June 19, 2021
Speaking Test for English Training Course
Our company holds English training programs annually in order to improve employees' language skills. Fortunately, I was chosen as a student of the speaking course this year. It required participants to take the speaking test in order to decide the proper level. This occasion to speak in English in person makes me so excited since there is no chance to have English conversation other than online lessons these days.
There were a teacher and three employees with whom I met for the first time. Even though I don't mean to make fun of the others, their skills aren't enough to get across to the teacher and at the same level as my skills were in my early 20s. They seemed to hesitate to speak English in front of people due to the lack of experiences. Thankfully, they were surprised at and showed respect for my speaking skills, which realized me how I have improved my skills over a few years. In addition, I found myself overcoming such hesitation.
However I can't get enough of my current level. My desire to use English as an effective tool for acquiring a higher position motivates me to keep learning. I assume that giving presentations, sending e-mail, or communicating with foreign staffs requires more sophisticated and wide range of knowledge. I'm looking forward to expanding my knowledge by the training program.
Speaking Test for English Training Course
Our company holds English training programs annually in order to improve employees' language skills.
Fortunately, I was chosen asto be a student ofin the speaking course this year.
It required pParticipants had to take thea speaking test in order to decide the to determine the appropriate/proper level for them.
Unclear what "it" refers to, hence my edits.
This occasion to speak in English in person makes me so excited since there is no chance to have English conversation other than online lessons these days.
More natural: "I was so excited for this opportunity to speak English in person, especially since the only times I get to speak English these days are during online lessons."
There were a teacher and three employees with whom I met for the first time.
Even though I don't mean to make fun of the others, their skills aren't enough to get across to the teacher and at the same level as my skills were in my early 20s.
They seemed to hesitate to speak English in front of people due to their lack of experiences.
Thankfully, they were surprised atby and showed respect for my speaking skills, which realized me howmade me realize that I have improved my skills over athe last few years.
In addition, I found myself overcoming such hesitation.
However, I can't get enough of my current level.
Unclear what this means. "I can't get enough of something" = I love it so much that I can't possibly have too much.
https://idioms.thefreedictionary.com/can%27t+get+enough+of+something
My desire to use English as an effective tool for acquiring a higher position motivates me to keep learning.
I assume that giving presentations, sending e-mail, or communicating with foreign staffs requires a more sophisticated and wide range of knowledge.
I'm looking forward to expanding my knowledge byin the training program.
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Sounds awesome :)
July 5, 2021
Thank you! I've been waiting for someone's correction over the last few weeks.
July 7, 2021
You're welcome! I'm sorry you had to wait that long. In the future when I'm correcting texts, I'll keep an eye out for yours. I think people tend to look at the shorter ones first 🤷🏻♀️
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Speaking Test for English Training Course This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Our company holds English training programs annually in order to improve employees' language skills. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Fortunately, I was chosen as a student of the speaking course this year. Fortunately, I was chosen |
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It required participants to take the speaking test in order to decide the proper level.
Unclear what "it" refers to, hence my edits. |
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This occasion to speak in English in person makes me so excited since there is no chance to have English conversation other than online lessons these days. This occasion to speak in English in person makes me so excited since there is no chance to have English conversation other than online lessons these days. More natural: "I was so excited for this opportunity to speak English in person, especially since the only times I get to speak English these days are during online lessons." |
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There were a teacher and three employees with whom I met for the first time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Even though I don't mean to make fun of the others, their skills aren't enough to get across to the teacher and at the same level as my skills were in my early 20s. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They seemed to hesitate to speak English in front of people due to the lack of experiences. They seemed to hesitate to speak English in front of people due to their lack of experience |
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Thankfully, they were surprised at and showed respect for my speaking skills, which realized me how I have improved my skills over a few years. Thankfully, they were surprised |
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In addition, I found myself overcoming such hesitation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However I can't get enough of my current level. However, I can't get enough of my current level. Unclear what this means. "I can't get enough of something" = I love it so much that I can't possibly have too much. https://idioms.thefreedictionary.com/can%27t+get+enough+of+something |
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My desire to use English as an effective tool for acquiring a higher position motivates me to keep learning. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I assume that giving presentations, sending e-mail, or communicating with foreign staffs requires more sophisticated and wide range of knowledge. I assume that giving presentations, sending e-mail, or communicating with foreign staff |
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I'm looking forward to expanding my knowledge by the training program. I'm looking forward to expanding my knowledge |
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