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May 1, 2021

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呪術廻戦

Haven’t comments on TV, movie…topics for some time.

Recently watched many animate most of them are really good.

The above one was the best.

Graph quality, story, creatively…

I want to give 100 marks but I can’t!

There was just one tiny “style” that makes me not happy.

“Call Back Style”

When any character mention something in past.

That moment will be showing again.

So, the problem in this animate was that style has been used too often.

A 30 minutes episode becomes almost 20 minutes.

Because that 10 minutes are come from previous episodes.

I am sorry to say such honest comment.

But I do want the production team knows my feeling at the same time.

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呪術廻戦


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An English text ideally needs an English heading!

Graph quality, story, creatively…


Gbecause of its good graph quality, story, creativelity… because of its good graph quality, story, creativity…

Haven’t comments on TV, movie…topics for some time.


HI haven't commentsed on TV, movie…topics for some time. I haven't commented on TV, movie…topics for some time.

Recently watched many animate most of them are really good.


RI recently watched many animate m. Most of them awere really good. I recently watched many animate. Most of them were really good.

By "animate" do you mean "animations"

The above one was the best.


The one noted above one was the best. The one noted above was the best

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I want to give 100 marks but I can’t!


I want to give 100 marks but I can’t! I want to give 100 marks but I can’t!

or: I want to give full marks but can't.

There was just one tiny “style” that makes me not happy.


There was just one tiny “style” that makes me not happyissue that I didn't like. There was just one tiny “style” issue that I didn't like.

“Call Back Style”


“Call Back Style” “Call Back Style”

Seems correct but please also consider "Call-Back style". The hyphen [ - ] shows that the two joined words are being used as an adjective to describe the style. This helps to prevent confusion - maybe not so much here but could help in other instances where two words are being used to provide a "one word/one idea" description. Let me know whether you would like for me to explain more about this.

When any character mention something in past.


WThis happens when any character mentions something in past. This happens when any character mentions something in past.

I mention you mention he/ she/ it mentions

That moment will be showing again.


That moment will be showing again. That moment will be showing again.

Consider also: "That moment will be repeated."

So, the problem in this animate was that style has been used too often.


So, the problem in this animateion was that this style hwas being been used too often. So, the problem in this animation was that this style was being been used too often.

A 30 minutes episode becomes almost 20 minutes.


A 30 -minutes episode becomesis really one of almost 20 minutes. A 30-minute episode is really one of almost 20 minutes.

Because that 10 minutes are come from previous episodes.


Because thatThose extra 10 minutes are come from previous episodes. Those extra 10 minutes come from previous episodes.

that is those are

I am sorry to say such honest comment.


I am sorry to saymake such an honest comment. I am sorry to make such an honest comment.

But I do want the production team knows my feeling at the same time.


But, at the same time, I do want the production team to knows my feeling at the same times. But, at the same time, I do want the production team to know my feelings.

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