Nov. 13, 2021
Sorrow
When I had knew that I was refused by my first university target after the College Entrance Examination, I was a little sad. I stayed alone at my room. Soon after, I thought I should cry, because most people would do that when they experienced something like this, even though I didn't really want to. However, I cried. Minutes later, I felt stupid and tired, so I stopped.
Kowing what had happened, two of my friends invited me to spend the night with them. They didn't say too much, because they had also failed. They just letted me play their computer because I didn't own one. What's funny was, they treated me like a sad puppy who had just lost its bone. Actually, I wasn't depressed as they assumed, because my second goal school accepted me. I was even a little happy that I didn't have to go back to study one more year and take the exam again, though my second goal school wasn't my favourite. The terror of studying one more year was much more seirous than going to a school I didn't know at all. However, they were so hospitable that I thought I should be sad as they thought, otherwise I would let them down. To be honest, I din't know about the Internet at that time, so I just played QQ, which was similar to MSN. I applied a new account, and added some strangers as friends, then kept telling told them my failure and sorrow. Some of them didn't reply me at all, and I didn't have a happy talk with none of them. I got bored but I found out that they had gotten alseep. Since they lived in a middle school, and the gate was closed during the night. We didn't have the key of the gate, so I had to stay up all night with the computer. It was so sad.
Looking back my life, I often did something I thought that I should do, but eventually I didn't want to do. Most of the time, 'What I should' was something that I thought it was normal standard in this society. If I didn't do that, I would be abnormal. I was afraid to be abnormal at that time. However, now I realise that there is no standard of emotion, and I should care my true feelings instead of worrying about being abnormal, which is bad for my mental health.
Sorrow
When I had klearnewd that I was refushad been rejected by my first-choice university target afterafter taking the College Entrance Examination, I was a little sad.
I stayed alone atin my room.
Soon after, I thought I should cry, because that's what most people would do that when they experienced something like this, even though I didn't really want to.
However, I cried anyways.
Minutes later, I felt stupid and tired, so I stopped.
Knowing what had happened, two of my friends invited me to spend the night with them.
They didn't say too much, because they had also failbeen rejected.
They just letted me play on their computer, because I didn't own one.
What's funny was, they treated me like a sad puppy who had just lost its bone.
Actually, I wasn'tI wasn't actually as depressed as they assumed, because my second goal school accepted meI had been accepted to my second-choice school.
I was even a little happy that I didn't have to go back to study one more year and take the exam again, although my second goal school wasn't my favourite.
The terrofear of studying one more year was much more seirious than that of going to a school I didn't know at all.
However, they were so hospitable that, so I thought that I should be sad as they thought I was, otherwise I would let them down.
To be honest, I didn't know about the Internet at that time, so I just playedhung out on QQ, which was similar to MSN.
I applied afor new account, and added some strangers as friends, then kept telling told them about my failure and sorrow.
Some of them didn't reply me at all, and I didn't have a happy talk with none of themcheerful conversation with a one.
I got bored but I found out that theyand realized that my friends had gottfallen alsleep.
Since they lived in a middle school, and the gate was closed during the night.
We didn't have the key tof the gate, so I had to stay up all night with the computer.
It was sovery sad.
Looking back my life, I often did somethe things I thought that I should do, but eventually I didn'tnot necessarily things that I wanted to do.
Most of the time, 'W"what I should' do" was something that I thought it was normal standard in this societysocially acceptable.
If I didn't do thatose things, I would be abnormal.
I was afraid to be abnormal at that time.
However, now I realise that there is no standard of emotion, and I should carelisten to my true feelings instead of worrying about being abnormal, which is bad for my mental health.
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Nov. 14, 2021
However, now I realise that there is no standard of emotion, and I should carelisten to my true feelings instead of worrying about being abnormal, which is bad for my mental health.
standard of emotion:情感标准，就是什么事该有什么情感。
mental health:精神健康。
Nov. 14, 2021
Thank you.
Nov. 14, 2021
那应该说 “There's no 'right' way to feel"
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Sorrow This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When I had knew that I was refused by my first university target after the College Entrance Examination, I was a little sad. When I |
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I stayed alone at my room. I stayed alone |
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Soon after, I thought I should cry, because most people would do that when they experienced something like this, even though I didn't really want to.
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However, I cried. However, I cried anyways. |
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Minutes later, I felt stupid and tired, so I stopped. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Kowing what had happened, two of my friends invited me to spend the night with them. Knowing what had happened, two of my friends invited me to spend the night with them. |
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They didn't say too much, because they had also failed. They didn't say too much, because they had also |
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They just letted me play their computer because I didn't own one. They just let |
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What's funny was, they treated me like a sad puppy who had just lost its bone. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Actually, I wasn't depressed as they assumed, because my second goal school accepted me.
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I was even a little happy that I didn't have to go back to study one more year and take the exam again, though my second goal school wasn't my favourite. I was even a little happy that I didn't have to go back to study one more year and take the exam again, although my second goal school wasn't my favourite. |
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The terror of studying one more year was much more seirous than going to a school I didn't know at all. The |
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However, they were so hospitable that I thought I should be sad as they thought, otherwise I would let them down. However, they were so hospitable |
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To be honest, I din't know about the Internet at that time, so I just played QQ, which was similar to MSN. To be honest, I didn't know about the Internet at that time, so I just |
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I applied a new account, and added some strangers as friends, then kept telling told them my failure and sorrow. I applied |
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Some of them didn't reply me at all, and I didn't have a happy talk with none of them. Some of them didn't reply me at all, and I didn't have a |
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I got bored but I found out that they had gotten alseep. I got bored |
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Since they lived in a middle school, and the gate was closed during the night. Since they lived in a middle school, |
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We didn't have the key of the gate, so I had to stay up all night with the computer. We didn't have the key to |
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It was so sad. It was |
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Looking back my life, I often did something I thought that I should do, but eventually I didn't want to do. Looking back my life, I often did |
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Most of the time, 'What I should' was something that I thought it was normal standard in this society. Most of the time, |
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If I didn't do that, I would be abnormal. If I didn't do th |
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I was afraid to be abnormal at that time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, now I realise that there is no standard of emotion, and I should care my true feelings instead of worrying about being abnormal, which is bad for my mental health. However, now I realise that there is no standard of emotion, and I should 感情水平？ |
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