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Dec. 21, 2022

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Sports and health

People usually give little importance to train their bodies every day. When you don't care about that, you can lose muscule and be more and more fragile. Have a sedentarie live can have a impact to other aspects of your life, yo will have more injuries, have less energy, and less motivation to do new things. On the other hand, excessive training may do the contrary efect too. If you do more than you can, you would have a lesion and other muscular problems.
As always, the midpoint is the best selection.

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Sports and hHealth

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

People usually give little importance to trainnotice to their bodies every day.

When you don't care about that, you can lose muscule and become more and more fragile.

Haveing a sedentariey livfe can have an impact ton other aspects of your life,: you will have more injuries, have less energy, and less motivation to do new things.

On the other hand, excessive training may dohave the contraryopposite effect, too.

If you do more than you canare able, you wcould havedevelop a lesion and other muscular problems.

As always, the midpoint is the best selectionmoderation is best.

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Good work!

As always, the midpoint is the best selecit's best to do things in moderation.

Another suggestion to writing this.

Sports and health

People usually give little importance to training their bodies every day.

When you don't care about that, you can lose muscule mass and become more and more fragile.

Haveing a sedentariey livfe can have a impact ton other aspects of your life, yo. You will have more injuries, have less energy, and less motivation to do new things.

On the other hand, excessive training may dohave the contrary effect too.

If you do more than you canare able to, you wouldcan have a lesion and other muscular probproblems with your musclems.

As always, the midpointexercising in moderation is the best selectionchoice.

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Just some spelling issues and some usage mistakes, but otherwise very good! Keep up the good work!

Sports and health

People usually give little importance to train their bodies every day.

When you don't care about that, you can lose muscule and be more and more fragile.

Haveing a sedentarie live can have ay lifestyle can impact to other aspects of your life, yo. You will have more injuries, have less energy, and less motivation to do new things.

On the other hand, excessive training may do the contrary efect toois also bad.

"on the other hand" and "on the contrary" could be used in the same spot at the beginning of this sentence, but using both is a little confusing and may not convey the meaning you want.

If you do more than you canare able, you wcould haveget a lesion andor other muscular problems.

As always, the midpoint is the best selection.

In America, a saying like "the middleground" or "somewhere in the middle" would be more common than midpoint, but its easy to understand your meaning.

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Nice work and well said! Perhaps I'll exercise after work today instead of watching TV.

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Sports and hHealth

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.

People usually give little importance to train their bodies every day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

People usually give little importance to training their bodies every day.

People usually give little importance to trainnotice to their bodies every day.

When you don't care about that, you can lose muscule and be more and more fragile.


When you don't care about that, you can lose muscule and be more and more fragile.

When you don't care about that, you can lose muscule mass and become more and more fragile.

When you don't care about that, you can lose muscule and become more and more fragile.

Have a sedentarie live can have a impact to other aspects of your life, yo will have more injuries, have less energy, and less motivation to do new things.


Haveing a sedentarie live can have ay lifestyle can impact to other aspects of your life, yo. You will have more injuries, have less energy, and less motivation to do new things.

Haveing a sedentariey livfe can have a impact ton other aspects of your life, yo. You will have more injuries, have less energy, and less motivation to do new things.

Haveing a sedentariey livfe can have an impact ton other aspects of your life,: you will have more injuries, have less energy, and less motivation to do new things.

On the other hand, excessive training may do the contrary efect too.


On the other hand, excessive training may do the contrary efect toois also bad.

"on the other hand" and "on the contrary" could be used in the same spot at the beginning of this sentence, but using both is a little confusing and may not convey the meaning you want.

On the other hand, excessive training may dohave the contrary effect too.

On the other hand, excessive training may dohave the contraryopposite effect, too.

If you do more than you can, you would have a lesion and other muscular problems.


If you do more than you canare able, you wcould haveget a lesion andor other muscular problems.

If you do more than you canare able to, you wouldcan have a lesion and other muscular probproblems with your musclems.

If you do more than you canare able, you wcould havedevelop a lesion and other muscular problems.

As always, the midpoint is the best selection.


As always, the midpoint is the best selection.

In America, a saying like "the middleground" or "somewhere in the middle" would be more common than midpoint, but its easy to understand your meaning.

As always, the midpointexercising in moderation is the best selectionchoice.

As always, the midpoint is the best selecit's best to do things in moderation.

Another suggestion to writing this.

As always, the midpoint is the best selectionmoderation is best.

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