Because I went to Australia infor 3 weeks when. It was so much fun and it changed my world. I went to Australia for 3 weeks. It was so much fun and it changed my world.

Because I went to Australia infor 3 weeks when. It was so fun and changed my world. Because I went to Australia for 3 weeks. It was so fun and changed my world.

Because I went to Australia in 3weeks when Ifor three weeks and it was so fun and changed my world. Because I went to Australia for three weeks and it was so fun and changed my world.

It's okay to start sentences with "because" sometimes, but in this case I would instead make this sentence part of the previous.

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So I want to be friend with more people inaround the world! But studying abroad isn’t easy.cost and: the cost, time, etc… So I thought makeof making friends to useusing SNS. But all most didn’t well. So I want to be friend with more people around the world! But studying abroad isn’t easy: the cost, time, etc… So I thought of making friends using SNS. But all most didn’t well.

So I want to be friend more people in the world!But study abroad isn’t easy.cost and time etc…So I thought make friends to use SNS.But all most didn’t well. So I want to be friend more people in the world!But study abroad isn’t easy.cost and time etc…So I thought make friends to use SNS.But all most didn’t well.

It's okay to start sentences with "so" sometimes, but in this case I would instead make this sentence part of the previous.

So , I want to be friend more people in the world! But study abroad isn’t easy.cost and because of costs, time, etc… So I thought I'd make friends toby useing SNS. But all most didn’all apps I tried didn’t turn out well. So, I want to befriend more people in the world! But study abroad isn’t easy because of costs, time, etc… So I thought I'd make friends by using SNS. But almost all apps I tried didn’t turn out well.

For example, ‘Hello Talk’ is very convenient, but most people are there in order to makeget girlfriends. It's …so tireding. For example, Hello Talk is very convenient, but most people are there in order to get girlfriends. It's so tiring.

For example ‘Hello Talk’ is very convenient but most people are there in order to make a girlfriend …so tireding. For example ‘Hello Talk’ is very convenient but most people are there in order to make a girlfriend …so tiring.

For example, ‘Hello Talk’ is very convenient, but most people areuse the app in order to makeget a girlfriend … so tireding. For example, ‘Hello Talk’ is very convenient, but most people use the app in order to get a girlfriend… so tiring.

Also ‘iInstagram ‘and ‘X (Twitter)’ too. Also Instagram and X (Twitter) too.

Also ‘iInstagram ‘and ‘X(Twitter)’, too. Also ‘Instagram ‘and ‘X(Twitter)’, too.

Also ‘i‘Instagram ‘ and ‘X(Twitter)’ too. ‘Instagram‘ and ‘X(Twitter)’ too.

Makeing a friend is so hard…. Making a friend is so hard.

Make aing friends is so hard… Making friends is so hard…

Makeing a friend is so hard… Making a friend is so hard…

Make aing friends is so hard… Making friends is so hard…

How to make friends of overseas. How to make friends overseas.

How to make friends of overseas How to make friends overseas

How to make friends of overseas How to make friends overseas

I want to make friends of overseas / I want to make overseas friends. I want to make friends overseas / I want to make overseas friends.

I want to make friends of overseas. I want to make friends overseas.

I want to make friends ofrom overseas. I want to make friends from overseas.

I want to make friends of overseas., I want to make friends overseas,

This sentence and the next one would be better as one sentence, so that's why I added a comma and made the next one start with a lowercase letter

I hmade some friends in Australia. I made some friends in Australia.