yesterday
Spontaneous writing
I was born in the middle of the year.
In few month, I will be one.
One year on this earth.
I don't know why and how I arrived there, surround by all these strange people.
In particular this lady with her big blue eyes and this man with his deep voice.
The lady talk to me everyday, while I just want to stay alone with my thoughts.
She said "Mama", so I presume it's her name.
Mine would be "little poopy", maybe.
She smell like flowers with milk, strange mix, but not really unpleasant.
The man have the face cover by fur, like the dog.
I don't really like when he kiss me, because it scratch my skin.
People said we have the same eyes, but I hope I wouldn't have the same hair.
Sometimes, he changes his voice and makes funny noises.
I think he's a good guy.
He call me "buddy".
Maybe THAT is my name.
Last day, a woman with the same mama's eyes gave me a teddy bear, but I didn't like her unbereable smell, too aggressive for my little nose.
And for her, my name is "sweetie".
Sorry but.... WHAT IS MY NAME?
In a few months, I will be one.
I don't know why and how I arrived there, surrounded by all these strange people.
In particular, this lady with her big blue eyes and this man with his deep voice.
The lady talks to me everyday, while I just want to staybe alone with my thoughts.
The man have thes' face is covered by fur, like the dog.
I don't really like when he kisses me, because it scratches my skin.
You could add "it" as well - I don't really like it when...
People saidy we have the same eyes, but I hope I wouldn't have the same hair.
He calls me "buddy".
Last Yesterday, a woman with the same mama's eyeseyes as mama gave me a teddy bear, but I didn't like her unbeareable smell, - too aggressive for my little nose.
In a few months, I will be one.
One year on this eEarth.
I don't know why and how I arrived there, surrounded by all these strange people.
The lady talks to me everyday, while I just want to stay alone with my thoughts.
She smells like flowers with milk, a strange mix, but not really unpleasant.
The man have the's face is covered by fur, like thea dog.
I don't really like when he kisses me, because it scratches my skin.
People saidy we have the same eyes, but I hope I wouldn't have the same hair.
He calls me "buddy".
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Spontaneous writing |
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I was born in the middle of the year. |
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In few month, I will be one. In a few months, I will be one. In a few months, I will be one. |
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One year on this earth. One year on this |
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The lady talk to me everyday, while I just want to stay alone with my thoughts. The lady talks to me everyday, while I just want to stay alone with my thoughts. The lady talks to me everyday |
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She said "Mama", so I presume it's her name. |
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Mine would be "little poopy", maybe. |
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She smell like flowers with milk, strange mix, but not really unpleasant. She smells like flowers with milk, a strange mix, but not really unpleasant. |
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The man have the face cover by fur, like the dog. The man The man |
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I don't really like when he kiss me, because it scratch my skin. I don't really like when he kisses me I don't really like when he kisses me You could add "it" as well - I don't really like it when... |
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People said we have the same eyes, but I hope I wouldn't have the same hair. People sa People sa |
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Sometimes, he changes his voice and makes funny noises. |
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I think he's a good guy. |
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I call me "buddy". |
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Maybe THAT is my name. |
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Last day, a woman with the same mama's eyes gave me a teddy bear, but I didn't like her unbereable smel, too aggressive for my little nose. |
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And for her, my name is "sweetie". |
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Sorry but.... |
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WHAT IS MY NAME? |
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I don't know why and how I arrived there, surround by all these strange people. I don't know why and how I arrived I don't know why and how I arrived |
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In particular this lady with her big blue eyes and this man with his deep voice. In particular, this lady with her big blue eyes and this man with his deep voice. |
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He call me "buddy". He calls me "buddy". He calls me "buddy". |
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Last day, a woman with the same mama's eyes gave me a teddy bear, but I didn't like her unbereable smell, too aggressive for my little nose.
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