Nov. 11, 2024
Squirrels and Rats
I often see a squirrel in my backyard, the agile rodent animal with a bushy tail seems not to be afraid of me. We face each other, but the cute animal will quickly run away when we get to close in around three meters. Rats, however, I dislike really. In my eyes, their main difference is their tails. I favour fluffy tails but the thiner one for the rats makes me disgusted.
松鼠与老鼠
我经常再我家后院看到一只松鼠，这种敏捷的带毛茸茸尾巴的动物似乎并不怕我。我们相互对视，但当我们间距只有约三米的时候，这只可爱的动物会跑开。然而，我不喜欢老鼠。我的眼里，他们最最主要的区别就是尾巴。我喜欢蓬松的尾巴，但老鼠细长的尾巴却让我厌恶。
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Nov. 12, 2024
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Squirrels and Rats
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Nov. 12, 2024
Thank you for your corrections!
Squirrels and Rats
I often see a squirrel in my backyard, the agile rodent animal with a bushy tail seems to not to be afraid of me.
We face each other, but the cute animal will quickly run away when we get too close in around three meters.
"to close in" - close is used here as a verb e.g "The police seemed to be closing in".
"too close in" - close is used as an adjective "We were close"
Rats, however, I dislike really.
In my eyes, their main difference is their tails.
I favour fluffy tails but the thiner one for the rats makes me disgusted.
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Good writing! I agree haha
Nov. 11, 2024
Thank you for your corrections!
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