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Aug. 27, 2025

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Sorghum Plant

Chinese sorghum is a popular crop planted in my hometown. It is not a staple crop in my area, and its grains don't taste good either, but it used to be a main source for farmers' livelihoods.

Chinese sorghum is very tall. It is taller than people. It's usually planted at the beginning of July and harvested at the end of October, or the beginning of November.

When I was a child, I heard a lot of scary stories related to the sorghum fields.

If sorghum is planted on two sides of a countryside road, after it grows to its full height, it always feels scary to walk along the road. You never know what will jump out from the sorghum fields. Beasts? Ghosts? Or bad guys?

However, Chinese sorghum is very useful. Its leaves can be used to feed livestock, and its stalks can be used to make mats. The sorghum stalk mats can be used to build houses, make beds and walls, and can be used to dry some agricultural products outside.

The sorghum panicles can be used to make brooms and a kind of cleaning tool used in the kitchen. The sorghum peduncles can be used to make pot lids, steamed bun baskets and other daily - use items. So it seems all parts of the sorghum are treasures.

However, people in my area rarely plant Chinese sorghum nowadays. I guess the reason might be that Chinese sorghum is only a coarse grain, and since living conditions have improved a lot, they don't need to eat sorghum or make their daily - use items from sorghum.

I saw some farmers still planting sorghum, but it is not the one farmers planted in the past. Instead, it's a kind of sorghum that is shorter than the one in the past. They plant the sorghum for alcohol factories to make liquor.

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Sorghum Plant

Chinese sSorghum is a popular crop planted in my hometown.

It is not a staple crop in my area, and i. Its grains don't taste good either, but it used to be a main source for farmers' livelihoods.

Chinese sorghum is very tall.

It is taller than a lot of people.

It's usually planted atin the beginning of July, and harvested at the end of October, or the beginning of November.

When I was a child, I heard a lot of scary stories related to the sorghum fields.

If sorghum is planted on two sides of a countryside road, after it growsing to its full height, it always feels scary to walk along the road.

You never know what will jump out from the sorghum fields.

Beasts?

Ghosts?

Or bBad guys?

However, Chinese sorghum is very useful.

Its leaves can be used to feed livestock, and its stalks can be used to make mats.

The sorghum stalk mats can be used to build houses, make in addition to beds and walls, and ca. It can even be used to dry some agricultural products outside.

The sorghum panicles can be used to make brooms and a kind of cleaning tool used in the kitchen.

The sorghum peduncles can be used to make pot lids, steamed bun baskets, and other daily - useeveryday items.

So iIt seems that all parts of the sorghum are treasuresuseful.

However, people in my area rarely plant Chinese sorghum nowadays.

I guess the reason might be that Chinese sorghum is only a coarse grain, and s. Since living conditions have improved a lot, they don't need to eat sorghum or make their daily - use items from sorghumit.

I saw some farmers who are still planting sorghum, but it is not the one farmerskind that farmers who have planted it in the past used.

Instead, it's a different kind of sorghum that is shorter than the one in the pastbefore.

They plant the sorghum for alcohol factories to make liquor.

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However, Chinese sorghum is very useful.


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Its leaves can be used to feed livestock, and its stalks can be used to make mats.


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They plant the sorghum for alcohol factories to make liquor.


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Sorghum Plant


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Chinese sorghum is a popular crop planted in my hometown.


Chinese sSorghum is a popular crop planted in my hometown.

It is not a staple crop in my area, and its grains don't taste good either, but it used to be a main source for farmers' livelihoods.


It is not a staple crop in my area, and i. Its grains don't taste good either, but it used to be a main source for farmers' livelihoods.

Chinese sorghum is very tall.


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It is taller than people.


It is taller than a lot of people.

It's usually planted at the beginning of July and harvested at the end of October, or the beginning of November.


It's usually planted atin the beginning of July, and harvested at the end of October, or the beginning of November.

When I was a child, I heard a lot of scary stories related to the sorghum fields.


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If sorghum is planted on two sides of a countryside road, after it grows to its full height, it always feels scary to walk along the road.


If sorghum is planted on two sides of a countryside road, after it growsing to its full height, it always feels scary to walk along the road.

You never know what will jump out from the sorghum fields.


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Beasts?


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Ghosts?


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Or bad guys?


Or bBad guys?

The sorghum stalk mats can be used to build houses, make beds and walls, and can be used to dry some agricultural products outside.


The sorghum stalk mats can be used to build houses, make in addition to beds and walls, and ca. It can even be used to dry some agricultural products outside.

The sorghum panicles can be used to make brooms and a kind of cleaning tool used in the kitchen.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The sorghum peduncles can be used to make pot lids, steamed bun baskets and other daily - use items.


The sorghum peduncles can be used to make pot lids, steamed bun baskets, and other daily - useeveryday items.

So it seems all parts of the sorghum are treasures.


So iIt seems that all parts of the sorghum are treasuresuseful.

However, people in my area rarely plant Chinese sorghum nowadays.


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I guess the reason might be that Chinese sorghum is only a coarse grain, and since living conditions have improved a lot, they don't need to eat sorghum or make their daily - use items from sorghum.


I guess the reason might be that Chinese sorghum is only a coarse grain, and s. Since living conditions have improved a lot, they don't need to eat sorghum or make their daily - use items from sorghumit.

I saw some farmers still planting sorghum, but it is not the one farmers planted in the past.


I saw some farmers who are still planting sorghum, but it is not the one farmerskind that farmers who have planted it in the past used.

Instead, it's a kind of sorghum that is shorter than the one in the past.


Instead, it's a different kind of sorghum that is shorter than the one in the pastbefore.

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