Dec. 16, 2022
”SPY x FAMILY"
I began reading the comic called ”SPY x FAMILY" which was recommended by my friend earlier.
She said a character named Anya, who is little girl, is very cute.
After reading, I agree with that.
”SPY x FAMILY" is a fake family’s story.
A spy man adopted a little girl, Anya for his mission.
In fact, Anya is an esper and she can read people's minds.
In addition, her step mother is an assassin, and they have a dog with precognition comes out.
All of them make secret about themselves, but Anya know their parents’s job, because she can read their minds.
It's a comedy and positive story so I enjoy reading it.
以前に友達がオススメしてくれた『SPY x FAMILY』という漫画を読みはじめました。
友達は、女の子のキャラクターがとても可愛いと言っていました。
私もその意見に賛成します。
この物語は、偽物の家族の話です。
あるスパイの男が任務のために孤児を養女にします。
実はその女の子はエスパーで、人の心が読めました。
その他にも母親が殺し屋だったり、予知能力のある犬が出てきたりします。
彼らはみんな自分のことを秘密にしているのですが、女の子は、自分が人の考えていることがわかるのて、父母の職業も知っています。
コメディで明るので、楽しく読めます。
”SPY x FAMILY"
I began reading the comic (called) ”SPY x FAMILY" which was recommended by my friend earlier.
I began reading the comic ”SPY x FAMILY" which was recommended by my friend earlier.
She said a character named Anya, who is a little girl, is very cute.
After reading it, I agree with that.
”SPY x FAMILY" is a fake family’s story.
A spy man adopted a little girl, Anya, for his mission.
In fact, Anya is an esper andso she can read people's minds.
In addition, her step mother is an assassin, and they also have a dog with precognition comes out.
All of them makhave secrets about themselves, but Anya knows their parents’s jobs, because she can read their minds.
It's a comedy ands well as a positive story so I enjoy reading it.
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よく出来ました！
After reading, I agree with tha for a while, I liked it.
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Dec. 17, 2022
Thank you for your corrections.
”SPY x FAMILY"
I began reading thea comic called ”SPY x FAMILY" which was recommended by my friend earlier.
She said a character named Anya, who is little girl, is very cute.
After reading, I agree with that.
It might be more natural to say "After reading, I find that I agree." but your original sentence is also correct.
”SPY x FAMILY" is the story of a fake family’s story.
A spy man adopteds a little girl, Anya for his mission.
In addition, her step mother is an assassin, and they have a dog with precognition comes outve abilities.
All of them makeThey all keep secret about themselves, but Anya knows their parents’s job, because she can read their minds.
It's a comedy and positive story so I enjoy reading it.
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Sounds interesting, I'll have to check it out! Good writing!
Dec. 17, 2022
Thank you for your corrections.
I began reading thea comic called ”SPY x FAMILY" which was recommended to me by mya friend earlier.
SheMy friend said a character named Anya, who is a little girl, is very cute.
After reading the comic, I agree with thather opinion.
Be sure when using pronouns "that, she, it, etc." your reader can be sure about the subject you're referencing.
”SPY x FAMILY" is the story of a fake family’s story.
A spy man who adopteds a little girl, Anya for his mission.
Try to stay in the same tense. This story "is", about a man who "adopts". Ex. "The dog sleeps and dreamt of running" (incorrect). "The dog sleeps and dreams of running" (correct). Sorry I hope that's clear. Present tense or past tense but not both.
In fact, Anya is an esper and she can read people's minds.
In addition, her stepHer fake mother is an assassin, and they have a dog with precognition comes out.
All of them makeep secrets about themselves, but Anya knows their parents’s job,s because she can read their minds.
It's a comedy and a positive story so I enjoyed reading it.
Keep present tense or past tense.
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This was easy to understand and I think you did a good job overall.
Dec. 17, 2022
Thank you for your corrections and comments.
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