March 6, 2021
Speaking improvement
Ming did a better job using her vocabulary. That's very clear because she used many cooking-reliable words as she spoke on the improved attempt part. How she stressed words is another improvement I could notice.
Speaking iImprovement
In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., must be capitalized in the title.
Ming did a better job using her vocabulary.
ThaIt's very clear because she used many cooking-reliableated words as she spoke on the improved attempt part.
I don't know what you mean by "improved attempt part".
How she stressed the words is another improvement I could noticed.
This is technically correct, but sounds kind of awkward to me. I would suggest to phrase it something like, "I also noticed the way she stressed the words had improved".
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!
March 6, 2021
Thanks for the feedback :D
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Speaking improvement Speaking In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., must be capitalized in the title. |
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Ming did a better job using her vocabulary. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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That's very clear because she used many cooking-reliable words as she spoke on the improved attempt part.
I don't know what you mean by "improved attempt part". |
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How she stressed words is another improvement I could notice. How she stressed the words is another improvement I This is technically correct, but sounds kind of awkward to me. I would suggest to phrase it something like, "I also noticed the way she stressed the words had improved". |
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