Dec. 24, 2023
Squid Game
I've been watching the Netflix series Squid Game season2.
I'm up to episode 7.
Maybe you think about it's a quite brutal and scary story, but actually it's not just a brutal story.
It's quite entertaining and it's a story about more like struggle, friendship and determination.
450 people get together in a big room like a dormitory and play games to win big money.
If you lose a game you are eliminated which means death.
If you win a game you can go on to the next game.
Sometimes, you have to choose between life or death in a game.
The characters always struggle to survive, and they are always under the pressure, but they are very brave.
The show portrays their emotions very well.
最近ネットフリックスでイカゲームを見ています。
今、エピソード7です。
多分、あなたは、それはとても怖い野蛮な話だと思うかもしれない。でも、実は、ただの野蛮な話ではありません。
かなり面白い、もっと奮闘と友情と決断のような話です。
４５０人の人が寮のような大きな部屋に集まり大金を勝ち取るためにゲームをします。
もし負けたら排除されます。それは死を意味します。
もしゲームに勝ったら次のゲームに進めます。
時々生きるか死ぬかを選ばなくてはなりません。
登場人物はいつも生き残るために奮闘し、いつもプレッシャーを感じていますが、かれらは勇敢です。
このドラマは登場人物の感情をよく描いています。
I've been watching the Netflix series, Squid Game season2.
I'm up to episode 7.
Maybe you think about Perhaps you might think it's a quite brutal and scary story, but actually it's not just a brutal story.
It's quite entertaining, and it's a story about more like struggle, friendship and determination.
450 people get together in a big room like a dormitory and play games to win biga large amount of money.
‘To win big money’ sounds like you are the presenter of a game show.
If you lose a game, you are eliminated, which means death.
If you win a game you can go on to the next game.
Sometimes, you have to choose between life or death in a game.
The characters always struggle to survive, and othey are always under the pressure, but they are very brave.
The show portrays their emotions very well.
Dec. 24, 2023
It sounds like you are really enjoying the show, Sachi Sachiさん. I’m intrigued to watch it, but I don’t like violent programs. 😂
Dec. 25, 2023
I think it's uncomfortable for you, so you shouldn't watch it. But I'm really enjoying it😅
I've been watching the Season 2 of the Netflix series "Squid Game season2".
Preceding the season of the show with the show's title sounds more natural. A similar rule generally applies to books. It would sound more natural to say. "I read the second Harry Potter book" not "I read Harry Potter book two."
Maybe you think about it's a quite a brutal and scary story, but actually it's not just a brutal story.
No need to include "about" since you go on to say what they are thinking "about".
It's quite entertaining and it's a stmorye about more like struggle, friendship and determination.
"It's" refers to "the story", so it's more appropriate to say "it's a story".
450 people get together in a big room, a bit like a dormitory, and play games to win bigan enormous amount of money.
"Big money" is more of a colloquial phrase, and I don't think that's what you're trying to use here. "Enormous" is a more appropriate adjective to describe money, and it's necessary to qualify that you're referring to the *amount* of money.
If you lose a game, you are eliminated, which means death.
If you win a game, you can go on to the next game.
The characters always struggle to survive, and they are always under the pressure, but they are very brave.
Squid Game
I've been watching the Netflix series Squid Game, season 2.
I'm up to episode 7.
Maybe you think about You might think it's a quite a brutal and scary story, but actually it's not just a brutal storythat.
I simplified it a little to reduce repititon.
It's quite entertaining, and it's a story more about morethings like struggle, friendship and determination.
450 people get together in a big room like a dormitory and play games to win big money.
If you lose a game you are eliminated which means death.
If you win a game you can go on to the next gamone.
Sometimes, you have to choose between life or death in a game.
The characters always struggle to survive, and they are always under the pressure, but they are very brave.
"Under pressure" is a fixed expression and doesn't need a/the.
The show portrays their emotions very well.
Feedback
I've actually never seen that show. There seems to be mixed feelings about it here. I might give it a try since you like it so much! Thanks!
Dec. 24, 2023
Thank you so much for your correction.
I enjoy watching it, but some parts are a little bit uncomfortable. Some people might not like it, but I hope you find it interesting.
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