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milkyway

March 11, 2024

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SPOGOMI World Cup 2023

When I was watching a TV show, they was introducing the World Cup of SPOGOMI.
SPGOMI is a sports version of picking up trash, and I think it's a good idea to have fun and make people think about environmental issues.
The first World Cup was held in Japan in 2023.
Teams from each country was trying to win through teamwork and strategy. It was more of a sport than I thought.
The U.K. team won the game.

Reference site:
https://uminohi.jp/spogomi-worldcup/2023/


スポGOMI ワールドカップ2023

テレビを見ていたら、スポGOMIのワールドカップを紹介していた。
スポGOMIとは、ゴミ拾いをスポーツ化したもので、楽しみながら環境問題について考えたり、考えさせたりする良い取り組みだと思う。
第一回目のワールドカップは日本で開催された。
各国のチームが、チームワークや戦略などで優勝を狙っていて、思ったよりスポーツだった。
イギリスチームが優勝していた。

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SPOGOMI World Cup 2023

When I was watching a TV show, they wasere introducing the World Cup of SPOGOMI.

SPGOMI is a sports version of picking up trash, and I think it's a good idea to have fun and make people thinkaware about environmental issues.

The first World Cup was held in Japan in 2023.

Teams from each country wasere trying to win through teamwork and strategy.

It was more of a sport than I thought.

The U.K. team won the game.

Reference site: https://uminohi.jp/spogomi-worldcup/2023/

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milkyway

March 16, 2024

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Thank you!

WhenAs I was watching a TV show, they was introducinged the World Cup of SPOGOMI.

Teams from each country wasere trying to win through teamwork and strategy.

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Sounds interesting!

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milkyway

March 12, 2024

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Thank you!

SPOGOMI World Cup 2023

When I was watching a TV show, in which they wasere introducing the World Cup of SPOGOMI.

SPGOMI is athe sports version of picking up trash, and I think it's a good idea to have fun and make peopbecause people can have fun while thinking about environmental issues.

The first World Cup was held in Japan in 2023.

Teams from each country was trying to win through teamwork and strategy.

It was more of a sport than I thought.

The U.K. team won the game.

Reference site: https://uminohi.jp/spogomi-worldcup/2023/

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Wow, I think that's a great sport too!

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milkyway

March 12, 2024

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I think so too.
Thank you for your corrections.

When I was watching a TV show, they wasere introducing the SPOGOMI World Cup of SPOGOMI.

3rd person plural takes "were".
"World Cup of SPOGOMI" is grammatically correct, but "SPOGOMI World Cup" sounds more natural.

SPGOMI is a sports version of picking up trash, and I think it's a good idea to have fun and make people think about environmental issues.

This sentence is good in terms of grammar. It may sound better to say "I think it's a good idea to turn it into something fun".

Teams from each country wasere trying to win through teamwork and strategy.

The U.K. team won the game.

It is already known that you are talking about "the game". This sentence is fine, but you can also so "The U.K. team won."

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milkyway

March 12, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections and comments. They are very useful.

Whilen I was watching a TV show, they was introducinged the World Cup of SPOGOMI.

SPGOMI is a sports version of picking up trash, and I think it's a good idea to have fun and make people think about environmental issues.

The first World Cup was held in Japan in 2023.

Teams from each country wasere trying to win through teamwork and strategy.

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milkyway

March 12, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections.

When I was watching a TV show, they wasI watched a TV show introducing the World Cup of SPOGOMI.

SPGOMI is a sports version of picking up trash, and I think it's a good idea to have fun and make people think about environmental issues.

The first World Cup was held in Japan in 2023.

Teams from each country wasere trying to win through teamwork and strategy.

It was more of a sport than I thought.

The U.K. team won the game.

Reference site: https://uminohi.jp/spogomi-worldcup/2023/

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Very interesting.

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milkyway

March 12, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections.

SPOGOMI World Cup 2023


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When I was watching a TV show, they was introducing the World Cup of SPOGOMI.


When I was watching a TV show, they wasI watched a TV show introducing the World Cup of SPOGOMI.

Whilen I was watching a TV show, they was introducinged the World Cup of SPOGOMI.

When I was watching a TV show, they wasere introducing the SPOGOMI World Cup of SPOGOMI.

3rd person plural takes "were". "World Cup of SPOGOMI" is grammatically correct, but "SPOGOMI World Cup" sounds more natural.

When I was watching a TV show, in which they wasere introducing the World Cup of SPOGOMI.

WhenAs I was watching a TV show, they was introducinged the World Cup of SPOGOMI.

When I was watching a TV show, they wasere introducing the World Cup of SPOGOMI.

SPGOMI is a sports version of picking up trash, and I think it's a good idea to have fun and make people think about environmental issues.


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SPGOMI is a sports version of picking up trash, and I think it's a good idea to have fun and make people think about environmental issues.

This sentence is good in terms of grammar. It may sound better to say "I think it's a good idea to turn it into something fun".

SPGOMI is athe sports version of picking up trash, and I think it's a good idea to have fun and make peopbecause people can have fun while thinking about environmental issues.

SPGOMI is a sports version of picking up trash, and I think it's a good idea to have fun and make people thinkaware about environmental issues.

The first World Cup was held in Japan in 2023.


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Teams from each country was trying to win through teamwork and strategy.


Teams from each country wasere trying to win through teamwork and strategy.

Teams from each country wasere trying to win through teamwork and strategy.

Teams from each country wasere trying to win through teamwork and strategy.

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Teams from each country wasere trying to win through teamwork and strategy.

Teams from each country wasere trying to win through teamwork and strategy.

It was more of a sport than I thought.


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The U.K. team won the game.


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The U.K. team won the game.

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Reference site: https://uminohi.jp/spogomi-worldcup/2023/


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