The nature (or natural scenery) in Konpira shrine hwas very beautiful nature. The nature (or natural scenery) in Konpira shrine was very beautiful.

The nature surrounding Konpira shrine hais very beautiful nature. The nature surrounding Konpira shrine is very beautiful.

I liked the bird voice calls, especially the Japanese bush warbler,. This voice made me feel calm. I liked the bird calls, especially the Japanese bush warbler. This voice made me feel calm.

I don't think we use "bird voices" much. We're more likely to use "bird sounds" or "birdsong" or even "bird calls".

I like bird voice song, especially the sound of the Japanese bush warbler, This voice made me. It's chirping makes me feel calm. I like bird song, especially the sound of the Japanese bush warbler. It's chirping makes me feel calm.

I want to go to there again. I want to go there again.

I want to go to there again. I want to go there again.

The continuedation of yesterday The continuation of yesterday

The cContinued ofrom yesterday. Continued from yesterday.

From June 7 to 8 , I went to Kagawa prefecture with my father. From June 7 to 8, I went to Kagawa prefecture with my father.

From June 7th to 8 the 8th, I went to Kagawa prefecture with my father. From June 7th to the 8th, I went to Kagawa prefecture with my father.

Actually , there was another big purpose. Actually, there was another big purpose.

Actually , there was another big purposeimportant reason. Actually, there was another important reason.

It was to go to kKonpira mMountain. It was to go to Konpira Mountain.

It wasnted to go to kKonpira mountain. It wanted to go to Konpira mountain.

There wasere many different things there, such as a famous hot spring , a famous shrine, food, and hotels. There were many different things there, such as a famous hot spring, a famous shrine, food, and hotels.

There wasare many different things there such as famous hot spring s, famous shrines, food and hotels. There are many different things there such as famous hot springs, famous shrines, food and hotels.

The Konpira hot spring was the best hot spring in my life. The Konpira hot spring was the best hot spring in my life.

I think it would be more natural to say "The Konpira Hot Spring was the best hot spring I've ever been to in my life".

The Konpira hot spring was the best hot spring inof my life. The Konpira hot spring was the best hot spring of my life.

The hotel that I went to has a big hot spring , there. It wasn't very crowded, and it was very conmfortable. The hotel that I went to has a big hot spring. It wasn't very crowded, and it was very comfortable.

The hotel that I went to has had a big hot spring , ithere wasn't crowded andthere and was very conmfortable. The hotel that I went to had a big hot spring, it wasn't crowded there and was very comfortable.

The food shoprestaurant near the hotel was also good . The restaurant near the hotel was also good.

The food shoptalls near the hotel wasere also good . The food stalls near the hotel were also good.

This place is famous for chicken with bones and also udon. This place is famous for chicken with bones and also udon.

Thisat place is famous for chicken with bones and also udonfor udon noodles. That place is famous for chicken with bones and also for udon noodles.

This, if you are writing it as if you are still there, otherwise 'that' if you've already come back.

After taking a bath, we were going to eat those insome at midnight. After taking a bath, we were going to eat some at midnight.

"We were going" sounds like you intended to go eat at the restaurant, but didn't end up going. If you did actually eat at the restaurant, I would say something like "After taking a bath, we went to eat there at midnight."

After taking a bath, we were going to eat those inat midnight. After taking a bath, we were going to eat those at midnight.

MatchingThe combination of coke and chicken werewas very good combination. The combination of coke and chicken was very good.

"coke" without the capitalisation is ok to use in casual writing, but be aware that "coke" can also be slang for "cocaine"! If you want to remove ambiguity, you could write "Coke" or "Coca-Cola"

Matching of cCoke and chicken were a very good combination. Coke and chicken were a very good combination.

I remember this taste. I remember this taste.

"I remember this taste" doesn't express any positive emotion towards the taste. If you want to express that the Coke and chicken tasted good, then you could write "I really like how it tasted." or "The taste was amazing/The taste was the best." If you want to express that the taste was very good and mention something about remembering it, you could say "I'll never forget how good it tasted" or "I still remember how good it tasted."

I remember thise taste. I remember the taste.

You could say that too.