I do not like it and want to showexpress it clearly! But could I? I do not like it and want to express it clearly! But could I?

I do not like it and want to show it clearly! But couldan I? I do not like it and want to show it clearly! But can I?

Everybodyone who works in a big corporations knows about a "Corporate fFluff". Everyone who works in a big corporations knows about "Corporate Fluff".

"Everyone" sounds more natural here.

Everybody who works in a big corporations knows about a "C"corporate fluff". Everybody who works in a big corporation knows about "corporate fluff".

It means using manya lot of nice words but saying nothing real. It means using a lot of nice words but saying nothing real.

I think thatin recent years this phenomenon has also expanded to a private life and covers almost all social activities. I think in recent years this phenomenon has also expanded to private life and covers almost all social activities.

I think that in recent years this phenomenon has also expanded to a private life and covers almost all social activities. I think that in recent years this phenomenon has also expanded to private life and covers almost all social activities.

- toxic positivity on LinkedIn, peolpe shouldple must always demonstrate a "winning" style. - toxic positivity on LinkedIn, people must always demonstrate a "winning" style.

- toxic positivity on LinkedIn, peolple should always demonstrate a "win" stylener's" mindset. - toxic positivity on LinkedIn, people should always demonstrate a "winner's" mindset.

"win" style is weird, I can't tell what you mean...

If they start to critiscize something, they risk to bebeing labeled as "difficult" If they start to criticize something, they risk being labeled as "difficult"

If they start to critiscize something they risk to bebeing labeled as "difficult" If they start to criticize something they risk being labeled as "difficult"

- "always 5 star" service industries are expected to be only 5 -star in the reports and never any other level. - "always 5 star" service industries are expected to be only 5-star in the reports and never any other level.

- "always 5 star" service industries are expected to be only 5 -star only in the reports and never any other level. - "always 5 star" service industries are expected to be 5 -star only in the reports and never any other level.

"only" in front of 5-star makes it sound like 5-stars is a low rating. "only" in front of "in the reports" emphasizes that it's nowhere else but in the reports

This pressures people to write always write the formal phrase "It was great!". This pressures people to always write the formal phrase "It was great!".

This pressures people to write always write the formal "It was great!". This pressures people to always write the formal "It was great!"

And visce versa - the empty and extremely evident information consideris looked ast as "opening eyes", "rare" and "extremely helpful and priceless" And vice versa - empty and extremely evident information is looked at as "opening eyes", "rare" and "extremely helpful and priceless"

And visce versa - (the) empty and extremely evident information is considered as a ""eye opening eyes",," "rare," and "extremely helpful and priceless" And vice versa - (the) empty and extremely evident information is considered as "eye opening," "rare," and "extremely helpful and priceless"