March 28, 2022
Spring is coming
Because I have worn a cast on my right foot for 3 weeks, I haven't gone for a walk these days.
Today, I had a change to walk with my children.
And I found out that the flowers are coming around.
I could see the plum blossoms which colored in red and white.
Other flower trees are preparing theirs as well.
For the next week, I will be able to see a lot of flowers in the gardens.
I will take a lot of pictures this spring.
Spring is coming
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Today, I had a changce to walk with my children.
And I found out that the flowers are cblooming around.
I could see the plum blossoms, which colored inwere red and white.
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For the next week, I will be able to see a lot of flowers in the gardens.
I will take a lot of pictures this spring.
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Really good writing! Enjoy seeing the flowers :)
March 29, 2022
Thank you very much.
Spring is coming
Today, I had a changce to walk with my children.
And I found out that the flowers are coming around.
I could see the plum blossoms, which are colored in red and white.
Other flower trees are preparing theirs as well.
For the next week, I will be able to see a lot of flowers in the gardens.
I will take a lot of pictures this spring.
Feedback
This is well written and a really nice read! It's awesome that you were finally able to go on a walk with your kids.
March 29, 2022
Thank you very much. :)
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