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sachisachi

Jan. 8, 2025

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Squid Game Season 2 (111)

I had a bad cold on New Year's Day.

My body felt really heavy and I had cough. I had the worst condition for the beginning of New Year.

On the first day (after I had the cold), I slept all day.

On the second day, I didn't feel tired, so I decided to watch the Netflix series Squid Game Season 2.

I've always been looking forward to the Season 2 since I watched the Season 1.

It was amazing, as I expected. I ended up watching all the 7 episodes twice.

However, it ended with a cliffhanger, and apparently it will continue in Season 3.

I can't wait the Season 3.


お正月にひどい風邪をひいてしまいました。

身体がめちゃめちゃだるくて咳が出て、正月早々、最悪のコンディションでした。

一日目丸々一日寝ていました。

二日目、眠くなかったので、イカゲームシーズン2を見ることにしました。

シーズン1を見て以来、ずっとシーズン2を楽しみにしていました。

思った通りめちゃめちゃ面白くて、7話全部を二回見ました。

でも、いいところで話が終わってしまって、話はシーズン3に続くようです。

早くシーズン3が見たい!

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My body felt really heavy and I also had cough.

On the second day, I didn't feel tired, so I decided to watch the new Netflix series called Squid Game Season 2.

I've always been looking forward to the Season 2 since I had a lot of fun watcheding the Season 1.

I ended up watching all of the 7 episodes twice.

However, it ended with a cliffhanger, and apparently it will be continued in Season 3.

I can't wait for the Season 3.

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sachisachi

Jan. 8, 2025

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Thank you so much for your corrections!

Squid Game Season 2

I had a bad cold on New Year's Day.

My body felt really heavy and I had a cough.

I had the worst condition forat the beginning of the New Year.

Or you can write, "I was in the worst condition at the beginning of the New Year."

On the first day (after I had the cold), I slept all day.

On the second day, I didn't feel tired, so I decided to watch the Netflix series Squid Game Season 2.

I've always been looking forward to the Season 2 since I watched the Season 1.

It was amazing, as I expected.

I ended up watching all the 7 episodes twice.

However, it ended with a cliffhanger, and apparently it will continue in Season 3.

I can't wait thefor Season 3.

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Sorry to hear that you had a bad cold. Are you feeling better now?

I've never watched Squid Game, but I'd like to watch it sometime!

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sachisachi

Jan. 8, 2025

1

Thank you so much for your corrections! Now, I'm fully recovered. If you watch Squid Game you should watch from Season 1. It's really exciting story!

Squid Game Season 2

I had a bad cold on New Year's Day.

My body felt really heavy and I had cough.

I had the worst condition for the beginning of New Year.

On the first day (after I had the cold), I slept all day.

On the second day, I didn't feel tired, so I decided to watch the Netflix series Squid Game Season 2.

I've always been looking forward to the Season 2 since I watched the Season 1.

No need to add "the".

"Season 1" and "Season 2" are proper nouns.

It was amazing, as I expected.

I ended up watching all the 7 episodes twice.

However, it ended with a cliffhanger, and apparently it will continue in Season 3.

I can't wait the Season 3.

Feedback

Great journal! I'm glad you liked Season 2. I loved it too :)

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sayming

Jan. 8, 2025

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Also, the last sentence should be, "I can't wait for Season 3."

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sachisachi

Jan. 8, 2025

1

Thank you so much for your corrections!

Squid Game Season 2

I had a bad cold on New Year's Day.

My body felt really heavy and I had a cough.

I had the worst condition for the beginning of New Year.

To me this would sound a bit more natural: "I had the worst condition to start the New Year."

On the first day (after I had the cold), I slept all day.

On the second day, I didn't feel tired, so I decided to watch the Netflix series Squid Game Season 2.

I've always been looking forward to the Season 2 since I watched the Season 1.

It was amazing, as I expected.

I ended up watching all the 7 episodes twice.

However, it ended with a cliffhanger, and apparently it will continue in Season 3.

I can't wait the Season 3.

sachisachi's avatar
sachisachi

Jan. 8, 2025

1

Thank you so much for your corrections!

Squid Game Season 2


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I had a bad cold on New Year's Day.


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My body felt really heavy and I had cough.


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My body felt really heavy and I had a cough.

My body felt really heavy and I also had cough.

I had the worst condition for the beginning of New Year.


I had the worst condition for the beginning of New Year.

To me this would sound a bit more natural: "I had the worst condition to start the New Year."

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I had the worst condition forat the beginning of the New Year.

Or you can write, "I was in the worst condition at the beginning of the New Year."

It was amazing, as I expected.


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I ended up watching all the 7 episodes twice.


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I ended up watching all of the 7 episodes twice.

However, it ended with a cliffhanger, and apparently it will continue in Season 3.


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However, it ended with a cliffhanger, and apparently it will be continued in Season 3.

I can't wait the Season 3.


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I can't wait the Season 3.

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On the first day (after I had the cold), I slept all day.


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On the second day, I didn't feel tired, so I decided to watch the Netflix series Squid Game Season 2.


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On the second day, I didn't feel tired, so I decided to watch the new Netflix series called Squid Game Season 2.

I've always been looking forward to the Season 2 since I watched the Season 1.


I've always been looking forward to the Season 2 since I watched the Season 1.

I've always been looking forward to the Season 2 since I watched the Season 1.

No need to add "the". "Season 1" and "Season 2" are proper nouns.

I've always been looking forward to the Season 2 since I watched the Season 1.

I've always been looking forward to the Season 2 since I had a lot of fun watcheding the Season 1.

Squid Game Season 2 (111)


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