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julien

May 30, 2020

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SpaceX Launch

SpaceX, the company of Elon Musk, is going to lauch to astronauts to the International Space Station. The launch was planed for tuesday but was cancelled for bad weather.

It is the first time since 2011 that American astronauts are going to space from USA and with USA rocket. It is also the first time that a private company will launch astronauts in space.
It is probably the beginning of a new area for space exploration.

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SpaceX Launch

SpaceX, the company of Elon Musk, is going to launch two astronauts to the International Space Station.

the company of Elon Musk - I don't think this is wrong, but it sounds a little unnatural

The launch was originally planned for tTuesday but it was cancelled fordue to bad weather.

It is the first time since 2011 thatwhere American astronauts are going into space from USA soil and with USAan American rocket.

It is also the first time that a private company will launch astronauts in space.

It is probably the beginning of a new area for space exploration.

SpaceX Launch

SpaceX, the company of Elon MuskElon Musk's company, is going to launch two astronauts to the International Space Station.

Wording was switched around to make it sound more natural.

The launch was planed for tTuesday but was cancelled forbecause of bad weather.

It is the first time since 2011 that American astronauts are going to space from USA and with USAthe USA with an American rocket.

It is also the first time that a private company will launch astronauts into space.

It is probably the beginning of a new arera for space exploration.

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julien

May 31, 2020

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Thanks! I am doing so stupid mistakes!!!!

SpaceX Launch


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SpaceX, the company of Elon Musk, is going to lauch to astronauts to the International Space Station.


SpaceX, the company of Elon MuskElon Musk's company, is going to launch two astronauts to the International Space Station.

Wording was switched around to make it sound more natural.

SpaceX, the company of Elon Musk, is going to launch two astronauts to the International Space Station.

the company of Elon Musk - I don't think this is wrong, but it sounds a little unnatural

The launch was planed for tuesday but was cancelled for bad weather.


The launch was planed for tTuesday but was cancelled forbecause of bad weather.

The launch was originally planned for tTuesday but it was cancelled fordue to bad weather.

It is the first time since 2011 that American astronauts are going to space from USA and with USA rocket.


It is the first time since 2011 that American astronauts are going to space from USA and with USAthe USA with an American rocket.

It is the first time since 2011 thatwhere American astronauts are going into space from USA soil and with USAan American rocket.

It is also the first time that a private company will launch astronauts in space.


It is also the first time that a private company will launch astronauts into space.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It is probably the beginning of a new area for space exploration.


It is probably the beginning of a new arera for space exploration.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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