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Spring Water and Mineral Water

We call a bottle of spring water a bottle of mineral water in Japan. The name of the mineral water is very commonly used in Japan. However, when I mentioned mineral water, an American did not understand what I was referring to. I was totally upset, because I thought that I couldn't make myself understood with my pronunciation at that time. The American told me later that so-called mineral water was not so commonly used in America. It is called spring water or merely a bottle of water.

I thought it over for the time being. When the Japanese company wanted to sell spring water for the first time. I'm sure the company was perplexed about how to sell the water in Japan. The water in Japan is free of charge and you are able to drink as well. What kind of person in Japan want to buy the water?

So the company named it something special like the mineral water because it is supposed to contain much more minerals than plain water in Japan. Even I have believed that for a long time. Lately I learned the plain water in Japan contained much more minerals than a bottle of spring water imported from France. I learned the spring water imported from foreign countries and products in Japan are just plain water, and nothing special at all. It's so laughable, isn't it?

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Spring Water and Mineral Water

WIn Japan, we call a bottle of spring water, a bottle of "mineral water in Japan."

The correction above is another way of writing the sentence to make it a little more clear what you're comparing.

The name of the term "mineral water" is verymore commonly used in Japan. than the term "spring water."

However, wWhen I mentioned "mineral water," however, an American did not understand to what I was referring to.

In more formal writing, we try to avoid beginning a sentence with "however." We also try to avoid ending a sentence with a preposition.

I was totally upset, because I thought that I couldn't make myself understood with my pronunciation at that time, at the time, I thought my pronunciation was keeping me from being understood.

The American told me later that so-called the term "mineral water wa" is not so commonlyoften used in America.

I'm not sure I agree with the statement the American here made. I feel a lot of us would've known what you meant.

It is called "spring water " or merely a "a bottle of water."

Cultural note: We usually call it "bottled water."

I thought it over forin the meantime being.

When thea Japanese company wanted to sell spring water for the first time, I'm sure the company was perplexed about how to sell it in Japan.

This phrase is incomplete without the next sentence.

I'm sure the company was perplexed about how to sell the water in Japan.

The wWater in Japan is free of charge and you are ableand everyone is allowed to drink it as well.

What kind of person in Japan wants to buy the water?

So the company named it something special like the "mineral water because it is supposed to contain much" to make it seem like the water had many more minerals than plain water in Japan.

EFor a long time, even I have believed that for a long timeit.

Stylistically, this is how we'd usually write or say it in the US.

LateRecently I learned that the plain water in Japan contained muchs many more minerals than a bottle ofd spring water imported from France.

The phrase in the clause after the word "that" is present tense because you're stating a fact.

I learned that the spring water imported from foreign countries and the spring water products in Japan are just plain water, and nothing special at all.

It's so laughable, isn't ridiculous, isn't it?¶

or¶

It's so ironic, isn't
it?

We don't usually use the word "laughable." We usually use words like "ridiculous" or "ironic" or even "crazy" to describe a situation like this.

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You did a very good job on a topic which would be difficult to write about clearly even for Americans. Some people wouldn't use the quotation marks but I like them because they make the sentences easier to read and understand that you're comparing linguistic terms used in one country and not another. Keep up the good work!

Spring Water and Mineral Water

We call a bottle of spring water a bottle of mineral water in Japan.

The name of the mineral water is very commonly used in Japan.

However, when I mentioned mineral water, an American did not understand what I was referring to.

I was totally upset, Bbecause I thought that I couldn't make myself understood with my pronunciation at that time.

The American told me later that so-called mineral water was not so commonly used in the America.

It is called a spring water or merely a bottle of water.

I thought it over it for athe time being.

When theUntil a Japanese company wanted to sell the spring waters for the first time.

I'm sure the company was perplexed about how to sell the water in Japan.

The water in Japan is free of charge, and byou are able to drink it as well.

What kind of persons in Japan would want to buy the water?

So the company named it something special like the mineral water whichbecause it is supposed to contain much more minerals than plain water in Japan.

Even I have believed that way for a long time.

Lately I came to knowlearned that the plain water in Japan contained minerals much more minerals than a bottle of spring water imported from France.

I came to know the learned that spring waters imported from foreign countries and products in Japan are just plain waters, and nothing special ones at all.

It's so laughable, isn't it?

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You were pretty good overall, but you had some spacing issues and a few misspellings. Also, make sure that you check the plurals on words.

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Acky

Jan. 7, 2021

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Spring Wate and Mineral Water.


We call a bottle of spring water a bottle of mineral water in Japan.


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WIn Japan, we call a bottle of spring water, a bottle of "mineral water in Japan."

The correction above is another way of writing the sentence to make it a little more clear what you're comparing.

