Wedding party Wedding

"Wedding" is a more common term for "wedding party"

The Wedding party The Wedding

In English, you generally need an article in from of a noun, especially in a title. You are really talking about weddings, and not so much about the wedding party or wedding reception, therefore, I deleted "party"

I attended a wedding party at noon, and the scenery was really amazing. I attended a wedding party at noon, and the scenery was amazing.

"amazing" is already very strong, so you don't need "really".

I attended a wedding party at noon, and the scenery was really amazing. I attended a wedding at noon, and the scenery was really amazing.

Splendid and imposingIt was splendid. It was splendid.

"Imposing" isn't a common word but it is sometimes used in fiction.

Splendid and imposing. Splendid and imposing.

I would actually combine the two sentences like this: I attended a wedding party at noon, and the scene was really amazing, splendid and imposing.

Back toin my childhood, marriage in the countryside was really simple. Back in my childhood, marriage in the countryside was really simple.

Back toIn my childhood, marriage in the countryside was really simple. In my childhood, marriage in the countryside was really simple.

Back toin my childhood, marriage in the countryside was really simple. Back in my childhood, marriage in the countryside was really simple.

I think it sounds more natural to use "in" instead of "to". "To" implies you were just talking about another time in your life, and now you want to go back to the topic of your childhood.

It was like an ox-cart with onea meal, and some fire crackers were enough. It was like an ox-cart with a meal and some fire crackers were enough.

"a" sounds better than "one".

It was likenough to just have an ox-cart with one, a meal, and some fire crackers were enough. It was enough to just have an ox-cart, a meal, and some fire crackers.

I'm not sure what you are trying to say about the oxcart and the meal. An oxcart is an inanimate object and cannot have a meal. I changed it according to my guess, but the new sentence may not be what you had in mind.

Sometimes, ithe wedding was even simpler. Sometimes, the wedding was even simpler.

Since you have introduced other nouns, when you use "it" again, you need to make it clear what you are talking about. I

You just needed a bike to pick up the bride up. You just needed a bike to pick up the bride.

I probably would use this sentence in the passive form, because the audience does not know who "you" is referring to.

When I got married, I borrowed an old Shanghai brand car to pick up my wife. When I got married, I borrowed an old Shanghai brand car to pick up my wife.

This sentence is grammatically correct, but it sounds a bit odd to say an old Shanghai brand car.

At the time, it was even hard to buy a bike.! At the time, it was even hard to buy a bike!

Your writing is correct, the exclamation mark just adds more expression.

At theat time, it was even hard to even buy a bike.; therefore, At that time, it was hard to even buy a bike; therefore,

Using a car to pick up the bride was reallvery luxurious, but it seemed everyone got married in this way at that time. Using a car to pick up the bride was very luxurious, but it seemed everyone got married in this way at that time.

You used "really" twice already, so I picked another adverb for you.

U,using a car to pick up the bride was considered really luxurious, but. Now it seems liked everyone got married in this way at that time.is doing it this. ,using a car to pick up the bride was considered really luxurious. Now it seems like everyone is doing it this.

LBut life sucks. But life sucks.

Your writing makes sense, it flows better this way though.

Life sucks.is ironic. Life is ironic.

I would never use "sucks" in writing. It is very informal and typically used orally, not in a serious story. Also, in reading the rest of your story, I think ironic is a better word to describe your opinion.

When you are young and poor, you can't give your other sidehalf what she wants. When you are young and poor, you can't give your other half what she wants.

The saying goes "other half" or "better half".

When you are young and poor, you can't give your other sidepartner what she wants. When you are young and poor, you can't give your partner what she wants.

When you are young and poor, you can't give your other sidwife what she wants. When you are young and poor, you can't give your wife what she wants.

When you get older, and ricbecome rich enough to afford those things, she doesn't need them anymore. When you get older, and become rich enough to afford those things, she doesn't need them anymore.

When you getare old and rich enough to afford thosnice things, she doesn't need them anymore. When you are old and rich enough to afford nice things, she doesn't need them anymore.