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Jobs and 2nd hand computer

I learning Japanese and I get a certificated.

So, I start looking for jobs with Japanese language skill require.

But around 90% of jobs (Japan Company or Japanese related) are held in local agents.

You can argue that why not direct send your CV to a specific company.

Yes, you can but I believe the success rate will less than 1%.

Recently I want to buy a second hand computer.

So, I check out few popular local web site sells second computers.

But around 90% computers I can find were come from the local 2nd computer shops.

They take over the web site and set their own stand price range for 2nd computers.

Nothing is fair.

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Jobs and 2nd hand computer


Jobs and 2Second hand cComputers Jobs and Secondhand Computers

I learning Japanese and I get a certificated.


I am learning Japanese and I geot a certificated. I am learning Japanese and I got a certificate.

So, I start looking for jobs with Japanese language skill require.


So, I started looking for jobs withat require Japanese language skill requires. So I started looking for jobs that require Japanese language skills.

It is better to connect this to the previous sentence with a comma.

But around 90% of jobs (Japan Company or Japanese related) are held in local agents.


But around 90% of jobs (Japan Company orthat are Japanese-related or offered by Japanese related)companies are held inby local agents. But around 90% of jobs that are Japanese-related or offered by Japanese companies are held by local agents.

You can argue that why not direct send your CV to a specific company.


You can argue that why notone could directly send youtheir CV to a specific company. You can argue that one could directly send their CV to a specific company.

Yes, you can but I believe the success rate will less than 1%.


Yes, you can but I believe the success rate for that will be less than 1%. You can but I believe the success rate for that will be less than 1%.

Recently I want to buy a second hand computer.


Recently, I wanted to buy a second hand computer. Recently, I wanted to buy a second hand computer.

So, I check out few popular local web site sells second computers.


So, I checked out a few popular local web sites that sells secondhand computers. So I checked out a few popular local websites that sell secondhand computers.

It's better to connect this to the previous sentence.

But around 90% computers I can find were come from the local 2nd computer shops.


But around 90% of the computers I canould find were cocame from the local 2secondhand computer shops. But around 90% of the computers I could find came from the local secondhand computer shops.

They take over the web site and set their own stand price range for 2nd computers.


They take over the web site and set their own stand price range for 2secondhand computers. They take over the website and set their own price range for secondhand computers.

Nothing is fair.


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