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Journal 10/31/20

I fell asleep without taking off my clothes last night, and I woke up at 4 am this morning. I try to fall asleep again, but I cannot make it. I didn't know what I should do at the time, and I just wrote some English sentences about what I thought. Because I won't return to the hotel at noon when I leave the hotel in the morning, it would be better to check my belongings before I check out in case some carryons are left because of carelessness. In fact, 5 hours of sleep is not enough for a person my age, and I feel a little sleepy right now, but I can't fall asleep anymore. So that is it, and let me recheck my paragraph again.

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Journal 10/31/20

I fell asleep without taking off my clothes last night, and I woke up at 4 am this morning.

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Journal 10/31/20


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I fell asleep without taking off my clothes last night, and I woke up at 4 am this morning.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I fell asleep without taking off my clothes last night, and I woke up at 4 am this morning. I fell asleep without taking off my clothes last night and woke up at 4 am this morning.

I try to fall asleep again, but I cannot make it.


I tryied to fall asleep again, but I cannot make iouldn't. I tried to fall asleep again, but I couldn't.

I tryied to fall asleep again, but I cannot makeould not do it. I tried to fall asleep again, but I could not do it.

Make sure your verb tenses are consistent :)

I didn't know what I should do at the time, and I just wrote some English sentences about what I thought.


Since I didn't know what I should do at the time, andto do, I just wrote some English sentences about what Imy thoughts. Since I didn't know what I to do, I just wrote some English sentences about my thoughts.

I didn't know what I shouldto do at the time, andso I just wrote some English sentences about what I thoughtwas thinking. I didn't know what to do at the time, so I just wrote some English sentences about what I was thinking.

Because I won't return to the hotel at noon when I leave the hotel in the morning, it would be better to check my belongings before I check out in case some carryons are left because of carelessness.


Because I won't returnbe coming back to the hotel at noon when I leave the hotelfter I leave in the morning, it would be better to check my belongings before I check out, in case some carryons are left because of carelessnesI forget some carry-ons. Because I won't be coming back to the hotel after I leave in the morning, it would be better to check my belongings before I check out, in case I forget some carry-ons.

Because I won't be returning to the hotel at noon when I leave the hotelroom again after I leave in the morning, it would be betteras best to check my belongings before I check out. That way, in case some carryons are left because of carelessness, I will be able to notice them. Because I won't be returning to the hotel room again after I leave in the morning, it was best to check my belongings before I check out. That way, in case some carryons are left because of carelessness, I will be able to notice them.

In fact, 5 hours of sleep is not enough for a person my age, and I feel a little sleepy right now, but I can't fall asleep anymore.


In fact, 5 hours of sleep is not enough for a person my age, and. I feel a little sleepy right now, but I can't fall asleep anymore. 5 hours of sleep is not enough for a person my age. I feel a little sleepy right now, but I can't fall asleep anymore.

In fact, 5 hours of sleep is not enough for a person my age, and I feel a little sleepy right now, but I can't fall asleep anymore. 5 hours of sleep is not enough for a person my age, and I feel a little sleepy right now, but I can't fall asleep anymore.

I removed the "In fact" part because it didn't feel quite right. Usually you would use that phrase when you're clarifying facts from a previous statement, but there's no clear connection in this case.

So that is it, and let me recheck my paragraph again.


So, that is it, and l's all. Let me recheck my paragraph again. So, that's all. Let me recheck my paragraph again.

So that is it, and let meI will recheck my paragraph again. So that is it, and I will recheck my paragraph again.

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