Jan. 7, 2026
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"You say this wrong." he spoke calmly. He didn't even looked at me. He read a book from the library.
"Do you think?" I answered.
I knew that I said that sentence correctly, but he was a better spiker that anyone in the ship. I didn't want to make him my enemy in that small community. We have only each other and I knew only him. What should I do next? I didn't know yet. He definitely knew, but he didn't want to help me this time.
I sit on the corner of the sofa. Better wasn't sit close to him right now. He must was been angry at me, I thought. One more wrong sentence and we going to be deport from the ship. They have ears everywhere. They heard our conversations and my errors.
"I think I'm going to puke." I whispered. Too much thoughts and problems, and... everything to thinking about.
"Go ahead. But do it in the bathroom, please." he said with the big smile on his mouth. He read almost all book in this whole time. "I wait for you there."
"Maybe I don't felt like this when you're help me this time." I complained. "You're going with me. C'mon, stand up!" I tugged at his sleeve. He laughed but he went with me.
That was not best day to gave a first speech to The Ship Community, but I didn't have choice.
And I regretted this speech faster that I thought.
Speech -
"You sayid this wrong.," he spoke calmly.
He didn't even looked at me.
He was reading a book from the library.
"Do you think?" I answered.
I knew that I had said thate sentence correctly, but he was a better spieaker thatn anyone in the ship.
OR: he was the best speaker on the ship.
I didn't want to make him my enemy in that small community.
We have only each other and I knew only him.
This sentence is a bit confusing. I think you mean: "We had only just met each other, and he was the only person I knew here."
What should I do next?
I didn't know yet.
He definitely knew, but he didn't want to help me this time.
I siat on the corner of the sofa.
Since your previous sentences have been in past sentence.
Better wasn'tnot to sit close to him right now.
He must washave been angry at me, I thought.
One more wrong sentence and weI was going to be deported from the ship.
OR: we were both going to be deported from the ship.
Deported is more for countries, so if it is a ship on the ocean or a space ship a better word might be either "exhiled" or "banished".
They have ears everywhere.
They heard our conversations and my errors.
"I think I'm going to puke.,"
I whispered.
Too muchany thoughts and problems, and... everything to thinking about.
"Go ahead.
But do it in the bathroom, please.," he said with thea big smile on his mouth.
No need to specify it was on his mouth.
He had read almost allthe whole book in this whole time.
"I will wait for you there."
Where is there? If it is where he is already sitting, it's "here". Saying "there" sounds like you mean he will wait in the bathroom.
"Maybe I wouldon't feelt like this whenif you'red help me this time.,"
I have changed this to the conditional form, as it seemed like that's what you meant.
"You're gocoming with me.
C'mon, stand up!"
I tugged at his sleeve.
He laughed but he went with me.
That was not the best day to gaive a first speech to The Ship Community, but I didn't have a choice.
To + verb = alway use the infinitive form of the verb
And I regretted this speech faster thatn I thought.
OR: And I ended up regretting this speech faster than I thought I would.
Feedback
The lack of context was a little confusing, it seems like an excerpt so I understand. Overall excellent work.
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"You say this wrong." he spoke calmly. "You sa |
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He didn't even looked at me. He didn't even look |
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He read a book from the library. He was reading a book from the library. |
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"Do you think?" I answered. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I knew that I said that sentence correctly, but he was a better spiker that anyone in the ship. I knew that I had said th OR: he was the best speaker on the ship. |
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I didn't want to make him my enemy in that small community. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We have only each other and I knew only him. We have only each other and I knew only him. This sentence is a bit confusing. I think you mean: "We had only just met each other, and he was the only person I knew here." |
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What should I do next? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I didn't know yet. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He definitely knew, but he didn't want to help me this time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I sit on the corner of the sofa. I s Since your previous sentences have been in past sentence. |
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Better wasn't sit close to him right now. Better |
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He must was been angry at me, I thought. He must |
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One more wrong sentence and we going to be deport from the ship. One more wrong sentence and OR: we were both going to be deported from the ship. Deported is more for countries, so if it is a ship on the ocean or a space ship a better word might be either "exhiled" or "banished". |
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They have ears everywhere. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They heard our conversations and my errors. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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"I think I'm going to puke." "I think I'm going to puke |
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I whispered. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Too much thoughts and problems, and... everything to thinking about. Too m |
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"Go ahead. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But do it in the bathroom, please." he said with the big smile on his mouth. But do it in the bathroom, please No need to specify it was on his mouth. |
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He read almost all book in this whole time. He had read almost |
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"I wait for you there." "I will wait for you Where is there? If it is where he is already sitting, it's "here". Saying "there" sounds like you mean he will wait in the bathroom. |
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"Maybe I don't felt like this when you're help me this time." "Maybe I would I have changed this to the conditional form, as it seemed like that's what you meant. |
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I complained. |
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"You're going with me. "You're |
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C'mon, stand up!" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I tugged at his sleeve. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He laughed but he went with me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That was not best day to gave a first speech to The Ship Community, but I didn't have choice. That was not the best day to g To + verb = alway use the infinitive form of the verb |
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And I regretted this speech faster that I thought. And I regretted this speech faster tha OR: And I ended up regretting this speech faster than I thought I would. |
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