Aug. 3, 2025
Sports
Sports provides the opportunity to spend energy and time in one of the healthiest ways available for our generation.
It's easy to make friends when doing sport is a shared habit and those are the most positive communities you could belong.
El deporte brinda la oportunidad de gastar energía y tiempo de una de las maneras más sanas que existen para nuestra generación.
Es fácil hacer amigos cuando hacer deporte es un hábito compartido y esas son las comunidades más positivas a las que se puede pertenecer.
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Aug. 3, 2025
The sentence, it's easy to making friends when doing sport is a shared activity, confused me. It took me a couple of reads to figure out the meaning as: It's easy to make friends when 'doing sport is a shared activity' and those are the most positive communities you could belong to.
A clearer rewrite would be: It's easy to make friends when one plays sports in groups and these groups are the most positive communities one could belong to.
Sports provides the opportunity to spend energy and time in one of the healthiest ways available for our generation.
It's easy to make friends when doing sports is a shared habit, and those are the most positive communities you could belong to.
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You only had a couple of minor grammatical and spelling errors, but otherwise, good job!
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It's easy to make friends when doing sport is a shared habit and those are the most positive communities you could belong. It's easy to make friends when doing sports is a shared habit, and those are the most positive communities you could belong to. It's easy to make friends when |
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