Sept. 10, 2025
Starting a new journey
I'm going to start collage a few weeks later. Law School. This makes me feel so nervous, cause a few months ago I was just a kid that she couldn't get herself out of the bed. I still feel like a high school girl. The biggest thought that bothering me these day is, "What if I am still not old or mature enough? What if when I went to my first class and feel like every student that around me are really feel like adults nd ready for the collage life but I am not?" life suddenly told me "You are an adult now! You're gonna study law, exams are so hard, confuse. There is long books and long articles you should read, study." etc.
Bir kaç hafta sonra üniversiteye başlayacağım. Hukuk Fakültesi. Bu beni çok geriyor, çünkü birkaç ay önce kendini yataktan kaldıramayan bir kızdım. Hala lise öğrencisi gibi hissediyorum. Bu günlerde beni en çok rahatsız eden düşünce, "Ya hala yeterince olgun veya yetişkin değilsem? Ya ilk dersime gittiğimde etrafımdaki her öğrenci gerçekten üniversite hayatına hazır bir yetişkinse ve ben öyle değilsem?
Hayat birden bire bana çıkıp "Artık bir yetişkinsin! Hukuk okuyacaksın, sınavlar zor ve karışık. Okuman gereken uzun kitaplar ve makaleler var." dedi
Starting a new journey
I'm going to start collage in a few weeks later.
Law School.
This makes me feel so nervous, because a few months ago, I was just a kid that shewho couldn't get herself out of the bed.
"cause" is okay colloquially but in writing it's best to use the full "because"
I still feel like a high school girl.
The biggest thought that is bothering me these day is, "What if I am still not old or mature enough?
What if when I wentgo to my first class and, I feel like everyall the student thats around me are really feel like adults more mature and ready for the collage life but I am not?"
lLife suddenly told me "You are an adult now!
You're gonna study law, e! Exams are so hard, and confuseing.
There isare long books and long articles you should read, study."
etc.
I'm going to start collaege in a few weeks later.
"a few weeks later" is comparing to something, but since there's no point of comparison here, "in a few weeks" on the other hand implies the reference point is "now"
This makes me feel so nervous, because a few months ago I was just a kid that she couldn't get herself out of the bed.
The biggest thought (that bother / bothering) me these day is, "What if I am still not old or mature enough?
If you use "that" you'd want "bother" to match the habitual tense, while "bothering" doesn't take "that". The difference is very small between the two in meaning, but "bothering" is a little more focused on your current experience.
What if when I wentgo to my first class and, I feel like every student that around me are really feel like adults and are ready for the collaege life but I am not?"
"went" is past tense - but since you're talking about a future worry, you want to use "go" instead.
lLife suddenly told me "You are an adult now!
You're gonna study law, exams are sovery hard, and confuseing.
There isare long books and long articles you should read, and study."
You can't really replace a single "and" with a comma, this kind of listing comma is only used for 3+ items, not for 2 items
Starting a new journey
I'm going to start collage a few weeks later.
This makes me feel so nervous, because a few months ago, I was just a kid that shewho couldn't get herself out of the bed.
You were sick?
I still feel like a high school girl.
The biggest thought that botherings me these days is, "What if I am still not old or mature enough?
What if when I wentgo to my first class and feel like every student that around me are really feelbehaves like adults and is ready for the collaege life, but I am not?"
Went - past tense
lLife suddenly told me, "You are an adult now!
You're gonnaing to study law,; exams are so hard, and confuseing.
There isare loengthy books and long articles you should read, and study."
Feedback
It's okay to feel nervous. Don't think too much about it. Everything will be alright.
I hope you'll have a lovely time at college.
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