse é o meu primeiro texto. Espero que você consiga apreciar meu esforço.
Today I found an amanzing video on tTiktTok and i. In the video, a cute girl gave tips for to improve ouron how to practice a new language.
And thisThis super cool site was on the list, so I need to give credit foto this amazing girl, because this site is super cool.
OIn 30 minutes I read 2 maybeor 3 different comments and I was can becould(?) help 2 maybeor 3 different personople on this hardeir challenging learmning process journey.
I'm really happy andto see another people oin the same process. It giave me a different feeling, and I feel better andt encouraged, which was super important to me!
Alternate: “I’m glad to see other people learning new languages. It encouraged me”
Or “ I was encouraged to see other people like me learning new languages.”
so, It'This is my firtst text.
I hope so you canyou appreciated my effort.
Alternatively, “I hope you can appreciate my effort”
June 26, 2025
make sense!! Thanks :)
Today I found an amanzing video on tiktok (or TikTok) and in the video a cute girl gave tips foron how to improve ourin a new language.
And this site was on the list, so I need to give credit foto this amazing girl, because this site is super cool.
OIn 30 minutes I read 2 maybeor 3 different comments and I was can beable to help 2 maybeor 3 different person onople with this hard learmning process .
I'm really happy andto see another people onexperiencing the same process give me a different feeling,. (or ; ) I feel better and it was super important to me!
I'm a little confused on what you're trying to say here.
sSo, It'this is my firtst text (or post).
I hope so you can appreciated my effort.
Sounds a little unnatural to say "appreciate my effort", but not wrong. Maybe say "appreciate the effort"?
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It's a good start! You've mixed up some prepositions like "with, on, in."
June 26, 2025
use IN or ON are super hard for me, but the corrections were super important!
Thanks :)
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And this site was on the list, so I need to give credit fot this amazing girl, because this site is super cool. And this site was on the list, so I need to give credit
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On 30 minutes I read 2 maybe 3 different coments and I was can be help 2 maybe 3 different person on this hard learming process .
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I'm really happy and see another people on the same process give me a different feeling, I feel better and was super important to me! I'm really happy I'm a little confused on what you're trying to say here. I'm really happy Alternate: “I’m glad to see other people learning new languages. It encouraged me” Or “ I was encouraged to see other people like me learning new languages.” |
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so, It's my firts text.
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I hope so you can appreciated my effort. I hope Sounds a little unnatural to say "appreciate my effort", but not wrong. Maybe say "appreciate the effort"? I hope Alternatively, “I hope you can appreciate my effort” |
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