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TYama

Dec. 17, 2024

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I'm going to a rural area university so it's far from my hometown. I will be back there this winter break but I'm really tired to buy souvenirs for my friends. I go back there twice a year so I'm buying something every single time but It's been 5 years! Do I really need to get something for them? I think I can't meet them even if I live in my hometown. I don't mean that I don't want to buy them, just I'm tired of researching to buy different stuff every time I go back. There is no more local stuff! I don't want them to expect anything from me.

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sSouvenir

I'm going to university in a rural area university so it's far from my hometown.

I will be back there this winter break but I'm reallytoo tired to buy souvenirs for my friends.

I go back there twice a year, so I'm buying something every single time, but Iit's been 5 years!

Do I really need to get something for them?

I think I can't meet them even if I live in my hometown.

I don't mean that I don't want to buy them souvenirs, just I'm tired of researching to buy different stuffthings to buy every time I go back.

There is no more local stuff!

I don't want them to expect anything from me.

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The souvenir gifting culture seems really tough in Japan

sSouvenir

I'm going to a rural area university so it'n university in a rural area which is far from my hometown.

I will be back there during this winter break but I'm really tired tof buying souvenirs for my friends.

I go back there twice a year so I'mand I buying something every single time but It'and it’s been 5 years!

Do I really need to get something for them?

I think I can'don’t meet them even if I live in my hometown.

I don't mean that I don't want to buy them, jusa souvenir, just that I'm tired of researching to buy different stuff every time I go back.

There is no more local stuff!

I don't want them to expect anything from me.

I'm going to a rural area universityuniversity in a rural area, so it's far from my hometown.

It's more natural to say "I go to a university" rather than "I am going to a university."

I will be back there this winter break but I'm really tired tof buying souvenirs for my friends.

I go back there twice a year so I'm buying something every single time -- but It's been 5 years!

I would add a hyphen or a comma to break up the sentence.

I think I can't meet them even if I lived in my hometown.

I don't mean that I don't want to buy them, I'm just I'm tired of researching to buy different stuff to buy every time I go back.

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Great job :) And I know the feeling!

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sSouvenir

I'm going to a rural area university so it's far from my hometown.


I'm going to a rural area universityuniversity in a rural area, so it's far from my hometown.

It's more natural to say "I go to a university" rather than "I am going to a university."

I'm going to a rural area university so it'n university in a rural area which is far from my hometown.

I'm going to university in a rural area university so it's far from my hometown.

I will be back there this winter break but I'm really tired to buy souvenirs for my friends.


I will be back there this winter break but I'm really tired tof buying souvenirs for my friends.

I will be back there during this winter break but I'm really tired tof buying souvenirs for my friends.

I will be back there this winter break but I'm reallytoo tired to buy souvenirs for my friends.

Do I really need to get something for them?


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I go back there twice a year so I'm buying something every single time but It's been 5 years!


I go back there twice a year so I'm buying something every single time -- but It's been 5 years!

I would add a hyphen or a comma to break up the sentence.

I go back there twice a year so I'mand I buying something every single time but It'and it’s been 5 years!

I go back there twice a year, so I'm buying something every single time, but Iit's been 5 years!

I think I can't meet them even if I live in my hometown.


I think I can't meet them even if I lived in my hometown.

I think I can'don’t meet them even if I live in my hometown.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don't mean that I don't want to buy them, just I'm tired of researching to buy different stuff every time I go back.


I don't mean that I don't want to buy them, I'm just I'm tired of researching to buy different stuff to buy every time I go back.

I don't mean that I don't want to buy them, jusa souvenir, just that I'm tired of researching to buy different stuff every time I go back.

I don't mean that I don't want to buy them souvenirs, just I'm tired of researching to buy different stuffthings to buy every time I go back.

There is no more local stuff!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don't want them to expect anything from me.


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