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SummerTeaWater

March 31, 2022

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Spring Fever

Recently, I have been really tired during the day.

I assume that it is caused by spring fever.

In order to get rid of spring fever, I used to swim or ride my bicycle before COVID-19.

Now, drinking tea is only way to prevent tired.

My friend suggested me to eat vitamin D supplements, because we weren't under the sun daytime.

He said the vitamin is good for vitality.

I will try to eat it tomorrow.

Corrections

In order to get rid of spring fever, I used to swim or ride my bicycle before COVID-19.

Before COVID-19, I used to swim or ride my bicycle in order to get rid of spring fever.

Now, drinking tea is only way to prevent tired.

Now, drinking tea is the only way to prevent tiredness. (my only way to relieve tiredness)

My friend suggested me to eat vitamin D supplements, because we weren't under the sun daytime.

My friend suggested that I take vitamin D supplements, because I wasn't in the sun during the day. (we aren't in the sun)

I will try to eat it tomorrow.

I will try to take some tomorrow.

Feedback

Nicely done. Thoughts are well-arranged. Sentences are complex.

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SummerTeaWater

April 1, 2022

402

Thank you very much.

Spring Fever

Recently, I have been really tired during the day.

I assume that it is becaused by of spring fever.

Your sentence isn't wrong but using "because of" sounds better

In order to get rid of spring fever, I used to swim or ride my bicycle before COVID-19.

Now, drinking tea is the only way to prevent feeling/being tired.

My friend suggested me to eattaking vitamin D supplements, because we weren't underin the sun daytime.

When talking about medicine, supplements or vitamins we use "to take"
e.g I take my medication every night

He said the vitamin D is good for vitality.

I will try to eataking it tomorrow.

Feedback

Really good writing! I hope you feel better soon :)

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SummerTeaWater

April 1, 2022

402

Thank you very much. :)

Spring Fever


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Recently, I have been really tired during the day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I assume that it is caused by spring fever.


I assume that it is becaused by of spring fever.

Your sentence isn't wrong but using "because of" sounds better

In order to get rid of spring fever, I used to swim or ride my bicycle before COVID-19.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In order to get rid of spring fever, I used to swim or ride my bicycle before COVID-19.

Before COVID-19, I used to swim or ride my bicycle in order to get rid of spring fever.

Now, drinking tea is only way to prevent tired.


Now, drinking tea is the only way to prevent feeling/being tired.

Now, drinking tea is only way to prevent tired.

Now, drinking tea is the only way to prevent tiredness. (my only way to relieve tiredness)

My friend suggested me to eat vitamin D supplements, because we weren't under the sun daytime.


My friend suggested me to eattaking vitamin D supplements, because we weren't underin the sun daytime.

When talking about medicine, supplements or vitamins we use "to take" e.g I take my medication every night

My friend suggested me to eat vitamin D supplements, because we weren't under the sun daytime.

My friend suggested that I take vitamin D supplements, because I wasn't in the sun during the day. (we aren't in the sun)

He said the vitamin is good for vitality.


He said the vitamin D is good for vitality.

I will try to eat it tomorrow.


I will try to eataking it tomorrow.

I will try to eat it tomorrow.

I will try to take some tomorrow.

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