The name of the mineral water is very commonly used in Japan.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The name of the term "mineral water" is verymore commonly used in Japan. than the term "spring water."

However, when I mentioned mineral water, an American did not understand what I was referring to.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

However, wWhen I mentioned "mineral water," however, an American did not understand to what I was referring to.

In more formal writing, we try to avoid beginning a sentence with "however." We also try to avoid ending a sentence with a preposition.

I was totally upset, Because I thought that I couldn't make myself understood with my pronunciation at that time.


I was totally upset, Bbecause I thought that I couldn't make myself understood with my pronunciation at that time.

The American told me later that so-called mineral water was not so commonly used in the America.


The American told me later that so-called mineral water was not so commonly used in the America.

It is called a spring water or merely a bottle of water.


It is called a spring water or merely a bottle of water.

I thought over it for a time being.


I thought it over it for athe time being.

When the Japanese company wanted to sell the spring waters for the first time.


When theUntil a Japanese company wanted to sell the spring waters for the first time.

I'm sure the company was perplexed how to sell the water in Japan.


I'm sure the company was perplexed about how to sell the water in Japan.

The water in Japan is free of charge and be able to drink as well.


The water in Japan is free of charge, and byou are able to drink it as well.

What kind of persons in Japan want to buy the water?


What kind of persons in Japan would want to buy the water?

So the company named it something special like the mineral water which is supposed to contain much more minerals than plain water in Japan.


So the company named it something special like the mineral water whichbecause it is supposed to contain much more minerals than plain water in Japan.

Even I have believed that way for a long time.


Even I have believed that way for a long time.

Lately I came to know the plain water in Japan contained minerals much more than a bottle of spring water imported from France.


Lately I came to knowlearned that the plain water in Japan contained minerals much more minerals than a bottle of spring water imported from France.

I came to know the spring waters imported from foeign countris and products in Japan are just plain waters, nothing special ones at all.


I came to know the learned that spring waters imported from foreign countries and products in Japan are just plain waters, and nothing special ones at all.

It's so laghable, isn't it?


It's so laughable, isn't it?

Spring Wate and Mineral Water


Spring Water and Mineral Water

I came to know the spring waters imported from foein countries and products in Japan are just plain waters, nothing special ones at all.


It's so laughable, isn't it?


It's so laughable, isn't ridiculous, isn't it?¶

or¶

It's so ironic, isn't
it?

We don't usually use the word "laughable." We usually use words like "ridiculous" or "ironic" or even "crazy" to describe a situation like this.

I came to know the spring waters imported from foreign countries and products in Japan are just plain waters, nothing special ones at all.


I was totally upset, because I thought that I couldn't make myself understood with my pronunciation at that time.


I was totally upset, because I thought that I couldn't make myself understood with my pronunciation at that time, at the time, I thought my pronunciation was keeping me from being understood.

The American told me later that so-called mineral water was not so commonly used in America.


The American told me later that so-called the term "mineral water wa" is not so commonlyoften used in America.

I'm not sure I agree with the statement the American here made. I feel a lot of us would've known what you meant.

It is called spring water or merely a bottle of water.


It is called "spring water " or merely a "a bottle of water."

Cultural note: We usually call it "bottled water."

I thought it over for the time being.


I thought it over forin the meantime being.

I'm sure the company was perplexed about how to sell the water in Japan.


I'm sure the company was perplexed about how to sell the water in Japan.

The water in Japan is free of charge and you are able to drink as well.


The wWater in Japan is free of charge and you are ableand everyone is allowed to drink it as well.

What kind of person in Japan want to buy the water?


What kind of person in Japan wants to buy the water?

When the Japanese company wanted to sell spring water for the first time.


When thea Japanese company wanted to sell spring water for the first time, I'm sure the company was perplexed about how to sell it in Japan.

This phrase is incomplete without the next sentence.

So the company named it something special like the mineral water because it is supposed to contain much more minerals than plain water in Japan.


So the company named it something special like the "mineral water because it is supposed to contain much" to make it seem like the water had many more minerals than plain water in Japan.

Even I have believed that for a long time.


EFor a long time, even I have believed that for a long timeit.

Stylistically, this is how we'd usually write or say it in the US.

Lately I learned the plain water in Japan contained much more minerals than a bottle of spring water imported from France.


LateRecently I learned that the plain water in Japan contained muchs many more minerals than a bottle ofd spring water imported from France.

The phrase in the clause after the word "that" is present tense because you're stating a fact.

I learned the spring water imported from foreign countries and products in Japan are just plain water, and nothing special at all.


I learned that the spring water imported from foreign countries and the spring water products in Japan are just plain water, and nothing special at all.

Spring Water and Mineral Water


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